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假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom来信询问你周末的计划，你打算去当地儿童医院参与志愿服务。请你给Tom写一封回信，告诉他你的志愿计划及你想做这份志愿工作的原因。
要求:1. 内容贴合“帮助有需要的人”主题，说明志愿服务的时间、具体内容及阐述参与志愿服务的意义;2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;3. 词数不少于80(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear from you. I'd like to tell you about my plan for this weekend.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
要求:1. 内容贴合“帮助有需要的人”主题，说明志愿服务的时间、具体内容及阐述参与志愿服务的意义;2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;3. 词数不少于80(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear from you. I'd like to tell you about my plan for this weekend.
I plan to do some volunteer work in the Children's Hospital near my home this Saturday morning. I will take some storybooks and painting tools there. I want to read interesting stories to the sick kids and teach them to draw simple pictures to cheer them up. I also hope to organise some small games to raise their spirits. I decide to do this because these kids are in great need of care and company. And I think helping others can make me learn to care for people around me and become a more responsible person. It's a meaningful experience for me.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
I plan to do some volunteer work in the Children's Hospital near my home this Saturday morning. I will take some storybooks and painting tools there. I want to read interesting stories to the sick kids and teach them to draw simple pictures to cheer them up. I also hope to organise some small games to raise their spirits. I decide to do this because these kids are in great need of care and company. And I think helping others can make me learn to care for people around me and become a more responsible person. It's a meaningful experience for me.
I plan to do some volunteer work in the Children's Hospital near my home this Saturday morning. I will take some storybooks and painting tools there. I want to read interesting stories to the sick kids and teach them to draw simple pictures to cheer them up. I also hope to organise some small games to raise their spirits. I decide to do this because these kids are in great need of care and company. And I think helping others can make me learn to care for people around me and become a more responsible person. It's a meaningful experience for me.
解析
【分析】
本题要求给笔友Tom写回信，告知周末去儿童医院做志愿的计划及原因。解题思路：1. 明确志愿的时间、地点，贴合“帮助有需要的人”主题；2. 具体说明志愿内容，如带故事书、绘画工具，为生病孩子讲故事、教画画、组织小游戏等；3. 阐述参与志愿的意义，从孩子的需求和自身成长两方面说明；4. 注意不出现真实信息，词数达标，语言通顺。
【解析】
首先点明志愿的时间和地点：I plan to do some volunteer work in the Children's Hospital near my home this Saturday morning. 接着描述具体志愿内容：I will take some storybooks and painting tools there. I want to read interesting stories to the sick kids and teach them to draw simple pictures to cheer them up. I also hope to organise some small games to raise their spirits. 最后说明参与原因：I decide to do this because these kids are in great need of care and company. And I think helping others can make me learn to care for people around me and become a more responsible person. It's a meaningful experience for me.
【答案】
I plan to do some volunteer work in the Children's Hospital near my home this Saturday morning. I will take some storybooks and painting tools there. I want to read interesting stories to the sick kids and teach them to draw simple pictures to cheer them up. I also hope to organise some small games to raise their spirits. I decide to do this because these kids are in great need of care and company. And I think helping others can make me learn to care for people around me and become a more responsible person. It's a meaningful experience for me.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、志愿活动主题表达、意义阐述
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，内容完整，涵盖了志愿计划的时间、具体内容及参与意义，贴合“帮助有需要的人”的主题，语言表达流畅，符合英语书信的格式规范，是一篇合格的回信。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求给笔友Tom写回信，告知周末去儿童医院做志愿的计划及原因。解题思路：1. 明确志愿的时间、地点，贴合“帮助有需要的人”主题；2. 具体说明志愿内容，如带故事书、绘画工具，为生病孩子讲故事、教画画、组织小游戏等；3. 阐述参与志愿的意义，从孩子的需求和自身成长两方面说明；4. 注意不出现真实信息，词数达标，语言通顺。
【解析】
首先点明志愿的时间和地点：I plan to do some volunteer work in the Children's Hospital near my home this Saturday morning. 接着描述具体志愿内容：I will take some storybooks and painting tools there. I want to read interesting stories to the sick kids and teach them to draw simple pictures to cheer them up. I also hope to organise some small games to raise their spirits. 最后说明参与原因：I decide to do this because these kids are in great need of care and company. And I think helping others can make me learn to care for people around me and become a more responsible person. It's a meaningful experience for me.
【答案】
I plan to do some volunteer work in the Children's Hospital near my home this Saturday morning. I will take some storybooks and painting tools there. I want to read interesting stories to the sick kids and teach them to draw simple pictures to cheer them up. I also hope to organise some small games to raise their spirits. I decide to do this because these kids are in great need of care and company. And I think helping others can make me learn to care for people around me and become a more responsible person. It's a meaningful experience for me.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、志愿活动主题表达、意义阐述
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，内容完整，涵盖了志愿计划的时间、具体内容及参与意义，贴合“帮助有需要的人”的主题，语言表达流畅，符合英语书信的格式规范，是一篇合格的回信。
【难度系数】
0.7
