经典例题
(2025·江苏淮安一模改编)不惧碾作尘，无意苦争春。张桂梅的精神值得我们学习，她的行为值得我们敬佩。在你的成长路上，也一定出现过值得你敬佩的人。这个人可能是你的父母、老师或你的朋友……你们学校正在组织英语作文比赛，请根据图示要点，以“The person I respect”为题，写一篇短文参赛。

【要求】
1. 不得在作文中出现学生的真实姓名和学校名称。
2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。
The person I respect

The person I respect
My mother is the person I respect most. She is an ordinary office worker, and she is a kind warm-hearted woman who always wears a big smile.
Last year, our elderly neighbour hurt his leg and could hardly look after himself. My mother volunteered to cook meals for him and helped him walk around after work every day. She kept doing this for over two months and never complained.
She teaches me to be always ready to help people in need. I learn to pass warmth to everyone around me from her.

【分析】这是一道要点式英语写作题，需围绕“The person I respect”主题，结合图示的三个核心要点（人物介绍、敬佩原因、人物影响）完成短文。首先确定写作对象，接着按要点依次展开：介绍人物的职业、性格、外貌；叙述具体的敬佩事例；最后说明人物对自己的影响，同时要满足词数、无真实信息等要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开篇点明尊敬的人物，介绍其基本信息（职业、性格、外貌）；2. 列举具体事例体现敬佩的原因，需具体可感；3. 阐述该人物对自己的积极影响，升华主题。注意语句连贯，词数约80，不出现真实姓名和学校。
【答案】The person I respect
My mother is the person I respect most. She is an ordinary office worker, and she is a kind warm-hearted woman who always wears a big smile.
Last year, our elderly neighbour hurt his leg and could hardly look after himself. My mother volunteered to cook meals for him and helped him walk around after work every day. She kept doing this for over two months and never complained.
She teaches me to be always ready to help people in need. I learn to pass warmth to everyone around me from her.
【知识点】英语写作、要点式作文
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，严格遵循图示要点展开，结构清晰，事例具体生动，语言简洁通顺，准确传达了尊敬的缘由与人物的影响，符合参赛作文的规范。
【难度系数】0.6