经典例题
学校英语俱乐部举行演讲比赛，题为“My Best Friend”。请你根据所给要点提示，用英语完成一篇70词左右的演讲稿。
【要点提示】1. Mandy，14岁，七年级(2)班。
2. 现在与父母住在徐州……
3. 戴眼镜……
4. 最喜欢的学科是英语……
5. 周末她喜欢……，我们经常……
【要求】1. 文章需包括所有要点提示，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当发挥，使文章完整，内容充实。
My Best Friend
My best friend is Mandy.

She is 14 years old and she is in Class 2, Grade 7. Now she lives in Xuzhou with her parents. She is a kind girl and wears a pair of glasses. Her favourite subject is English, because she thinks it is very fun to learn different languages. At weekends, she likes reading storybooks. We often go to the city library together and always have a great time.

【分析】写这篇演讲稿时，需先承接已给的开头“My best friend is Mandy.”，再按要点依次展开内容：首先介绍Mandy的年龄、班级；接着说明她的居住情况；然后描述她的外貌特征；再点明她最喜欢的学科及简单原因；最后补充她的周末活动和“我们”的共同活动，确保所有要点都被涵盖，语句连贯，词数符合要求，适当发挥使文章内容完整充实。
【解析】根据要点提示，依次组织语言：先介绍Mandy的基本信息（14岁，七年级2班），再说明她和父母住在徐州，接着描述她戴眼镜的外貌，然后说明她最喜欢的学科是英语并补充简单原因，最后写她周末喜欢读故事书，“我们”常一起去市图书馆玩，确保语句通顺，词数在70左右，符合要求。
【答案】She is 14 years old and she is in Class 2, Grade 7. Now she lives in Xuzhou with her parents. She is a kind girl and wears a pair of glasses. Her favourite subject is English, because she thinks it is very fun to learn different languages. At weekends, she likes reading storybooks. We often go to the city library together and always have a great time.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点式作文、人物描述
【点评】该作文完整覆盖所有要点，语句通顺连贯，适当添加了合理的原因和共同活动，内容充实，符合演讲稿的要求，词数达标。
【难度系数】0.3

写作指导
1.用第三人称来写。 2.时态为“一般现在时”。 3.写出与人物相关的信息，并适当发挥。
写作模板

My best friend is Mandy. She is 14 years old. She is a tall and slim girl with long black hair. She is a Grade 7 student in a local middle school.
Now she lives in Xuzhou with her parents. Her parents work in a hospital in this city. She thinks it's interesting to learn Maths, and she is very good at the subject. All her teachers and classmates get along well with her.
At the weekend, she likes doing sport. She is a member of the school volleyball team. We often play volleyball together after finishing our homework, and we always have great fun.

【分析】首先明确写作要求：使用第三人称、一般现在时，结构分为开篇点题、详细介绍、收篇结尾三部分。第一步开篇点题，需点明好友Mandy的身份、年龄、外貌、身份等基本信息；第二步详细介绍，补充居住情况、家人情况、兴趣学科等细节；第三步收篇结尾，说明周末活动及与好友的互动，确保内容连贯，符合时态要求。
【解析】按照写作结构，结合要求补充合理细节：1. 开篇点题：介绍Mandy的基本信息（年龄、外貌、身份）；2. 详细介绍：补充居住地点、父母工作、擅长的学科；3. 收篇结尾：补充周末的运动爱好及和“我”的活动，全程使用第三人称和一般现在时，语句通顺。
【答案】My best friend is Mandy. She is 14 years old. She is a tall and slim girl with long black hair. She is a Grade 7 student in a local middle school.
Now she lives in Xuzhou with her parents. Her parents work in a hospital in this city. She thinks it's interesting to learn Maths, and she is very good at the subject. All her teachers and classmates get along well with her.
At the weekend, she likes doing sport. She is a member of the school volleyball team. We often play volleyball together after finishing our homework, and we always have great fun.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、一般现在时运用、第三人称表达
【点评】该写作符合题目要求，结构清晰（开篇点题-详细介绍-收篇结尾），时态正确，内容充实，细节合理，符合初中英语写作的规范。
【难度系数】0.6