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假设你是Frank，你的英国笔友Tom发来邮件说想了解你的家人。请你根据下面的全家福给他回一封邮件，介绍一下你的家人，60词左右。时态：一般现在时 主题：介绍家人
体裁：应用文 人称：第一、第三人称
[写作提纲]
引入话题→Here’s a photo of my family.
介绍家人→{
1.成员：These are...;This is...
2.外貌、性格：He/She looks...;He/She is...
3.爱好：He/She likes/loves...;His/Her favourite...is...
}
表达情感→I love my family.
[范文展示]
Dear Tom,
I'm happy to tell you about my family. Here's a photo of my family. You can see six people in the photo.
These are my grandparents. They often do sports in the morning. This is my father. He looks tall. That is my mother. Her hobby is reading books and she has lots of English books. Look! My sister is on the right of my father. She is quiet with long hair. She likes playing the piano. And the boy next to my mother is me. My favourite sport is football. I often have a lot of fun playing football with my father.
This is my happy family. I love my family.
Please write to tell me about your family.
Yours,
Frank
假设你是Frank，你的英国笔友Tom发来邮件说想了解你的家人。请你根据下面的全家福给他回一封邮件，介绍一下你的家人，60词左右。时态：一般现在时 主题：介绍家人
体裁：应用文 人称：第一、第三人称
[写作提纲]
引入话题→Here’s a photo of my family.
介绍家人→{
1.成员：These are...;This is...
2.外貌、性格：He/She looks...;He/She is...
3.爱好：He/She likes/loves...;His/Her favourite...is...
}
表达情感→I love my family.
[范文展示]
Dear Tom,
I'm happy to tell you about my family. Here's a photo of my family. You can see six people in the photo.
These are my grandparents. They often do sports in the morning. This is my father. He looks tall. That is my mother. Her hobby is reading books and she has lots of English books. Look! My sister is on the right of my father. She is quiet with long hair. She likes playing the piano. And the boy next to my mother is me. My favourite sport is football. I often have a lot of fun playing football with my father.
This is my happy family. I love my family.
Please write to tell me about your family.
Yours,
Frank
答案
Here's a photo of my family. There are six people in it. These are my grandparents, they are kind and love taking a walk after dinner. This is my tall father and nice mother. The girl is my sister, she likes drawing. The little boy next to my mom is me. I love my warm family very much.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语应用文写作题，要求以Frank的身份给笔友Tom写邮件介绍家人，需结合全家福图片信息，60词左右。解题思路：1. 开头用全家福引入话题，说明家庭人数；2. 按顺序介绍祖父母、父母、姐妹、自己，简单提及性格或爱好；3. 结尾表达对家庭的喜爱，全程使用一般现在时，正确切换第一、第三人称。
【解析】
写作时遵循以下步骤：1. 开头写Here's a photo of my family. 引出全家福，接着说明There are six people in it. 对应图片人数；2. 依次介绍家庭成员：These are my grandparents... This is my father and mother... The girl is my sister... The little boy is me，简单补充性格（kind）、爱好（taking a walk, drawing）；3. 结尾表达I love my warm family very much. 控制字数符合要求，时态正确。
【答案】
Here's a photo of my family. There are six people in it. These are my grandparents, they are kind and love taking a walk after dinner. This is my tall father and nice mother. The girl is my sister, she likes drawing. The little boy next to my mom is me. I love my warm family very much.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、人物介绍、一般现在时
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语基础写作能力，要求结合图片信息完成家人介绍，语言简洁，符合邮件格式，难度适中，能有效考查学生的语言应用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语应用文写作题，要求以Frank的身份给笔友Tom写邮件介绍家人，需结合全家福图片信息，60词左右。解题思路：1. 开头用全家福引入话题，说明家庭人数；2. 按顺序介绍祖父母、父母、姐妹、自己，简单提及性格或爱好；3. 结尾表达对家庭的喜爱，全程使用一般现在时，正确切换第一、第三人称。
【解析】
写作时遵循以下步骤：1. 开头写Here's a photo of my family. 引出全家福，接着说明There are six people in it. 对应图片人数；2. 依次介绍家庭成员：These are my grandparents... This is my father and mother... The girl is my sister... The little boy is me，简单补充性格（kind）、爱好（taking a walk, drawing）；3. 结尾表达I love my warm family very much. 控制字数符合要求，时态正确。
【答案】
Here's a photo of my family. There are six people in it. These are my grandparents, they are kind and love taking a walk after dinner. This is my tall father and nice mother. The girl is my sister, she likes drawing. The little boy next to my mom is me. I love my warm family very much.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、人物介绍、一般现在时
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语基础写作能力，要求结合图片信息完成家人介绍，语言简洁，符合邮件格式，难度适中，能有效考查学生的语言应用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
写作应用
假如你是李明，你校英语俱乐部正在开展“寻找最美全家福”的征集活动。请你根据以下提示问题介绍你的全家福。
1. How many people are there in your family?
2. What do they look like? 3. What are their hobbies?
Something more about your family photo.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数60左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello,I'm Li Ming. Here is a photo of my family.
假如你是李明，你校英语俱乐部正在开展“寻找最美全家福”的征集活动。请你根据以下提示问题介绍你的全家福。
1. How many people are there in your family?
2. What do they look like? 3. What are their hobbies?
Something more about your family photo.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数60左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello,I'm Li Ming. Here is a photo of my family.
There are three people in my family—my father, my mother and me. My father is tall and handsome. He likes playing basketball in his free time and he plays it very well.
My mother is a teacher. She has long black hair. She likes growing flowers and our home is always full of flowers.
I'm a student. I like playing football and I often play with my classmates after school.
I have a happy family and I love it very much.
答案
One possible version:
Hello,I'm Li Ming. Here is a photo of my family.
There are three people in my family—my father, my mother and me. My father is tall and handsome. He likes playing basketball in his free time and he plays it very well. My mother is a teacher. She has long black hair. She likes growing flowers and our home is always full of flowers. I'm a student. I like playing football and I often play with my classmates after school.
I have a happy family and I love it very much.
Hello,I'm Li Ming. Here is a photo of my family.
There are three people in my family—my father, my mother and me. My father is tall and handsome. He likes playing basketball in his free time and he plays it very well. My mother is a teacher. She has long black hair. She likes growing flowers and our home is always full of flowers. I'm a student. I like playing football and I often play with my classmates after school.
I have a happy family and I love it very much.
解析
【分析】本题要求介绍全家福，需紧扣提示的三个核心问题（家庭成员数量、外貌特征、爱好），补充全家福相关内容，结合已给出的开头，组织符合要求的短文，注意词数控制在60左右，不得透露个人真实信息，语言通顺自然。
【解析】首先说明家庭成员数量为3人（父母和自己），分别描述父亲的外貌（高且帅）、爱好（打篮球），母亲的外貌（长黑发）、爱好（种花），自己的身份（学生）、爱好（踢足球），最后表达对家庭的喜爱，覆盖所有提示要点，符合写作要求。
【答案】Hello,I'm Li Ming. Here is a photo of my family.
There are three people in my family—my father, my mother and me. My father is tall and handsome. He likes playing basketball in his free time and he plays it very well. My mother is a teacher. She has long black hair. She likes growing flowers and our home is always full of flowers. I'm a student. I like playing football and I often play with my classmates after school.
I have a happy family and I love it very much.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语句子表达
【点评】本题考查学生根据提示完成介绍性短文的写作能力，紧扣要点，难度适中，能有效锻炼学生的语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先说明家庭成员数量为3人（父母和自己），分别描述父亲的外貌（高且帅）、爱好（打篮球），母亲的外貌（长黑发）、爱好（种花），自己的身份（学生）、爱好（踢足球），最后表达对家庭的喜爱，覆盖所有提示要点，符合写作要求。
【答案】Hello,I'm Li Ming. Here is a photo of my family.
There are three people in my family—my father, my mother and me. My father is tall and handsome. He likes playing basketball in his free time and he plays it very well. My mother is a teacher. She has long black hair. She likes growing flowers and our home is always full of flowers. I'm a student. I like playing football and I often play with my classmates after school.
I have a happy family and I love it very much.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语句子表达
【点评】本题考查学生根据提示完成介绍性短文的写作能力，紧扣要点，难度适中，能有效锻炼学生的语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5
