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你校英语角本期话题为 My Favourites，请根据下面的思维导图，写一篇以“My Favourites”为题的作文。
要求:(1)语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当补充一些细节信息;(2)60—80 词(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Favourites
I'm a 12-year-old student from No.1 Middle School. I want to share(分享) my favourites with you.
【书面表达好句积累】
1. I want to tell you about...
我想告诉你关于……
2. I can learn a lot about... and... from...
我可以从 …… 学习很多关于 ……和……
3. She is... years old.
她……岁。
4. He often... after school.
放学后,他经常……
5. She teaches us...
她教我们……
你校英语角本期话题为 My Favourites，请根据下面的思维导图，写一篇以“My Favourites”为题的作文。
要求:(1)语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当补充一些细节信息;(2)60—80 词(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Favourites
I'm a 12-year-old student from No.1 Middle School. I want to share(分享) my favourites with you.
First, let me tell you about my favourite teacher—Miss Zhu. She is about 30 years old. She teaches us English. After class, she always plays games with us. She is really helpful and I become better at English. Second, my favourite subject is science. I can learn a lot about animals and plants from science. That's so interesting. The last thing I want to tell you is my favourite building in our school. Oh, that's the library. It looks nice. And I often read there after school.
【书面表达好句积累】
1. I want to tell you about...
我想告诉你关于……
2. I can learn a lot about... and... from...
我可以从 …… 学习很多关于 ……和……
3. She is... years old.
她……岁。
4. He often... after school.
放学后,他经常……
5. She teaches us...
她教我们……
答案
One possible version:
My Favourites
I'm a 12-year-old student from No. 1 Middle School. I want to share my favourites with you.
First, let me tell you about my favourite teacher—Miss Zhu. She is about 30 years old. She teaches us English. After class, she always plays games with us. She is really helpful and I become better at English. Second, my favourite subject is science. I can learn a lot about animals and plants from science. That's so interesting. The last thing I want to tell you is my favourite building in our school. Oh, that's the library. It looks nice. And I often read there after school.
(88 words)
My Favourites
I'm a 12-year-old student from No. 1 Middle School. I want to share my favourites with you.
First, let me tell you about my favourite teacher—Miss Zhu. She is about 30 years old. She teaches us English. After class, she always plays games with us. She is really helpful and I become better at English. Second, my favourite subject is science. I can learn a lot about animals and plants from science. That's so interesting. The last thing I want to tell you is my favourite building in our school. Oh, that's the library. It looks nice. And I often read there after school.
(88 words)
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：以“My Favourites”为题，结合思维导图的三个分支（最喜欢的老师、最喜欢的科目、最喜欢的其他事物）写60-80词的短文，开头已给出，需语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当补充细节。解题思路：1. 对应思维导图的三个要点依次展开内容；2. 运用题目提供的好句积累，提升表达规范性；3. 控制字数，确保内容完整且符合要求。
【解析】根据思维导图的三个分支，依次组织内容：1. 介绍最喜欢的老师：说明其身份、年龄、所教学科及课后互动；2. 说明最喜欢的科目：点明科目及学习内容的趣味性；3. 介绍最喜欢的其他事物：选择学校图书馆，描述其外观及自己的活动。结合给定开头，串联语句，确保连贯，符合字数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
My Favourites
I'm a 12-year-old student from No. 1 Middle School. I want to share my favourites with you.
First, let me tell you about my favourite teacher—Miss Zhu. She is about 30 years old. She teaches us English. After class, she always plays games with us. She is really helpful and I become better at English. Second, my favourite subject is science. I can learn a lot about animals and plants from science. That's so interesting. The last thing I want to tell you is my favourite building in our school. Oh, that's the library. It looks nice. And I often read there after school.
【知识点】英语书面表达、思维导图写作
【点评】本文紧扣思维导图的三个要点，内容连贯，运用了题目给出的好句，符合字数要求，语句通顺，完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】根据思维导图的三个分支，依次组织内容：1. 介绍最喜欢的老师：说明其身份、年龄、所教学科及课后互动；2. 说明最喜欢的科目：点明科目及学习内容的趣味性；3. 介绍最喜欢的其他事物：选择学校图书馆，描述其外观及自己的活动。结合给定开头，串联语句，确保连贯，符合字数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
My Favourites
I'm a 12-year-old student from No. 1 Middle School. I want to share my favourites with you.
First, let me tell you about my favourite teacher—Miss Zhu. She is about 30 years old. She teaches us English. After class, she always plays games with us. She is really helpful and I become better at English. Second, my favourite subject is science. I can learn a lot about animals and plants from science. That's so interesting. The last thing I want to tell you is my favourite building in our school. Oh, that's the library. It looks nice. And I often read there after school.
【知识点】英语书面表达、思维导图写作
【点评】本文紧扣思维导图的三个要点，内容连贯，运用了题目给出的好句，符合字数要求，语句通顺，完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.6
