六、书面表达。
假如你是 Helen,请你根据下面的内容提示和要求,以“My family rules”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容提示:1.按时完成家庭作业;2.不玩电脑游戏;3 帮忙做家务……
注意:1.包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.70 词左右。
假如你是 Helen,请你根据下面的内容提示和要求,以“My family rules”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容提示:1.按时完成家庭作业;2.不玩电脑游戏;3 帮忙做家务……
注意:1.包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.70 词左右。
答案
My family rules
I’m Helen. There are some rules in my family. First, I must finish my homework on time after school. Second, I can’t play computer games because my parents think it’s bad for my study and eyes. Third, I have to help with housework, like cleaning the room or washing dishes on weekends. These rules help me a lot. I follow them every day.
I’m Helen. There are some rules in my family. First, I must finish my homework on time after school. Second, I can’t play computer games because my parents think it’s bad for my study and eyes. Third, I have to help with housework, like cleaning the room or washing dishes on weekends. These rules help me a lot. I follow them every day.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作身份为Helen,主题是“My family rules”,需覆盖提示的三个核心要点:按时完成家庭作业、不玩电脑游戏、帮忙做家务,适当补充细节(如做家务的具体内容),控制词数在70左右,语言要符合初中英语表达习惯,通顺自然。
【解析】先介绍自己及家庭有规则,依次说明三个规则:1. 放学后按时完成作业;2. 不能玩电脑游戏(简单说明原因);3. 周末帮忙做家务(列举具体家务);最后点明规则的帮助作用及自己遵守规则的情况。
【答案】My family rules
I’m Helen. There are some rules in my family. First, I must finish my homework on time after school. Second, I can’t play computer games because my parents think it’s bad for my study and eyes. Third, I have to help with housework, like cleaning the room or washing dishes on weekends. These rules help me a lot. I follow them every day.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、家庭话题表达
【点评】本文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有提示要点,语言简洁通顺,符合词数要求,逻辑清晰,是一篇符合要求的英语短文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】先介绍自己及家庭有规则,依次说明三个规则:1. 放学后按时完成作业;2. 不能玩电脑游戏(简单说明原因);3. 周末帮忙做家务(列举具体家务);最后点明规则的帮助作用及自己遵守规则的情况。
【答案】My family rules
I’m Helen. There are some rules in my family. First, I must finish my homework on time after school. Second, I can’t play computer games because my parents think it’s bad for my study and eyes. Third, I have to help with housework, like cleaning the room or washing dishes on weekends. These rules help me a lot. I follow them every day.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、家庭话题表达
【点评】本文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有提示要点,语言简洁通顺,符合词数要求,逻辑清晰,是一篇符合要求的英语短文。
【难度系数】0.6
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