某英文网站正在开展以“Teamwork”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请你根据下面表格的信息,用英文写一篇短文投稿,分享你的一次团队合作经历,以及你的收获。

注意:
1. 短文须包含所有提示信息,请增加细节以使短文完整、通顺;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数 80~100(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Teamwork
Teamwork is very important.
注意:
1. 短文须包含所有提示信息,请增加细节以使短文完整、通顺;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数 80~100(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Teamwork
Teamwork is very important.
答案
One possible version:
Teamwork
Teamwork is very important. When I see the word "teamwork", I can't help thinking of my basketball team.
Last term,our school held a basketball game. Because of my carelessness,we lost that game. But my team members didn't say any hard words to me. They offered to help me practise "throwing and catching" after school. With their help,I improved a lot. Two months later,we won the city school game.
From this experience,I have learnt that good teamwork is to help and support each other. With good teamwork,nothing is impossible.
Teamwork
Teamwork is very important. When I see the word "teamwork", I can't help thinking of my basketball team.
Last term,our school held a basketball game. Because of my carelessness,we lost that game. But my team members didn't say any hard words to me. They offered to help me practise "throwing and catching" after school. With their help,I improved a lot. Two months later,we won the city school game.
From this experience,I have learnt that good teamwork is to help and support each other. With good teamwork,nothing is impossible.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务:以李华身份围绕“Teamwork”主题,结合表格信息完成80-100词的征文,需包含所有提示内容并补充细节使文章通顺。解题思路:1. 承接给定开头,引出篮球团队的相关经历;2. 按时间顺序串联表格信息:上学期学校篮球赛失利,队友主动提供帮助、一起练习,自身进步后最终获胜;3. 点明经历带来的收获,呼应团队合作的主题,注意使用一般过去时态,避免真实个人信息。
【解析】根据提示信息,按逻辑串联内容:开头承接给定句引出篮球团队经历;接着叙述时间(Last term)、地点(At school)的篮球赛,说明失利原因,队友提供练习帮助,自身进步后最终获胜;最后点明收获,呼应主题,控制词数,保证语言通顺自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
Teamwork
Teamwork is very important. When I see the word "teamwork", I can't help thinking of my basketball team.
Last term, our school held a basketball game. Because of my carelessness, we lost that game. But my team members didn't say any hard words to me. They offered to help me practise throwing and catching after school. With their help, I improved a lot. Two months later, we won the city school game.
From this experience, I have learnt that good teamwork is to help and support each other. With good teamwork, nothing is impossible.
【知识点】英语写作、记叙文写作、团队合作主题
【点评】本文紧扣主题,完整覆盖表格所有提示信息,补充了合理细节,时态正确,语言通顺,符合征文要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】根据提示信息,按逻辑串联内容:开头承接给定句引出篮球团队经历;接着叙述时间(Last term)、地点(At school)的篮球赛,说明失利原因,队友提供练习帮助,自身进步后最终获胜;最后点明收获,呼应主题,控制词数,保证语言通顺自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
Teamwork
Teamwork is very important. When I see the word "teamwork", I can't help thinking of my basketball team.
Last term, our school held a basketball game. Because of my carelessness, we lost that game. But my team members didn't say any hard words to me. They offered to help me practise throwing and catching after school. With their help, I improved a lot. Two months later, we won the city school game.
From this experience, I have learnt that good teamwork is to help and support each other. With good teamwork, nothing is impossible.
【知识点】英语写作、记叙文写作、团队合作主题
【点评】本文紧扣主题,完整覆盖表格所有提示信息,补充了合理细节,时态正确,语言通顺,符合征文要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
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