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随着互联网的发展，许多中学生开始利用互联网进行学习。对此，某英文报组织了主题为“合理利用互联网进行学习”的征稿活动，假如你是李华，请你根据以下表格提示写一篇英语文章进行投稿。
【注意】1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确。
2. 必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥。
3. 词数不少于90(文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
4. 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
【参考词汇】resource 资源
Dear editor,
Yours,
Li Hua
随着互联网的发展，许多中学生开始利用互联网进行学习。对此，某英文报组织了主题为“合理利用互联网进行学习”的征稿活动，假如你是李华，请你根据以下表格提示写一篇英语文章进行投稿。
【注意】1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确。
2. 必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥。
3. 词数不少于90(文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
4. 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
【参考词汇】resource 资源
Dear editor,
I'd like to say something about this topic. With the development of new technology, the Internet has become a very necessary part of our daily life. There are rich learning resources on it and it is more convenient for us to search for information.
However, every coin has two sides. The Internet can be harmful in some ways. Some students are crazy about playing computer games. Some copy homework on the Internet.
Therefore, I suggest that we should use the Internet properly and in a reasonable way by balancing study and entertainment, and if so it can be a great benefit to our lives.
However, every coin has two sides. The Internet can be harmful in some ways. Some students are crazy about playing computer games. Some copy homework on the Internet.
Therefore, I suggest that we should use the Internet properly and in a reasonable way by balancing study and entertainment, and if so it can be a great benefit to our lives.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version
Dear editor,
I'd like to say something about this topic. With the development of new technology, the Internet has become a very necessary part of our daily life. There are rich learning resources on it and it is more convenient for us to search for information.
However, every coin has two sides. The Internet can be harmful in some ways. Some students are crazy about playing computer games. Some copy homework on the Internet.
Therefore, I suggest that we should use the Internet properly and in a reasonable way by balancing study and entertainment, and if so it can be a great benefit to our lives.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear editor,
I'd like to say something about this topic. With the development of new technology, the Internet has become a very necessary part of our daily life. There are rich learning resources on it and it is more convenient for us to search for information.
However, every coin has two sides. The Internet can be harmful in some ways. Some students are crazy about playing computer games. Some copy homework on the Internet.
Therefore, I suggest that we should use the Internet properly and in a reasonable way by balancing study and entertainment, and if so it can be a great benefit to our lives.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先明确写作核心主题是"合理利用互联网学习"，属于观点类征稿作文，我们可以按照三段式的逻辑搭建文章框架：第一步先引入话题，结合互联网普及的大背景自然切入；第二步梳理表格里的优势要点，把"丰富学习资源""检索信息便捷"两个核心点写出来，还可以适当补充符合逻辑的细节，比如可以随时随地获取不同的学习内容，不用受时间地点限制，让内容更充实；第三步用转折过渡引出弊端部分，把表格给出的"沉迷网游""网上抄作业"两个问题展开说明，点明这些行为的危害；第四步最后给出对应的合理建议，点明要平衡学习和娱乐，正确使用网络。全程要注意覆盖所有给定要点，语句通顺，满足词数要求，符合投稿的正式语气。
【解析】
1. 开篇衔接题干给出的开头句，先铺垫互联网融入日常的大背景，自然引出网络用于学习的相关优势，完整写出"网络有丰富学习资源、搜索信息十分便捷"两个要点，可适当补充细节让内容更饱满。
2. 使用过渡句"Every coin has two sides"完成语义转折，引出互联网存在的弊端，依次介绍部分学生沉迷网络游戏、直接在网络抄作业的不良现象，可简单点明这类行为会荒废学业、丧失独立思考能力。
3. 最后针对上述问题给出合理建议，说明我们应当合理有度地使用互联网，平衡学习和娱乐，让网络成为学习的助力，最后衔接题干给出的结尾署名即可。
4. 完成写作后通读检查，确认所有表格要点都已覆盖，语法没有错误，词数达到90词以上的要求。
【答案】
Dear editor,
I'd like to say something about this topic. With the development of new technology, the Internet has become a very necessary part of our daily life. There are rich learning resources on it and it is more convenient for us to search for information.
However, every coin has two sides. The Internet can be harmful in some ways. Some students are crazy about playing computer games. Some copy homework on the Internet.
Therefore, I suggest that we should use the Internet properly and in a reasonable way by balancing study and entertainment, and if so it can be a great benefit to our lives.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，话题作文表达
【点评】
本题属于贴近学生生活的热点话题写作，所有核心要点都已经在表格中明确给出，写作门槛较低，同学们只需要按照"优势介绍-弊端说明-给出建议"的逻辑串联内容，适当补充少量细节让行文流畅自然，注意使用合适的过渡词让文章衔接更顺滑，避免遗漏给定要点即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道题首先明确写作核心主题是"合理利用互联网学习"，属于观点类征稿作文，我们可以按照三段式的逻辑搭建文章框架：第一步先引入话题，结合互联网普及的大背景自然切入；第二步梳理表格里的优势要点，把"丰富学习资源""检索信息便捷"两个核心点写出来，还可以适当补充符合逻辑的细节，比如可以随时随地获取不同的学习内容，不用受时间地点限制，让内容更充实；第三步用转折过渡引出弊端部分，把表格给出的"沉迷网游""网上抄作业"两个问题展开说明，点明这些行为的危害；第四步最后给出对应的合理建议，点明要平衡学习和娱乐，正确使用网络。全程要注意覆盖所有给定要点，语句通顺，满足词数要求，符合投稿的正式语气。
【解析】
1. 开篇衔接题干给出的开头句，先铺垫互联网融入日常的大背景，自然引出网络用于学习的相关优势，完整写出"网络有丰富学习资源、搜索信息十分便捷"两个要点，可适当补充细节让内容更饱满。
2. 使用过渡句"Every coin has two sides"完成语义转折，引出互联网存在的弊端，依次介绍部分学生沉迷网络游戏、直接在网络抄作业的不良现象，可简单点明这类行为会荒废学业、丧失独立思考能力。
3. 最后针对上述问题给出合理建议，说明我们应当合理有度地使用互联网，平衡学习和娱乐，让网络成为学习的助力，最后衔接题干给出的结尾署名即可。
4. 完成写作后通读检查，确认所有表格要点都已覆盖，语法没有错误，词数达到90词以上的要求。
【答案】
Dear editor,
I'd like to say something about this topic. With the development of new technology, the Internet has become a very necessary part of our daily life. There are rich learning resources on it and it is more convenient for us to search for information.
However, every coin has two sides. The Internet can be harmful in some ways. Some students are crazy about playing computer games. Some copy homework on the Internet.
Therefore, I suggest that we should use the Internet properly and in a reasonable way by balancing study and entertainment, and if so it can be a great benefit to our lives.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，话题作文表达
【点评】
本题属于贴近学生生活的热点话题写作，所有核心要点都已经在表格中明确给出，写作门槛较低，同学们只需要按照"优势介绍-弊端说明-给出建议"的逻辑串联内容，适当补充少量细节让行文流畅自然，注意使用合适的过渡词让文章衔接更顺滑，避免遗漏给定要点即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
