Ⅸ. 书面表达。(20分)
(A)假如今天是4月10日,星期六,天气晴朗。但是对于你来说,今天却是倒霉的一天。请根据下面的要点提示,写一篇英文日记,记录今天发生的事情。(5分)
要点提示:1. 去参加朋友的生日聚会,到公交车站却发现忘了带钱包;
2. 回到家后,你发现忘带钥匙了;
3. 你从窗户向位于二楼的家爬去,不小心掉下来伤了右腿;
4. 没有去朋友的聚会,反而去了医院。
写作要求:1. 日记可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 不少于40词。
(A)假如今天是4月10日,星期六,天气晴朗。但是对于你来说,今天却是倒霉的一天。请根据下面的要点提示,写一篇英文日记,记录今天发生的事情。(5分)
要点提示:1. 去参加朋友的生日聚会,到公交车站却发现忘了带钱包;
2. 回到家后,你发现忘带钥匙了;
3. 你从窗户向位于二楼的家爬去,不小心掉下来伤了右腿;
4. 没有去朋友的聚会,反而去了医院。
写作要求:1. 日记可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 不少于40词。
答案
One possible version:
Saturday, April 10th, Sunny
At around 8:30 a.m., I left home to attend my friend's birthday party. When I reached the bus stop, I realized that I had left my wallet at home.
Even worse, by the time I came back, I found that I had left the key at home. I decided to climb into the room through the open window. My house is on the second floor, so it was not difficult to climb in. However, I fell down and hurt my right leg. As a result, I went to hospital instead of my friend's birthday party.
It was really the worst day of my life.
Saturday, April 10th, Sunny
At around 8:30 a.m., I left home to attend my friend's birthday party. When I reached the bus stop, I realized that I had left my wallet at home.
Even worse, by the time I came back, I found that I had left the key at home. I decided to climb into the room through the open window. My house is on the second floor, so it was not difficult to climb in. However, I fell down and hurt my right leg. As a result, I went to hospital instead of my friend's birthday party.
It was really the worst day of my life.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语日记写作题,解题思路如下:1. 先明确日记的固定格式:开头需标注星期、具体日期和天气,题目已给出日期为4月10日、星期六,天气晴朗,需按要求呈现;2. 围绕给定的4个要点,采用一般过去时(记录当天发生的事)依次叙述:去朋友生日聚会→到公交站忘带钱包→回家发现忘带钥匙→爬二楼窗户时摔伤到右腿→未参加聚会反而去医院;3. 适当添加细节(如出发时间、爬窗的原因)让内容连贯,最后可补充一句总结感受,确保词数达标。
【解析】
写作时需遵循日记格式,用一般过去时态串联要点:首先开头写“Saturday, April 10th, Sunny”;接着叙述事件:上午约8:30出发去朋友生日聚会,到公交站发现忘带钱包;回家后又发现忘带钥匙,因家在二楼决定爬窗,却不慎摔下伤了右腿;最终结果是去了医院,没参加聚会;最后补充“这是我人生中最糟糕的一天”总结感受,确保行文连贯、词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Saturday, April 10th, Sunny
At around 8:30 a.m., I left home to attend my friend's birthday party. When I reached the bus stop, I realized that I had left my wallet at home.
Even worse, by the time I came back, I found that I had left the key at home. I decided to climb into the room through the open window. My house is on the second floor, so it was not difficult to climb in. However, I fell down and hurt my right leg. As a result, I went to hospital instead of my friend's birthday party.
It was really the worst day of my life.
【知识点】
英语日记写作、一般过去时运用、要点式书面表达
【点评】
本题考查学生对英语日记格式的掌握,以及依据要点串联内容、适当拓展细节的能力,是基础写作题型,需注意时态一致性和行文连贯性。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语日记写作题,解题思路如下:1. 先明确日记的固定格式:开头需标注星期、具体日期和天气,题目已给出日期为4月10日、星期六,天气晴朗,需按要求呈现;2. 围绕给定的4个要点,采用一般过去时(记录当天发生的事)依次叙述:去朋友生日聚会→到公交站忘带钱包→回家发现忘带钥匙→爬二楼窗户时摔伤到右腿→未参加聚会反而去医院;3. 适当添加细节(如出发时间、爬窗的原因)让内容连贯,最后可补充一句总结感受,确保词数达标。
【解析】
写作时需遵循日记格式,用一般过去时态串联要点:首先开头写“Saturday, April 10th, Sunny”;接着叙述事件:上午约8:30出发去朋友生日聚会,到公交站发现忘带钱包;回家后又发现忘带钥匙,因家在二楼决定爬窗,却不慎摔下伤了右腿;最终结果是去了医院,没参加聚会;最后补充“这是我人生中最糟糕的一天”总结感受,确保行文连贯、词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Saturday, April 10th, Sunny
At around 8:30 a.m., I left home to attend my friend's birthday party. When I reached the bus stop, I realized that I had left my wallet at home.
Even worse, by the time I came back, I found that I had left the key at home. I decided to climb into the room through the open window. My house is on the second floor, so it was not difficult to climb in. However, I fell down and hurt my right leg. As a result, I went to hospital instead of my friend's birthday party.
It was really the worst day of my life.
【知识点】
英语日记写作、一般过去时运用、要点式书面表达
【点评】
本题考查学生对英语日记格式的掌握,以及依据要点串联内容、适当拓展细节的能力,是基础写作题型,需注意时态一致性和行文连贯性。
【难度系数】
0.6
(B)爱是荒漠甘泉,滋养你的心灵;爱是长夜明灯,指引你前进的方向。生活中爱无处不在,它或来自你的父母、家人,或来自你的老师、朋友、同学甚至陌生人。请你以“Life Is Full of Love”为题写一篇英语短文,叙述一个你经历过的、充满爱的故事。(15分)
写作要求:1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于80词;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。
Life Is Full of Love
写作要求:1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于80词;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。
Life Is Full of Love
答案
One possible version:
Life Is Full of Love
There is a thing full of love hidden deeply in my heart. I want to share one of them to everyone.
One afternoon, I dragged myself onto the bus to go home. Though the bus was crowded, I was lucky enough to have a seat. Just then, a woman got on the bus with a baby in her arms. She was standing right next to me. I was hesitating to give up my seat when I heard an about 6-year-old boy behind me saying with a warm voice, "Aunt, I will get off at the next stop. Please have my seat! " "Thank you, boy! You're really a good boy! " said the woman.
How kind the boy was! What he did made me not only shamed but moved. I must learn from him.
Life Is Full of Love
There is a thing full of love hidden deeply in my heart. I want to share one of them to everyone.
One afternoon, I dragged myself onto the bus to go home. Though the bus was crowded, I was lucky enough to have a seat. Just then, a woman got on the bus with a baby in her arms. She was standing right next to me. I was hesitating to give up my seat when I heard an about 6-year-old boy behind me saying with a warm voice, "Aunt, I will get off at the next stop. Please have my seat! " "Thank you, boy! You're really a good boy! " said the woman.
How kind the boy was! What he did made me not only shamed but moved. I must learn from him.
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务要求以“Life Is Full of Love”为题,写一篇叙述亲身经历的充满爱的英语短文。解题思路为:1. 开篇直接点题,引出要分享的爱的故事;2. 详细叙述故事的时间、地点、人物及具体经过,加入细节让内容生动;3. 结尾升华主题,表达感悟,呼应“生活充满爱”的核心,同时需满足词数、无真实信息等要求。
【解析】
写作时需遵循以下要点:1. 时态:叙述过去的故事使用一般过去时;2. 结构:采用“点题→叙事→感悟”的三段式结构;3. 内容:选取贴近生活的小事(如让座),加入人物动作、对话等细节,确保词数不少于80词,不出现真实姓名、校名,语言流畅规范,紧扣“爱无处不在”的主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
Life Is Full of Love
There is a thing full of love hidden deeply in my heart. I want to share one of them to everyone.
One afternoon, I dragged myself onto the bus to go home. Though the bus was crowded, I was lucky enough to have a seat. Just then, a woman got on the bus with a baby in her arms. She was standing right next to me. I was hesitating to give up my seat when I heard an about 6-year-old boy behind me saying with a warm voice, "Aunt, I will get off at the next stop. Please have my seat! " "Thank you, boy! You're really a good boy! " said the woman.
How kind the boy was! What he did made me not only shamed but moved. I must learn from him.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、主题英语短文写作、叙事类英语作文
【点评】
该范文以日常生活中公交车让座的小事为素材,选材真实贴近生活,结构清晰完整,叙事细节生动,语言流畅自然,准确呼应了“Life Is Full of Love”的主题,是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次写作任务要求以“Life Is Full of Love”为题,写一篇叙述亲身经历的充满爱的英语短文。解题思路为:1. 开篇直接点题,引出要分享的爱的故事;2. 详细叙述故事的时间、地点、人物及具体经过,加入细节让内容生动;3. 结尾升华主题,表达感悟,呼应“生活充满爱”的核心,同时需满足词数、无真实信息等要求。
【解析】
写作时需遵循以下要点:1. 时态:叙述过去的故事使用一般过去时;2. 结构:采用“点题→叙事→感悟”的三段式结构;3. 内容:选取贴近生活的小事(如让座),加入人物动作、对话等细节,确保词数不少于80词,不出现真实姓名、校名,语言流畅规范,紧扣“爱无处不在”的主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
Life Is Full of Love
There is a thing full of love hidden deeply in my heart. I want to share one of them to everyone.
One afternoon, I dragged myself onto the bus to go home. Though the bus was crowded, I was lucky enough to have a seat. Just then, a woman got on the bus with a baby in her arms. She was standing right next to me. I was hesitating to give up my seat when I heard an about 6-year-old boy behind me saying with a warm voice, "Aunt, I will get off at the next stop. Please have my seat! " "Thank you, boy! You're really a good boy! " said the woman.
How kind the boy was! What he did made me not only shamed but moved. I must learn from him.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、主题英语短文写作、叙事类英语作文
【点评】
该范文以日常生活中公交车让座的小事为素材,选材真实贴近生活,结构清晰完整,叙事细节生动,语言流畅自然,准确呼应了“Life Is Full of Love”的主题,是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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