五、书面表达。
假如你是李华,你的美国网友Paul对长沙很感兴趣,他想了解一下长沙四季的天气,便于以后来长沙旅游。请根据以下内容,给他回信。内容包括:1. 长沙四季的天气;2. 此时此刻长沙的天气,你和你的家人正在进行的活动及感受。
要求:不少于80词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Paul,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Changsha.
假如你是李华,你的美国网友Paul对长沙很感兴趣,他想了解一下长沙四季的天气,便于以后来长沙旅游。请根据以下内容,给他回信。内容包括:1. 长沙四季的天气;2. 此时此刻长沙的天气,你和你的家人正在进行的活动及感受。
要求:不少于80词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Paul,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Changsha.
Let me introduce the weather in Changsha to you.
Changsha is a wonderful city with four seasons. In spring,it gets warm and the temperature is very comfortable. Sometimes it rains for a while. Summer in Changsha is quite hot. But autumn is cool and pleasant. Winter is a bit cold and sometimes it even snows.
Now,it's early summer in Changsha. The weather is not so hot. My family and I are having a picnic in the park. We are sitting on the grass, enjoying delicious food and chatting happily. What great fun we have!
What about the weather in your hometown?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Changsha is a wonderful city with four seasons. In spring,it gets warm and the temperature is very comfortable. Sometimes it rains for a while. Summer in Changsha is quite hot. But autumn is cool and pleasant. Winter is a bit cold and sometimes it even snows.
Now,it's early summer in Changsha. The weather is not so hot. My family and I are having a picnic in the park. We are sitting on the grass, enjoying delicious food and chatting happily. What great fun we have!
What about the weather in your hometown?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
五、Dear Paul,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Changsha.
Let me introduce the weather in Changsha to you.
Changsha is a wonderful city with four seasons. In spring,it gets warm and the temperature is very comfortable. Sometimes it rains for a while. Summer in Changsha is quite hot. But autumn is cool and pleasant. Winter is a bit cold and sometimes it even snows.
Now,it's early summer in Changsha. The weather is not so hot. My family and I are having a picnic in the park. We are sitting on the grass, enjoying delicious food and chatting happily. What great fun we have!
What about the weather in your hometown?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Changsha.
Let me introduce the weather in Changsha to you.
Changsha is a wonderful city with four seasons. In spring,it gets warm and the temperature is very comfortable. Sometimes it rains for a while. Summer in Changsha is quite hot. But autumn is cool and pleasant. Winter is a bit cold and sometimes it even snows.
Now,it's early summer in Changsha. The weather is not so hot. My family and I are having a picnic in the park. We are sitting on the grass, enjoying delicious food and chatting happily. What great fun we have!
What about the weather in your hometown?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
这是一封给美国网友的回信,写作思路如下:1. 承接开头,引出介绍长沙天气的核心话题;2. 用一般现在时清晰描述长沙四季的天气特点(春暖舒适、夏炎热、秋凉爽宜人、冬冷偶有雪);3. 用现在进行时说明当前长沙的天气,以及自己和家人正在进行的野餐活动和愉悦感受;4. 结尾询问对方家乡天气并送上祝福,需注意书信格式,使用正确时态,满足不少于80词的要求。
【解析】
按照题目要求,需完成以下内容:1. 开头已给出,先自然引出介绍长沙天气的主题;2. 分述长沙四季天气:春天温暖舒适,有时有雨;夏天炎热;秋天凉爽宜人;冬天有点冷,有时下雪;3. 描述当前(初夏)的天气,以及自己和家人在公园野餐的活动,表达开心的感受;4. 结尾询问对方家乡天气并送上祝福,确保书信格式正确,词数达标。
【答案】
Dear Paul,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Changsha.
Let me introduce the weather in Changsha to you.
Changsha is a wonderful city with four seasons. In spring,it gets warm and the temperature is very comfortable. Sometimes it rains for a while. Summer in Changsha is quite hot. But autumn is cool and pleasant. Winter is a bit cold and sometimes it even snows.
Now,it's early summer in Changsha. The weather is not so hot. My family and I are having a picnic in the park. We are sitting on the grass, enjoying delicious food and chatting happily. What great fun we have!
What about the weather in your hometown?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般现在时、现在进行时
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,涵盖了所有要点,结构清晰,语言流畅,时态运用准确(描述四季用一般现在时,描述当下活动用现在进行时),符合书信格式,词数达标,是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一封给美国网友的回信,写作思路如下:1. 承接开头,引出介绍长沙天气的核心话题;2. 用一般现在时清晰描述长沙四季的天气特点(春暖舒适、夏炎热、秋凉爽宜人、冬冷偶有雪);3. 用现在进行时说明当前长沙的天气,以及自己和家人正在进行的野餐活动和愉悦感受;4. 结尾询问对方家乡天气并送上祝福,需注意书信格式,使用正确时态,满足不少于80词的要求。
【解析】
按照题目要求,需完成以下内容:1. 开头已给出,先自然引出介绍长沙天气的主题;2. 分述长沙四季天气:春天温暖舒适,有时有雨;夏天炎热;秋天凉爽宜人;冬天有点冷,有时下雪;3. 描述当前(初夏)的天气,以及自己和家人在公园野餐的活动,表达开心的感受;4. 结尾询问对方家乡天气并送上祝福,确保书信格式正确,词数达标。
【答案】
Dear Paul,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Changsha.
Let me introduce the weather in Changsha to you.
Changsha is a wonderful city with four seasons. In spring,it gets warm and the temperature is very comfortable. Sometimes it rains for a while. Summer in Changsha is quite hot. But autumn is cool and pleasant. Winter is a bit cold and sometimes it even snows.
Now,it's early summer in Changsha. The weather is not so hot. My family and I are having a picnic in the park. We are sitting on the grass, enjoying delicious food and chatting happily. What great fun we have!
What about the weather in your hometown?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般现在时、现在进行时
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,涵盖了所有要点,结构清晰,语言流畅,时态运用准确(描述四季用一般现在时,描述当下活动用现在进行时),符合书信格式,词数达标,是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
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