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六、书面表达。（满分 15 分）
暑假即将到来,你将如何度过一个有意义的暑假呢? 学校英语社团正在组织题为“How to spend a meaningful summer holiday”的征文比赛,请结合自身实际情况,写一篇短文参赛。
要求:
1. 参考上图,选取两到三个方面进行阐述,可作适当发挥;
2. 文章不少于 90 词。开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
How to spend a meaningful summer holiday
The summer holiday is coming soon. In order to spend a meaningful holiday, I have some plans to improve myself.
暑假即将到来,你将如何度过一个有意义的暑假呢? 学校英语社团正在组织题为“How to spend a meaningful summer holiday”的征文比赛,请结合自身实际情况,写一篇短文参赛。
要求:
1. 参考上图,选取两到三个方面进行阐述,可作适当发挥;
2. 文章不少于 90 词。开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
How to spend a meaningful summer holiday
The summer holiday is coming soon. In order to spend a meaningful holiday, I have some plans to improve myself.
答案
One possible version：
How to spend a meaningful summer holiday
The summer holiday is coming soon. In order to spend a meaningful holiday, I have some plans to improve myself.
First, I will form a good reading habit. I'll read at least two classic books every week, such as Pride and Prejudice and To Kill a Mockingbird to develop my reading skills. Second, I decide to learn to swim. I'll take professional swimming lessons three times a week. Not only can it make me healthier, but also it can be a useful life skill. What's more, I plan to do volunteer work. I'll help in an old people's home twice a month, chatting with the elderly and doing some cleaning for them, which can teach me to care for others.
With these plans, I'm sure I'll have a fruitful summer holiday.
How to spend a meaningful summer holiday
The summer holiday is coming soon. In order to spend a meaningful holiday, I have some plans to improve myself.
First, I will form a good reading habit. I'll read at least two classic books every week, such as Pride and Prejudice and To Kill a Mockingbird to develop my reading skills. Second, I decide to learn to swim. I'll take professional swimming lessons three times a week. Not only can it make me healthier, but also it can be a useful life skill. What's more, I plan to do volunteer work. I'll help in an old people's home twice a month, chatting with the elderly and doing some cleaning for them, which can teach me to care for others.
With these plans, I'm sure I'll have a fruitful summer holiday.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“如何度过有意义的暑假”。首先需明确写作要求：结合思维导图选取2-3个方面阐述，开头已给出，字数不少于90词，不能出现真实信息。解题思路为：先确定写作要点（可选取阅读习惯、志愿者活动等），再围绕每个要点补充具体内容（如阅读的书籍、志愿者的具体活动等），最后总结表达对暑假的期待，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【解析】
承接开头，分点阐述暑假计划：首先，计划培养良好的阅读习惯，每周至少读两本经典书籍提升阅读能力；其次，决定学习游泳，每周上三次专业课程，既能增强体质又能掌握实用技能；最后，计划做志愿者，每月两次去养老院帮忙，陪老人聊天、打扫卫生，学会关爱他人。最后总结，表达对充实暑假的期待。
【答案】
One possible version：
How to spend a meaningful summer holiday
The summer holiday is coming soon. In order to spend a meaningful holiday, I have some plans to improve myself.
First, I will form a good reading habit. I'll read at least two classic books every week, such as Pride and Prejudice and To Kill a Mockingbird to develop my reading skills. Second, I decide to learn to swim. I'll take professional swimming lessons three times a week. Not only can it make me healthier, but also it can be a useful life skill. What's more, I plan to do volunteer work. I'll help in an old people's home twice a month, chatting with the elderly and doing some cleaning for them, which can teach me to care for others.
With these plans, I'm sure I'll have a fruitful summer holiday.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、提纲类作文、话题写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图给出写作方向，要求学生围绕主题选取要点并适当拓展，既考查语言组织能力，又考查逻辑表达能力，是常见的英语书面表达题型，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“如何度过有意义的暑假”。首先需明确写作要求：结合思维导图选取2-3个方面阐述，开头已给出，字数不少于90词，不能出现真实信息。解题思路为：先确定写作要点（可选取阅读习惯、志愿者活动等），再围绕每个要点补充具体内容（如阅读的书籍、志愿者的具体活动等），最后总结表达对暑假的期待，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【解析】
承接开头，分点阐述暑假计划：首先，计划培养良好的阅读习惯，每周至少读两本经典书籍提升阅读能力；其次，决定学习游泳，每周上三次专业课程，既能增强体质又能掌握实用技能；最后，计划做志愿者，每月两次去养老院帮忙，陪老人聊天、打扫卫生，学会关爱他人。最后总结，表达对充实暑假的期待。
【答案】
One possible version：
How to spend a meaningful summer holiday
The summer holiday is coming soon. In order to spend a meaningful holiday, I have some plans to improve myself.
First, I will form a good reading habit. I'll read at least two classic books every week, such as Pride and Prejudice and To Kill a Mockingbird to develop my reading skills. Second, I decide to learn to swim. I'll take professional swimming lessons three times a week. Not only can it make me healthier, but also it can be a useful life skill. What's more, I plan to do volunteer work. I'll help in an old people's home twice a month, chatting with the elderly and doing some cleaning for them, which can teach me to care for others.
With these plans, I'm sure I'll have a fruitful summer holiday.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、提纲类作文、话题写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图给出写作方向，要求学生围绕主题选取要点并适当拓展，既考查语言组织能力，又考查逻辑表达能力，是常见的英语书面表达题型，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
