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七、书面表达。（满分15分）
假如你是李华，是阳光中学八年级的学生。你校英文报正组织开展“Our Sunshine Star”评选活动，你打算推荐好友王平参与评选。请你根据下图提示写一封英文推荐信。
注意：
1. 推荐信须包含图中所有要点，请适当增加细节以使行文流畅；
2. 80词左右。推荐信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 推荐信中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to recommend Wang Ping as our school Sunshine Star.
All of us think Wang Ping should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，是阳光中学八年级的学生。你校英文报正组织开展“Our Sunshine Star”评选活动，你打算推荐好友王平参与评选。请你根据下图提示写一封英文推荐信。
注意：
1. 推荐信须包含图中所有要点，请适当增加细节以使行文流畅；
2. 80词左右。推荐信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 推荐信中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to recommend Wang Ping as our school Sunshine Star.
Wang Ping is very polite. He always shows good manners to everyone around him. Yesterday he gave his seat to an old lady on the bus.
He also lives a green life. When he leaves our classroom, he always remembers to turn off the lights. He often advises us to go to school by bus or by bike together with him.
What's more, he is always ready to do voluntary work. Last week, he donated some of his books to children in poor areas.
He also lives a green life. When he leaves our classroom, he always remembers to turn off the lights. He often advises us to go to school by bus or by bike together with him.
What's more, he is always ready to do voluntary work. Last week, he donated some of his books to children in poor areas.
All of us think Wang Ping should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to recommend Wang Ping as our school Sunshine Star.
Wang Ping is very polite. He always shows good manners to everyone around him. Yesterday he gave his seat to an old lady on the bus.
He also lives a green life. When he leaves our classroom, he always remembers to turn off the lights. He often advises us to go to school by bus or by bike together with him.
What's more, he is always ready to do voluntary work. Last week, he donated some of his books to children in poor areas.
All of us think Wang Ping should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to recommend Wang Ping as our school Sunshine Star.
Wang Ping is very polite. He always shows good manners to everyone around him. Yesterday he gave his seat to an old lady on the bus.
He also lives a green life. When he leaves our classroom, he always remembers to turn off the lights. He often advises us to go to school by bus or by bike together with him.
What's more, he is always ready to do voluntary work. Last week, he donated some of his books to children in poor areas.
All of us think Wang Ping should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题要求写一封推荐信推荐王平参评“Our Sunshine Star”，需包含图中三个核心要点：展现良好礼仪、践行绿色生活、乐于做志愿工作，还要补充具体细节让行文流畅，且开头结尾已给出，需控制在80词左右。解题时，先围绕每个要点添加真实可感的小事例，使内容充实，同时注意书信的正式语气，确保要点齐全、逻辑连贯。
【解析】首先承接开头，围绕“show good manners”举例，如给老人让座；接着写“live a green life”，举例离开教室关灯、建议骑车上学；再写“ready to do voluntary work”，举例捐书给贫困地区孩子；最后衔接结尾，完成推荐信。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to recommend Wang Ping as our school Sunshine Star.
Wang Ping is very polite. He always shows good manners to everyone around him. Yesterday he gave his seat to an old lady on the bus.
He also lives a green life. When he leaves our classroom, he always remembers to turn off the lights. He often advises us to go to school by bus or by bike together with him.
What's more, he is always ready to do voluntary work. Last week, he donated some of his books to children in poor areas.
All of us think Wang Ping should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、要点拓展、细节补充
【点评】该推荐信紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖所有提示要点，补充的事例具体贴切，语言简洁流畅，结构清晰，符合字数要求，很好地完成了推荐任务。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】首先承接开头，围绕“show good manners”举例，如给老人让座；接着写“live a green life”，举例离开教室关灯、建议骑车上学；再写“ready to do voluntary work”，举例捐书给贫困地区孩子；最后衔接结尾，完成推荐信。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to recommend Wang Ping as our school Sunshine Star.
Wang Ping is very polite. He always shows good manners to everyone around him. Yesterday he gave his seat to an old lady on the bus.
He also lives a green life. When he leaves our classroom, he always remembers to turn off the lights. He often advises us to go to school by bus or by bike together with him.
What's more, he is always ready to do voluntary work. Last week, he donated some of his books to children in poor areas.
All of us think Wang Ping should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、要点拓展、细节补充
【点评】该推荐信紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖所有提示要点，补充的事例具体贴切，语言简洁流畅，结构清晰，符合字数要求，很好地完成了推荐任务。
【难度系数】0.3
