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四、书面表达。
假设你是李华，初中三年的生活即将结束，你和同桌（deskmate）一起学习、一起成长，留下了许多难忘的时光。请用英语给你的同桌写一封书信，回忆你们共同经历过的酸甜苦辣，向同桌表达你最诚挚的感谢，并送上衷心的毕业祝福。
内容提示：
1. What happy memories will you share with your deskmate?
2. Why do you want to thank your deskmate?
3. What wishes will you give to your deskmate?
注意：
（1）短文须包括以上内容提示，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现学生真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80个左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear deskmate，
Time passes so quickly!
Yours，
Li Hua
假设你是李华，初中三年的生活即将结束，你和同桌（deskmate）一起学习、一起成长，留下了许多难忘的时光。请用英语给你的同桌写一封书信，回忆你们共同经历过的酸甜苦辣，向同桌表达你最诚挚的感谢，并送上衷心的毕业祝福。
内容提示：
1. What happy memories will you share with your deskmate?
2. Why do you want to thank your deskmate?
3. What wishes will you give to your deskmate?
注意：
（1）短文须包括以上内容提示，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现学生真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80个左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear deskmate，
Time passes so quickly!
Yours，
Li Hua
答案
范例：
Dear deskmate,
Time passes so quickly! As our junior high life draws to a close, I can't help but look back on the three wonderful years we shared. From struggling with difficult math problems to laughing over silly jokes during breaks, every moment is precious. We have tasted both the bitterness of failure and the sweetness of success together.
Thank you for always being there to encourage me when I felt down and for sharing your notes when I was absent. Your kindness and companionship have made my school life unforgettable.
Although we are about to part ways, I believe our friendship will last forever. I sincerely wish you a bright future filled with happiness and success. Let's keep in touch!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear deskmate,
Time passes so quickly! As our junior high life draws to a close, I can't help but look back on the three wonderful years we shared. From struggling with difficult math problems to laughing over silly jokes during breaks, every moment is precious. We have tasted both the bitterness of failure and the sweetness of success together.
Thank you for always being there to encourage me when I felt down and for sharing your notes when I was absent. Your kindness and companionship have made my school life unforgettable.
Although we are about to part ways, I believe our friendship will last forever. I sincerely wish you a bright future filled with happiness and success. Let's keep in touch!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为初中英语书面表达题，要求以李华身份给同桌写毕业书信，需围绕“共同回忆、感谢原因、毕业祝福”三个核心要点展开，词数约80，开头结尾已给出，需使用符合初中生水平的英语表达，不得出现真实姓名和校名，结构清晰、情感真挚。
【解析】
1. 书信结构：正文分三段，第一段写共同回忆，选取初中三年同桌间的典型场景（如一起攻克难题、课间说笑、共担成败）；第二段写感谢原因，结合具体事例（如情绪低落时的鼓励、缺课时分享笔记）；第三段写毕业祝福，表达友谊长存的愿望及对未来的美好祝愿。
2. 语言要求：以简单句为主，适当使用复合句，控制词数，符合初中生词汇量，避免复杂表达，确保要点齐全。
【答案】
Dear deskmate,
Time passes so quickly! As our junior high life draws to a close, I can't help but look back on the three wonderful years we shared. From struggling with difficult math problems to laughing over silly jokes during breaks, every moment is precious. We have tasted both the bitterness of failure and the sweetness of success together.
Thank you for always being there to encourage me when I felt down and for sharing your notes when I was absent. Your kindness and companionship have made my school life unforgettable.
Although we are about to part ways, I believe our friendship will last forever. I sincerely wish you a bright future filled with happiness and success. Let's keep in touch!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作，初中英语书面表达，毕业主题写作
【点评】
本题结合初中毕业的真实情境，考查学生的英语综合运用能力，既要求掌握书信基本格式，又要求紧扣要点表达情感，贴近学生生活，易于学生发挥，是初中英语写作的常见题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为初中英语书面表达题，要求以李华身份给同桌写毕业书信，需围绕“共同回忆、感谢原因、毕业祝福”三个核心要点展开，词数约80，开头结尾已给出，需使用符合初中生水平的英语表达，不得出现真实姓名和校名，结构清晰、情感真挚。
【解析】
1. 书信结构：正文分三段，第一段写共同回忆，选取初中三年同桌间的典型场景（如一起攻克难题、课间说笑、共担成败）；第二段写感谢原因，结合具体事例（如情绪低落时的鼓励、缺课时分享笔记）；第三段写毕业祝福，表达友谊长存的愿望及对未来的美好祝愿。
2. 语言要求：以简单句为主，适当使用复合句，控制词数，符合初中生词汇量，避免复杂表达，确保要点齐全。
【答案】
Dear deskmate,
Time passes so quickly! As our junior high life draws to a close, I can't help but look back on the three wonderful years we shared. From struggling with difficult math problems to laughing over silly jokes during breaks, every moment is precious. We have tasted both the bitterness of failure and the sweetness of success together.
Thank you for always being there to encourage me when I felt down and for sharing your notes when I was absent. Your kindness and companionship have made my school life unforgettable.
Although we are about to part ways, I believe our friendship will last forever. I sincerely wish you a bright future filled with happiness and success. Let's keep in touch!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作，初中英语书面表达，毕业主题写作
【点评】
本题结合初中毕业的真实情境，考查学生的英语综合运用能力，既要求掌握书信基本格式，又要求紧扣要点表达情感，贴近学生生活，易于学生发挥，是初中英语写作的常见题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
