三、书面表达。
随着人们生活水平的提高,中学生的零花钱也越来越多了。假设你们学校校刊的英语专栏以 “My Pocket Money” 为题进行征文,请根据以下内容,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
1. Where do you get pocket money?
2. How do you deal with your pocket money?
3. What do you think is a more meaningful way to spend your pocket money?
注意:
(1)短文须包括以上信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现学生真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数 80 个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Pocket Money
With the development of our society, people's living conditions are getting better and better. And students can get more pocket money than before.
随着人们生活水平的提高,中学生的零花钱也越来越多了。假设你们学校校刊的英语专栏以 “My Pocket Money” 为题进行征文,请根据以下内容,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
1. Where do you get pocket money?
2. How do you deal with your pocket money?
3. What do you think is a more meaningful way to spend your pocket money?
注意:
(1)短文须包括以上信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现学生真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数 80 个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Pocket Money
With the development of our society, people's living conditions are getting better and better. And students can get more pocket money than before.
My pocket money mainly comes from my parents. I often help them do some housework, and then I can get some money.
How do I deal with my pocket money? First, I often use it to buy some school things and my daily needs. Second, I want to buy some gifts for my friends on festivals. Then I save the rest in the bank for a rainy day.
Last but not least, I often use my pocket money to help people in need. I think it is a meaningful way of using my pocket money.
答案
范例:
My Pocket Money
With the development of our society, people's living conditions are getting better and better. And students can get more pocket money than before. My pocket money mainly comes from my parents. I often help them do some housework, and then I can get some money.
How do I deal with my pocket money? First, I often use it to buy some school things and my daily needs. Second, I want to buy some gifts for my friends on festivals. Then I save the rest in the bank for a rainy day.
Last but not least, I often use my pocket money to help people in need. I think it is a meaningful way of using my pocket money.
My Pocket Money
With the development of our society, people's living conditions are getting better and better. And students can get more pocket money than before. My pocket money mainly comes from my parents. I often help them do some housework, and then I can get some money.
How do I deal with my pocket money? First, I often use it to buy some school things and my daily needs. Second, I want to buy some gifts for my friends on festivals. Then I save the rest in the bank for a rainy day.
Last but not least, I often use my pocket money to help people in need. I think it is a meaningful way of using my pocket money.
解析
【解析】
本文需围绕“我的零花钱”主题展开写作,需涵盖三个要点:零花钱的来源、日常支配方式、认为更有意义的花费方式。写作时可先点明零花钱主要来自父母(可结合做家务赚取),接着分点说明日常用于购买学习用品、节日给朋友买礼物、剩余存银行,最后指出帮助有需要的人是更有意义的花费方式,注意语言简洁,符合词数要求,逻辑清晰。
【答案】
My Pocket Money
With the development of our society, people's living conditions are getting better and better. And students can get more pocket money than before. My pocket money mainly comes from my parents. I often help them do some housework, and then I can get some money.
How do I deal with my pocket money? First, I often use it to buy some school things and my daily needs. Second, I want to buy some gifts for my friends on festivals. Then I save the rest in the bank for a rainy day.
Last but not least, I often use my pocket money to help people in need. I think it is a meaningful way of using my pocket money.
【知识点】
英语征文写作;日常消费话题表达;实用句式运用
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖了所有要点,逻辑层次清晰,语言表达流畅自然,还传递了乐于助人的正确消费观念,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本文需围绕“我的零花钱”主题展开写作,需涵盖三个要点:零花钱的来源、日常支配方式、认为更有意义的花费方式。写作时可先点明零花钱主要来自父母(可结合做家务赚取),接着分点说明日常用于购买学习用品、节日给朋友买礼物、剩余存银行,最后指出帮助有需要的人是更有意义的花费方式,注意语言简洁,符合词数要求,逻辑清晰。
【答案】
My Pocket Money
With the development of our society, people's living conditions are getting better and better. And students can get more pocket money than before. My pocket money mainly comes from my parents. I often help them do some housework, and then I can get some money.
How do I deal with my pocket money? First, I often use it to buy some school things and my daily needs. Second, I want to buy some gifts for my friends on festivals. Then I save the rest in the bank for a rainy day.
Last but not least, I often use my pocket money to help people in need. I think it is a meaningful way of using my pocket money.
【知识点】
英语征文写作;日常消费话题表达;实用句式运用
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖了所有要点,逻辑层次清晰,语言表达流畅自然,还传递了乐于助人的正确消费观念,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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