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六、书面表达。(6分)
同学们，祝贺你们即将结束小学六年的学习生涯。进入初中，你们会遇到新朋友、新老师，你们该如何介绍自己呢？请根据所给的导图提示，以“This is me！”为题，写一篇不少于40词的自我介绍，已给出的内容不计入总词数。要求：书写规范，内容达意，语句通顺，语言准确。
This is me!
Hello, everyone! I'm very happy to meet you here. Let me tell you about myself.
同学们，祝贺你们即将结束小学六年的学习生涯。进入初中，你们会遇到新朋友、新老师，你们该如何介绍自己呢？请根据所给的导图提示，以“This is me！”为题，写一篇不少于40词的自我介绍，已给出的内容不计入总词数。要求：书写规范，内容达意，语句通顺，语言准确。
This is me!
Hello, everyone! I'm very happy to meet you here. Let me tell you about myself.
答案
示例： This is me!
Hello, everyone! I'm very happy to meet you here. Let me tell you about myself.
My name is Li Ming, and I'm 12 years old. I have many hobbies—I love reading books, especially adventure stories, and I enjoy playing basketball with my friends. In my free time, I often listen to music and draw pictures because they help me relax. My dream is to become a scientist because I want to invent useful things to help people. To make my dream come true, I plan to study hard, especially in Maths and Science, and join the school's science club.
I hope we can become good friends and learn from each other in the middle school!
Hello, everyone! I'm very happy to meet you here. Let me tell you about myself.
My name is Li Ming, and I'm 12 years old. I have many hobbies—I love reading books, especially adventure stories, and I enjoy playing basketball with my friends. In my free time, I often listen to music and draw pictures because they help me relax. My dream is to become a scientist because I want to invent useful things to help people. To make my dream come true, I plan to study hard, especially in Maths and Science, and join the school's science club.
I hope we can become good friends and learn from each other in the middle school!
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要明确这是一篇面向初中新环境的自我介绍类书面表达，题目为“This is me！”且已有开头句。解题思路如下：
1. 搭建写作框架：在给定开头后，依次补充个人基本信息（名字、年龄）、兴趣爱好（具体活动及喜爱原因）、梦想及实现计划、结尾表达交友愿望，让内容层次清晰。
2. 填充具体内容：爱好部分要避免笼统表述，比如不说“我喜欢看书”，而是细化为“喜欢读冒险故事”；梦想结合实际，同时说明具体努力方向，让内容更真实饱满。
3. 满足写作要求：确保字数不少于40词，语句通顺，使用正确的语法结构，比如用并列连词连接相关内容，用because引导原因状语从句补充理由。
【解析】
步骤1：补充基础个人信息，快速让他人建立初步认识："My name is Li Ming, and I'm 12 years old."
步骤2：详细介绍兴趣爱好，加入具体场景和原因，丰富内容："I have many hobbies—I love reading books, especially adventure stories, and I enjoy playing basketball with my friends. In my free time, I often listen to music and draw pictures because they help me relax."
步骤3：阐述梦想及实现计划，展现个人目标与决心："My dream is to become a scientist because I want to invent useful things to help people. To make my dream come true, I plan to study hard, especially in Maths and Science, and join the school's science club."
步骤4：结尾表达交友愿望，呼应开头的友好氛围："I hope we can become good friends and learn from each other in the middle school!"
将以上内容衔接在给定开头后，形成逻辑连贯、内容完整的自我介绍。
【答案】
This is me!
Hello, everyone! I'm very happy to meet you here. Let me tell you about myself.
My name is Li Ming, and I'm 12 years old. I have many hobbies—I love reading books, especially adventure stories, and I enjoy playing basketball with my friends. In my free time, I often listen to music and draw pictures because they help me relax. My dream is to become a scientist because I want to invent useful things to help people. To make my dream come true, I plan to study hard, especially in Maths and Science, and join the school's science club.
I hope we can become good friends and learn from each other in the middle school!
【知识点】
1. 英语自我介绍写作
2. 兴趣爱好表达
3. 梦想与计划表述
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰、内容完整，涵盖了个人基本信息、兴趣爱好、梦想及行动规划，语言流畅自然，语法准确规范。既满足了题目字数要求，又能让新同学和老师快速全面地了解自己，结尾的交友意愿传递出友好态度，是一篇极具参考性的自我介绍范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们要明确这是一篇面向初中新环境的自我介绍类书面表达，题目为“This is me！”且已有开头句。解题思路如下：
1. 搭建写作框架：在给定开头后，依次补充个人基本信息（名字、年龄）、兴趣爱好（具体活动及喜爱原因）、梦想及实现计划、结尾表达交友愿望，让内容层次清晰。
2. 填充具体内容：爱好部分要避免笼统表述，比如不说“我喜欢看书”，而是细化为“喜欢读冒险故事”；梦想结合实际，同时说明具体努力方向，让内容更真实饱满。
3. 满足写作要求：确保字数不少于40词，语句通顺，使用正确的语法结构，比如用并列连词连接相关内容，用because引导原因状语从句补充理由。
【解析】
步骤1：补充基础个人信息，快速让他人建立初步认识："My name is Li Ming, and I'm 12 years old."
步骤2：详细介绍兴趣爱好，加入具体场景和原因，丰富内容："I have many hobbies—I love reading books, especially adventure stories, and I enjoy playing basketball with my friends. In my free time, I often listen to music and draw pictures because they help me relax."
步骤3：阐述梦想及实现计划，展现个人目标与决心："My dream is to become a scientist because I want to invent useful things to help people. To make my dream come true, I plan to study hard, especially in Maths and Science, and join the school's science club."
步骤4：结尾表达交友愿望，呼应开头的友好氛围："I hope we can become good friends and learn from each other in the middle school!"
将以上内容衔接在给定开头后，形成逻辑连贯、内容完整的自我介绍。
【答案】
This is me!
Hello, everyone! I'm very happy to meet you here. Let me tell you about myself.
My name is Li Ming, and I'm 12 years old. I have many hobbies—I love reading books, especially adventure stories, and I enjoy playing basketball with my friends. In my free time, I often listen to music and draw pictures because they help me relax. My dream is to become a scientist because I want to invent useful things to help people. To make my dream come true, I plan to study hard, especially in Maths and Science, and join the school's science club.
I hope we can become good friends and learn from each other in the middle school!
【知识点】
1. 英语自我介绍写作
2. 兴趣爱好表达
3. 梦想与计划表述
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰、内容完整，涵盖了个人基本信息、兴趣爱好、梦想及行动规划，语言流畅自然，语法准确规范。既满足了题目字数要求，又能让新同学和老师快速全面地了解自己，结尾的交友意愿传递出友好态度，是一篇极具参考性的自我介绍范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
