六、书面表达。(10分)
汤姆在社交网站上发布了一张图片,并以“Changes in me”为主题写了下面这段文字。

Three years ago, I was 1.41 metres tall. I liked watching TV. I read books on the weekend.
Now, I am 1.64 metres tall. I like going swimming with my friends. I often play badminton on the weekend. I'm stronger than before.
要求:1.模仿汤姆的文字写一段关于你自己的变化,不少于5句话。
2.须用上couldn't、didn't like等词,要有过去式和比较级。
3.条理清晰,字迹工整。
汤姆在社交网站上发布了一张图片,并以“Changes in me”为主题写了下面这段文字。
Three years ago, I was 1.41 metres tall. I liked watching TV. I read books on the weekend.
Now, I am 1.64 metres tall. I like going swimming with my friends. I often play badminton on the weekend. I'm stronger than before.
要求:1.模仿汤姆的文字写一段关于你自己的变化,不少于5句话。
2.须用上couldn't、didn't like等词,要有过去式和比较级。
3.条理清晰,字迹工整。
答案
One possible version:
Two years ago, I was 1.35 metres tall, and I was not strong. I didn't like PE class because I couldn't play badminton. I liked English class. I could read English storybooks.
Now, I'm stronger than before. I can play badminton with my friends. I still like reading English storybooks. That's interesting.
Two years ago, I was 1.35 metres tall, and I was not strong. I didn't like PE class because I couldn't play badminton. I liked English class. I could read English storybooks.
Now, I'm stronger than before. I can play badminton with my friends. I still like reading English storybooks. That's interesting.
解析
【分析】本题要求以“Changes in me”为主题写书面表达,需分两部分描述自身变化:一是过去的状态,要用到一般过去式(如didn't like、couldn't等),涵盖身高、喜好、能力;二是现在的变化,要用到比较级(如stronger等),需满足不少于5句话的要求,条理清晰即可。
【解析】1. 先构思过去的内容:设定过去的身高、不喜欢的课程(如PE课)、不会的技能(如打羽毛球)、喜欢的课程(如英语课)、会的技能(如读英语故事书),用一般过去式组织语句;2. 再写现在的变化:用比较级描述自身的改变(如更强壮),写出现在会的技能、依然喜欢的事物,补充内容使句子完整;3. 确保句子数量达标,用词符合题目要求。
【答案】Two years ago, I was 1.35 metres tall, and I was not strong. I didn't like PE class because I couldn't play badminton. I liked English class. I could read English storybooks. Now, I'm stronger than before. I can play badminton with my friends. I still like reading English storybooks. That's interesting.
【知识点】一般过去时、形容词比较级、英语书面表达
【点评】本题结合生活实际,考查学生对一般过去式和形容词比较级的运用,要求描述自身变化,既巩固语法知识,又锻炼英语表达能力,属于基础书面表达题。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 先构思过去的内容:设定过去的身高、不喜欢的课程(如PE课)、不会的技能(如打羽毛球)、喜欢的课程(如英语课)、会的技能(如读英语故事书),用一般过去式组织语句;2. 再写现在的变化:用比较级描述自身的改变(如更强壮),写出现在会的技能、依然喜欢的事物,补充内容使句子完整;3. 确保句子数量达标,用词符合题目要求。
【答案】Two years ago, I was 1.35 metres tall, and I was not strong. I didn't like PE class because I couldn't play badminton. I liked English class. I could read English storybooks. Now, I'm stronger than before. I can play badminton with my friends. I still like reading English storybooks. That's interesting.
【知识点】一般过去时、形容词比较级、英语书面表达
【点评】本题结合生活实际,考查学生对一般过去式和形容词比较级的运用,要求描述自身变化,既巩固语法知识,又锻炼英语表达能力,属于基础书面表达题。
【难度系数】0.6
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