七、书面表达。6分
根据思维导图提示,以“My family”为题,介绍你家的大致位置和家庭成员。
要求:1. 条理清晰,语句通顺,表达准确,书写规范;
2. 思维导图中的信息点都要包含在内;
3. 可适当拓展,不少于35词。

My family
There are people in my family. They're
and I. We live .
根据思维导图提示,以“My family”为题,介绍你家的大致位置和家庭成员。
要求:1. 条理清晰,语句通顺,表达准确,书写规范;
2. 思维导图中的信息点都要包含在内;
3. 可适当拓展,不少于35词。
My family
There are people in my family. They're
and I. We live .
答案
范文:
My family
There are three people in my family. They're my father, my mother and I. We live on Moon Street. It's near my school. I usually go to school on foot. Sometimes my mother drives me to school. My mother is a nurse. She goes to work by car. My father is a worker. He goes to work by metro.
I like playing table tennis with my family and friends. I often play it with them in the park at weekends.
My family
There are three people in my family. They're my father, my mother and I. We live on Moon Street. It's near my school. I usually go to school on foot. Sometimes my mother drives me to school. My mother is a nurse. She goes to work by car. My father is a worker. He goes to work by metro.
I like playing table tennis with my family and friends. I often play it with them in the park at weekends.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My family”为题写书面表达,需结合思维导图的全部信息点:介绍家庭成员、居住位置、职业、出行方式和爱好。解题思路为:1. 先明确家庭人数及成员,完成基础介绍;2. 回答“Where do you live?”说明居住地点;3. 分别介绍自己和家人的职业,对应思维导图的“What do you do?”;4. 说明自己和家人的出行方式,对应“How do you go to school/work?”;5. 介绍自己的爱好,对应“What do you like doing?”,适当拓展细节,保证语句通顺、满足字数要求。
【解析】
范文围绕“My family”展开,先介绍家庭有3人,成员为父母和自己;接着说明居住在月亮街,靠近学校;然后分别介绍自己的出行方式(步行上学,有时妈妈开车送),父母的职业(妈妈是护士,开车上班;爸爸是工人,乘地铁上班);最后介绍自己喜欢和家人朋友打乒乓球,周末常去公园玩,完整覆盖思维导图所有信息点,语句通顺,符合题目要求。
【答案】
My family
There are three people in my family. They're my father, my mother and I. We live on Moon Street. It's near my school. I usually go to school on foot. Sometimes my mother drives me to school. My mother is a nurse. She goes to work by car. My father is a worker. He goes to work by metro.
I like playing table tennis with my family and friends. I often play it with them in the park at weekends.
【知识点】
英语书面表达;家庭成员介绍;特殊疑问句回答
【点评】
该范文完整覆盖思维导图的所有信息点,条理清晰,语句通顺,符合题目“条理清晰、不少于35词”的要求,适当拓展了细节,表达准确规范。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“My family”为题写书面表达,需结合思维导图的全部信息点:介绍家庭成员、居住位置、职业、出行方式和爱好。解题思路为:1. 先明确家庭人数及成员,完成基础介绍;2. 回答“Where do you live?”说明居住地点;3. 分别介绍自己和家人的职业,对应思维导图的“What do you do?”;4. 说明自己和家人的出行方式,对应“How do you go to school/work?”;5. 介绍自己的爱好,对应“What do you like doing?”,适当拓展细节,保证语句通顺、满足字数要求。
【解析】
范文围绕“My family”展开,先介绍家庭有3人,成员为父母和自己;接着说明居住在月亮街,靠近学校;然后分别介绍自己的出行方式(步行上学,有时妈妈开车送),父母的职业(妈妈是护士,开车上班;爸爸是工人,乘地铁上班);最后介绍自己喜欢和家人朋友打乒乓球,周末常去公园玩,完整覆盖思维导图所有信息点,语句通顺,符合题目要求。
【答案】
My family
There are three people in my family. They're my father, my mother and I. We live on Moon Street. It's near my school. I usually go to school on foot. Sometimes my mother drives me to school. My mother is a nurse. She goes to work by car. My father is a worker. He goes to work by metro.
I like playing table tennis with my family and friends. I often play it with them in the park at weekends.
【知识点】
英语书面表达;家庭成员介绍;特殊疑问句回答
【点评】
该范文完整覆盖思维导图的所有信息点,条理清晰,语句通顺,符合题目“条理清晰、不少于35词”的要求,适当拓展了细节,表达准确规范。
【难度系数】
0.5
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