2026年小题狂做全程测评卷五年级英语下册译林版第24页答案
七、书面表达。6分
根据思维导图提示,以“My family”为题,介绍你家的大致位置和家庭成员。
要求:1. 条理清晰,语句通顺,表达准确,书写规范;
2. 思维导图中的信息点都要包含在内;
3. 可适当拓展,不少于35词。

My family
There are
people in my family. They're

and I. We live
.







答案

范文:
My family
There are three people in my family. They're my father, my mother and I. We live on Moon Street. It's near my school. I usually go to school on foot. Sometimes my mother drives me to school. My mother is a nurse. She goes to work by car. My father is a worker. He goes to work by metro.
I like playing table tennis with my family and friends. I often play it with them in the park at weekends.

解析

【分析】
本题要求以“My family”为题写书面表达,需结合思维导图的全部信息点:介绍家庭成员、居住位置、职业、出行方式和爱好。解题思路为:1. 先明确家庭人数及成员,完成基础介绍;2. 回答“Where do you live?”说明居住地点;3. 分别介绍自己和家人的职业,对应思维导图的“What do you do?”;4. 说明自己和家人的出行方式,对应“How do you go to school/work?”;5. 介绍自己的爱好,对应“What do you like doing?”,适当拓展细节,保证语句通顺、满足字数要求。
【解析】
范文围绕“My family”展开,先介绍家庭有3人,成员为父母和自己;接着说明居住在月亮街,靠近学校;然后分别介绍自己的出行方式(步行上学,有时妈妈开车送),父母的职业(妈妈是护士,开车上班;爸爸是工人,乘地铁上班);最后介绍自己喜欢和家人朋友打乒乓球,周末常去公园玩,完整覆盖思维导图所有信息点,语句通顺,符合题目要求。
【答案】
My family
There are three people in my family. They're my father, my mother and I. We live on Moon Street. It's near my school. I usually go to school on foot. Sometimes my mother drives me to school. My mother is a nurse. She goes to work by car. My father is a worker. He goes to work by metro.
I like playing table tennis with my family and friends. I often play it with them in the park at weekends.
【知识点】
英语书面表达;家庭成员介绍;特殊疑问句回答
【点评】
该范文完整覆盖思维导图的所有信息点,条理清晰,语句通顺,符合题目“条理清晰、不少于35词”的要求,适当拓展了细节,表达准确规范。
【难度系数】
0.5