第4阶 实战演练
假设你是李明,你的英国笔友Tom对地球上的不同景观很感兴趣,请你给他写一封邮件,介绍一种你喜欢的景观(如沙漠、海洋、森林),包括它的特点、重要性以及我们应该如何保护它。
要求:1.语言通顺,逻辑清晰;
2.80词左右。

假设你是李明,你的英国笔友Tom对地球上的不同景观很感兴趣,请你给他写一封邮件,介绍一种你喜欢的景观(如沙漠、海洋、森林),包括它的特点、重要性以及我们应该如何保护它。
要求:1.语言通顺,逻辑清晰;
2.80词左右。
答案
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I’m extremely glad to tell you about my favourite landscape.
I like the forest best. The forest is full of tall and green trees. It’s like a big green world. It produces a great deal of oxygen for us to breathe. Also, it is a comfortable home for many lovely animals. It’s really crucial to our life. But now, many forests are being cut down by people. We should take action right away. Stop cutting down trees and plant more trees to protect the forest.
Best wishes!
Li Ming
Dear Tom,
I’m extremely glad to tell you about my favourite landscape.
I like the forest best. The forest is full of tall and green trees. It’s like a big green world. It produces a great deal of oxygen for us to breathe. Also, it is a comfortable home for many lovely animals. It’s really crucial to our life. But now, many forests are being cut down by people. We should take action right away. Stop cutting down trees and plant more trees to protect the forest.
Best wishes!
Li Ming
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李明的身份给英国笔友Tom写一封邮件,介绍自己喜欢的景观,需涵盖景观特点、重要性及保护措施,同时满足语言通顺、80词左右的要求。解题思路:首先确定介绍对象为森林(内容易组织);其次遵循书信格式,开头问候,正文分三部分:描述森林的外观特点、说明其对人类和动物的重要性、指出现状并提出保护措施;最后结尾祝福并署名,确保符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照英语书信规范格式写作:1. 开头用“Dear Tom”问候,点明写信目的;2. 正文介绍喜欢的景观是森林,描述其特点(满是高大绿树,像绿色大世界);3. 说明森林的重要性:为人类提供氧气,是动物的家园;4. 指出森林被砍伐的现状,提出保护措施:停止砍伐、多种树;5. 结尾用“Best wishes”,署名“Li Ming”,控制词数在80左右,保证语言通顺。
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I’m extremely glad to tell you about my favourite landscape.
I like the forest best. The forest is full of tall and green trees. It’s like a big green world. It produces a great deal of oxygen for us to breathe. Also, it is a comfortable home for many lovely animals. It’s really crucial to our life. But now, many forests are being cut down by people. We should take action right away. Stop cutting down trees and plant more trees to protect the forest.
Best wishes!
Li Ming
【知识点】英语书信写作、话题类书面表达
【点评】本题为英语话题书信写作题,考查学生的书信格式掌握、话题内容组织及语言运用能力,贴近生活实际,难度适中,能有效考查学生的综合写作能力。
【难度系数】0.7
本题要求以李明的身份给英国笔友Tom写一封邮件,介绍自己喜欢的景观,需涵盖景观特点、重要性及保护措施,同时满足语言通顺、80词左右的要求。解题思路:首先确定介绍对象为森林(内容易组织);其次遵循书信格式,开头问候,正文分三部分:描述森林的外观特点、说明其对人类和动物的重要性、指出现状并提出保护措施;最后结尾祝福并署名,确保符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照英语书信规范格式写作:1. 开头用“Dear Tom”问候,点明写信目的;2. 正文介绍喜欢的景观是森林,描述其特点(满是高大绿树,像绿色大世界);3. 说明森林的重要性:为人类提供氧气,是动物的家园;4. 指出森林被砍伐的现状,提出保护措施:停止砍伐、多种树;5. 结尾用“Best wishes”,署名“Li Ming”,控制词数在80左右,保证语言通顺。
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I’m extremely glad to tell you about my favourite landscape.
I like the forest best. The forest is full of tall and green trees. It’s like a big green world. It produces a great deal of oxygen for us to breathe. Also, it is a comfortable home for many lovely animals. It’s really crucial to our life. But now, many forests are being cut down by people. We should take action right away. Stop cutting down trees and plant more trees to protect the forest.
Best wishes!
Li Ming
【知识点】英语书信写作、话题类书面表达
【点评】本题为英语话题书信写作题,考查学生的书信格式掌握、话题内容组织及语言运用能力,贴近生活实际,难度适中,能有效考查学生的综合写作能力。
【难度系数】0.7
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