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下周英语课的主题是“My Sunday plan”。假如你是Sally，请你根据下面的表格提示，用英语写一篇短文为此做准备。不少于100词。
下周英语课的主题是“My Sunday plan”。假如你是Sally，请你根据下面的表格提示，用英语写一篇短文为此做准备。不少于100词。
答案
My Sunday plan
Hello everyone, I'm Sally. I make a careful plan for this coming Sunday.
I am going to get up at 7:00 a.m. At 8:00 a.m., I will have breakfast, I will have some bread and a cup of milk for it. Then at 9:30 a.m., I will do my homework at home, and I can finish all my lessons in about two hours. I will have lunch at 12:00 with my parents at home.
In the afternoon, I will go to the sports centre to exercise at 2:30 p.m. I will play ping-pong with my good friend there. I will go home at 4:45 p.m. Then I will have dinner at 6:00 p.m. After dinner, I will take a walk with my family in the nearby park at 7:00 p.m. And I will go to bed at 8:00 p.m.
I think I will have a great and happy Sunday.
Hello everyone, I'm Sally. I make a careful plan for this coming Sunday.
I am going to get up at 7:00 a.m. At 8:00 a.m., I will have breakfast, I will have some bread and a cup of milk for it. Then at 9:30 a.m., I will do my homework at home, and I can finish all my lessons in about two hours. I will have lunch at 12:00 with my parents at home.
In the afternoon, I will go to the sports centre to exercise at 2:30 p.m. I will play ping-pong with my good friend there. I will go home at 4:45 p.m. Then I will have dinner at 6:00 p.m. After dinner, I will take a walk with my family in the nearby park at 7:00 p.m. And I will go to bed at 8:00 p.m.
I think I will have a great and happy Sunday.
解析
【分析】
要完成“My Sunday plan”的英语写作，需遵循以下思路：1. 确定写作身份为Sally，时态用一般将来时（描述计划）；2. 采用时间顺序梳理表格中的活动，补充合理细节（如吃早饭的食物、锻炼的同伴等）让内容更饱满；3. 开头点明主题，结尾表达对周日的期待，确保字数不少于100词。
【解析】
1. 开头：介绍自己并引出周日计划，如“Hello everyone, I'm Sally. I make a careful plan for this coming Sunday.”；
2. 按时间顺序描述上午活动：7:00 a.m.起床，8:00 a.m.吃早饭（可补充“have some bread and a cup of milk”），9:30 a.m.做作业，12:00和父母吃午饭；
3. 描述下午及晚上活动：2:30 p.m.去体育中心锻炼（补充“play ping-pong with my good friend”），4:45 p.m.回家，6:00 p.m.吃晚饭，7:00 p.m.和家人散步，8:00 p.m.睡觉；
4. 结尾：表达对周日的期待，如“I think I will have a great and happy Sunday.”，确保内容连贯、字数达标。
【答案】
My Sunday plan
Hello everyone, I'm Sally. I make a careful plan for this coming Sunday.
I am going to get up at 7:00 a.m. At 8:00 a.m., I will have breakfast, I will have some bread and a cup of milk for it. Then at 9:30 a.m., I will do my homework at home, and I can finish all my lessons in about two hours. I will have lunch at 12:00 with my parents at home.
In the afternoon, I will go to the sports centre to exercise at 2:30 p.m. I will play ping-pong with my good friend there. I will go home at 4:45 p.m. Then I will have dinner at 6:00 p.m. After dinner, I will take a walk with my family in the nearby park at 7:00 p.m. And I will go to bed at 8:00 p.m.
I think I will have a great and happy Sunday.
【知识点】
英语写作、一般将来时、时间表达
【点评】
本文以时间为线索，清晰呈现了Sally的周日计划，内容充实，补充了合理细节使文章更生动，语言通顺，符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的计划类英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
要完成“My Sunday plan”的英语写作，需遵循以下思路：1. 确定写作身份为Sally，时态用一般将来时（描述计划）；2. 采用时间顺序梳理表格中的活动，补充合理细节（如吃早饭的食物、锻炼的同伴等）让内容更饱满；3. 开头点明主题，结尾表达对周日的期待，确保字数不少于100词。
【解析】
1. 开头：介绍自己并引出周日计划，如“Hello everyone, I'm Sally. I make a careful plan for this coming Sunday.”；
2. 按时间顺序描述上午活动：7:00 a.m.起床，8:00 a.m.吃早饭（可补充“have some bread and a cup of milk”），9:30 a.m.做作业，12:00和父母吃午饭；
3. 描述下午及晚上活动：2:30 p.m.去体育中心锻炼（补充“play ping-pong with my good friend”），4:45 p.m.回家，6:00 p.m.吃晚饭，7:00 p.m.和家人散步，8:00 p.m.睡觉；
4. 结尾：表达对周日的期待，如“I think I will have a great and happy Sunday.”，确保内容连贯、字数达标。
【答案】
My Sunday plan
Hello everyone, I'm Sally. I make a careful plan for this coming Sunday.
I am going to get up at 7:00 a.m. At 8:00 a.m., I will have breakfast, I will have some bread and a cup of milk for it. Then at 9:30 a.m., I will do my homework at home, and I can finish all my lessons in about two hours. I will have lunch at 12:00 with my parents at home.
In the afternoon, I will go to the sports centre to exercise at 2:30 p.m. I will play ping-pong with my good friend there. I will go home at 4:45 p.m. Then I will have dinner at 6:00 p.m. After dinner, I will take a walk with my family in the nearby park at 7:00 p.m. And I will go to bed at 8:00 p.m.
I think I will have a great and happy Sunday.
【知识点】
英语写作、一般将来时、时间表达
【点评】
本文以时间为线索，清晰呈现了Sally的周日计划，内容充实，补充了合理细节使文章更生动，语言通顺，符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的计划类英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
