实战演练
假设你们年级举办一场时装秀。请根据下面的几个要点问题，写一篇文章介绍一下这场时装秀的情况。
1. Who are going for the fashion show?
2. What clothes can we see at the show?
3. What do you think of the show?
要求:1. 包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
2. 70词左右。

Our Grade Fashion Show
Last week our Grade 7 held a great fashion show. All our teachers and students joined it, and many of my classmates acted as models.
We saw all kinds of clothes at the show: cool T-shirts and jeans, nice dresses, and some traditional Chinese clothes too. All the models looked very smart.
I think the show is really wonderful. It is a big success, and all of us had a good time that day.

【分析】
本题为要点式英语短文写作题，需围绕三个核心问题展开：时装秀的参与人员、展示的服装、个人对时装秀的评价。解题思路为：先明确写作主题，再依次覆盖所有要点，适当补充细节使内容连贯，控制词数在70词左右，符合初中英语写作要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明时装秀的主体与参与人员：七年级上周举办时装秀，全体师生参与，同学担任模特；
2. 中间列举展示的服装：包含T恤、牛仔裤、连衣裙及传统中国服饰；
3. 结尾表达对时装秀的评价：认为时装秀精彩成功，大家都很开心，调整语句使行文连贯，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
Our Grade Fashion Show
Last week our Grade 7 held a great fashion show. All our teachers and students joined it, and many of my classmates acted as models.
We saw all kinds of clothes at the show: cool T-shirts and jeans, nice dresses, and some traditional Chinese clothes too. All the models looked very smart.
I think the show is really wonderful. It is a big success, and all of us had a good time that day.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、要点整合表达
【点评】
本题为初中英语基础写作题，要求明确覆盖给定要点，需适当补充细节使内容充实，难度适中，能有效考查学生的英语表达与要点整合能力。
【难度系数】
0.5

【写作指导】
这是一篇给材料作文，根据所列举的几个要点问题，介绍一下时装秀的情况。根据提示可知：①人称：用第三人称；②时态：一般现在时；③写作时，从哪些人要参加时装秀表演，在时装秀上能看到哪些衣服入手，最后要发表自己的个人观点。注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【写作提纲】
The fashion show theme(主题) ... have a fashion show in the school hall.
content(内容) ... shows a coat. It is made of wool.
...wears a long silk dress. It's fit for summer.
... looks pretty in a pair of leather boots.
viewpoint(观点) I think ... are great and ... is wonderful.
【小试身手】

One possible version:
The students and teachers in Grade 7 have a fashion show in the school hall.
Many students wear clothes designed by themselves to join in the show. Sandy, from Class 2, shows a coat. It is made of wool. Millie, from Class 3, wears a long silk dress. It's fit for summer. Amy, from Class 4, looks pretty in a pair of leather boots.
I think those students are great and the show is wonderful.

【分析】本题是英语应用文写作题，解题思路为：首先明确写作要求（人称用第三人称、时态用一般现在时），再按照给定的主题、内容、观点三个结构，补充材料中省略的合理主语（如具体学生、年级师生），将服装细节与对应人物匹配，最后结合内容表达个人观点，确保语句通顺、逻辑清晰，符合英语写作规范。
【解析】1. 主题部分：确定时装秀的举办主体（七年级师生）、地点（学校礼堂），对应材料中“have a fashion show in the school hall”；2. 内容部分：给每件服装搭配具体人物（如Sandy、Millie、Amy），补充服装的细节信息（羊毛外套、适合夏季的丝绸长裙、皮靴），对应材料中服装相关要点；3. 观点部分：结合前面的内容，表达对参与学生和时装秀的评价，对应材料中“I think... are great and... is wonderful”；全程使用一般现在时，保证语句符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】One possible version:
The students and teachers in Grade 7 have a fashion show in the school hall.
Many students wear clothes designed by themselves to join in the show. Sandy, from Class 2, shows a coat. It is made of wool. Millie, from Class 3, wears a long silk dress. It's fit for summer. Amy, from Class 4, looks pretty in a pair of leather boots.
I think those students are great and the show is wonderful.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，一般现在时运用，要点整合
【点评】本题为根据给定要点的英语写作题，考查学生对要点的梳理、整合及英语表达能力，提示清晰，难度适中，适合学生练习基础写作。
【难度系数】0.5