初中英语 八年级上册 人教版
主题写作专项 练写作 答案D8
主题词网
优选词汇
动作 · decorate · cover · paint · stick · add…to… · pack up · hang up
物品 · poster · curtain · rug · scissors · glue · photo frame · fairy light
区域 · apartment · bedroom · balcony · bathroom · kitchen · dining room · living room
风格 · bright · comfortable · colorful · warm · modern · tidy · traditional
写作实例
→审人称:以第一人称为主
一个舒适、美观的居住环境能给自己和家人带来愉悦的心情。假如你是李明,想邀请你的好朋友迈克来帮忙装饰房间。请你根据以下提示写一封电子邮件。
→审时态:以一般现在时为主
要点提示:说明写信的目的,即邀请朋友帮忙装饰房间;列举出需要朋友帮忙的具体事项,如购买鲜花、制作海报等;表达你对朋友帮忙的期待。 →审主题
要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥,使邮件内容丰富、合理;
2.词数不少于80(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。 →审词数
Dear Mike,
How are you? I’m writing to ask for your help with something really important to me.
Best regards,
Li Ming
写作支架
优秀范文
Dear Mike, How are you? I'm writing to ask for your help with something really important to me. I want to decorate my room to make it more comfortable and more beautiful①. Could you please help me with a few things?
First②, I’d like you to buy some fresh flowers. They can add a touch of nature to③ the room. Also②, we can make a poster together and hang it up③ in my room. It will be creative and fun. What’s more②, we’ll need to go shopping for some materials. Don’t forget to③ bring a pair of scissors, some glue, and a brush, and if you have any paper-cuts or a painting that you think would look nice, please bring them along③, too.
I’d really appreciate your help.④ If⑤ you’re available this weekend, let me know. I’m sure we’ll have a great time and make my room look amazing. Thanks a lot!
Best regards, Li Ming
亮点评析
①用不定式及“make +it(形式宾语)+宾补”结构点明装饰房间的目的；
②用衔接词First、Also及What’s more有条理地说明需要帮忙的具体事项；
③信件主体部分灵活运用动词短语add…to、hang…up、Don’t forget to…及bring…along等，体现作者丰富的语言功底；
④用固定句式“I’d really appreciate…”表达感谢；
⑤用if条件句委婉提出请求，确定具体时间。

I want to decorate my room to make it more comfortable and more beautiful. Could you please help me with a few things?
First, I’d like you to buy some fresh flowers. They can add a touch of nature to the room. Also, we can make a poster together and hang it up in my room. It will be creative and fun. What’s more, we’ll need to go shopping for some materials. Don’t forget to bring a pair of scissors, some glue, and a brush, and if you have any paper-cuts or a painting that you think would look nice, please bring them along, too.
I’d really appreciate your help. If you’re available this weekend, let me know. I’m sure we’ll have a great time and make my room look amazing. Thanks a lot!

本题要求写一封邀请好友帮忙装饰房间的电子邮件，写作要求如下：1. 人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主；2. 内容需要覆盖三个核心要点：说明写信目的是邀请朋友帮忙装饰房间，列举购买鲜花、制作海报等具体帮忙事项，表达对朋友帮忙的期待；3. 词数不少于80，可适当发挥让内容合理丰富。
写作时可参考写作支架搭建结构：①开头段承接已给内容，点明自己想要装饰房间、打造舒适美观居住环境的想法，正式发出帮忙邀请；②中间段使用First、Also、What's more等衔接词，条理清晰地罗列需要对方协助的具体事项，灵活运用本单元学过的add...to、hang up等相关动词短语，让表达更生动；③结尾段用礼貌句式表达感谢，约定合适的时间，抒发对一起完成装饰的期待，符合邮件的交际场景。