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Ⅵ. Writing(作文)(本大题共1题,共20分)
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter最近对中国民俗很感兴趣,发电子邮件向你询问。请你给他回一封邮件,介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日,并说明它带给我们的意义。
(1)指出该节日的名称及人们在该节日通常做的事情；
(2)解释这个节日为什么具有重要的价值。
Dear Peter,
(60)
Yours,
Li Hua
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter最近对中国民俗很感兴趣,发电子邮件向你询问。请你给他回一封邮件,介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日,并说明它带给我们的意义。
(1)指出该节日的名称及人们在该节日通常做的事情；
(2)解释这个节日为什么具有重要的价值。
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese folk customs. Today I'd like to introduce the Spring Festival, which is the most important traditional festival in China.
During this festival, family get together and have a big dinner. People also clean their houses, put up red couplets, and give red envelopes to children.
At night, many people watch the Spring Festival Gala and set off fireworks.
This festival is very important because it stands for family reunion and good wishes.
It reminds us to stay close to our family and look forward to a new start in life.
(60)
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese folk customs. Today I'd like to introduce the Spring Festival, which is the most important traditional festival in China.
During this festival, family get together and have a big dinner. People also clean their houses, put up red couplets, and give red envelopes to children. At night, many people watch the Spring Festival Gala and set off fireworks.
This festival is very important because it stands for family reunion and good wishes. It reminds us to stay close to our family and look forward to a new start in life.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese folk customs. Today I'd like to introduce the Spring Festival, which is the most important traditional festival in China.
During this festival, family get together and have a big dinner. People also clean their houses, put up red couplets, and give red envelopes to children. At night, many people watch the Spring Festival Gala and set off fireworks.
This festival is very important because it stands for family reunion and good wishes. It reminds us to stay close to our family and look forward to a new start in life.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给英国笔友Peter回邮件，介绍中国传统节日，需包含两个核心要点：一是节日名称及相关习俗，二是节日的重要意义，词数不少于60。解题思路：1. 开头礼貌回应Peter对中国民俗的兴趣，点明介绍最具代表性的春节；2. 主体第一段列举春节的典型习俗，如家人团聚吃年夜饭、打扫房屋、贴春联、发红包、看春晚等；3. 主体第二段阐述春节的文化意义，即代表家庭团圆、承载美好祝愿，提醒人们珍惜亲情；4. 结尾规范邮件落款，确保内容覆盖所有要求，词数达标。
【解析】
按照邮件格式写作，步骤如下：1. 开头：用友好语气引出主题，说明要介绍春节；2. 描述习俗：清晰列举春节期间的常见活动，如家庭聚餐、打扫房屋、贴春联、给孩子发红包、观看春晚、放烟花等；3. 说明意义：解释春节的文化价值，即象征团圆与美好祝愿，提醒人们亲近家人、迎接新开始；4. 结尾标注落款，确保语言流畅，符合笔友交流的语气，满足词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese folk customs. Today I'd like to introduce the Spring Festival, which is the most important traditional festival in China.
During this festival, family get together and have a big dinner. People also clean their houses, put up red couplets, and give red envelopes to children. At night, many people watch the Spring Festival Gala and set off fireworks.
This festival is very important because it stands for family reunion and good wishes. It reminds us to stay close to our family and look forward to a new start in life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、中国传统节日英语表达、英语段落写作
【点评】
该作文符合题目所有要求，结构清晰，层次分明，内容完整，既介绍了春节的典型习俗，又准确说明了节日的文化意义，语言自然流畅，语气友好，符合笔友间的交流风格，词数达标，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以李华的身份给英国笔友Peter回邮件，介绍中国传统节日，需包含两个核心要点：一是节日名称及相关习俗，二是节日的重要意义，词数不少于60。解题思路：1. 开头礼貌回应Peter对中国民俗的兴趣，点明介绍最具代表性的春节；2. 主体第一段列举春节的典型习俗，如家人团聚吃年夜饭、打扫房屋、贴春联、发红包、看春晚等；3. 主体第二段阐述春节的文化意义，即代表家庭团圆、承载美好祝愿，提醒人们珍惜亲情；4. 结尾规范邮件落款，确保内容覆盖所有要求，词数达标。
【解析】
按照邮件格式写作，步骤如下：1. 开头：用友好语气引出主题，说明要介绍春节；2. 描述习俗：清晰列举春节期间的常见活动，如家庭聚餐、打扫房屋、贴春联、给孩子发红包、观看春晚、放烟花等；3. 说明意义：解释春节的文化价值，即象征团圆与美好祝愿，提醒人们亲近家人、迎接新开始；4. 结尾标注落款，确保语言流畅，符合笔友交流的语气，满足词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese folk customs. Today I'd like to introduce the Spring Festival, which is the most important traditional festival in China.
During this festival, family get together and have a big dinner. People also clean their houses, put up red couplets, and give red envelopes to children. At night, many people watch the Spring Festival Gala and set off fireworks.
This festival is very important because it stands for family reunion and good wishes. It reminds us to stay close to our family and look forward to a new start in life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、中国传统节日英语表达、英语段落写作
【点评】
该作文符合题目所有要求，结构清晰，层次分明，内容完整，既介绍了春节的典型习俗，又准确说明了节日的文化意义，语言自然流畅，语气友好，符合笔友间的交流风格，词数达标，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
