七、书面表达。
以“My Favourite Season”为题写一篇短文,内容包括:
最喜欢的季节 春天
天气 晴朗,万里无云;天气暖和;树叶变绿了,人们经常看到蜜蜂和蝴蝶在花丛中飞舞。
适合的活动 外出野炊的最佳时间,我们可以享受自然;
在有风的日子里,我们可以放风筝,放风筝很有趣,并且能够帮助我们锻炼以保持健康。
节日 我喜欢每年的植树节(Tree Planting Day)。人们去打扫公园和植树。
感受 ……(自拟一点)
My Favourite Season
以“My Favourite Season”为题写一篇短文,内容包括:
最喜欢的季节 春天
天气 晴朗,万里无云;天气暖和;树叶变绿了,人们经常看到蜜蜂和蝴蝶在花丛中飞舞。
适合的活动 外出野炊的最佳时间,我们可以享受自然;
在有风的日子里,我们可以放风筝,放风筝很有趣,并且能够帮助我们锻炼以保持健康。
节日 我喜欢每年的植树节(Tree Planting Day)。人们去打扫公园和植树。
感受 ……(自拟一点)
My Favourite Season
答案
One possible version:
My Favourite Season
Spring is my favourite season. It's sunny and there's not a cloud in the sky. It is warm and the leaves turn green. People often see bees and butterflies flying among the flowers.
Spring is the best time to go on a picnic. We can enjoy the natural world. We can fly kites on windy days. Flying kites is interesting and it can help us exercise to keep healthy.
I like Tree Planting Day every year. People go to plant trees and clean up the park on that day.
Spring is the beginning of the year. Spring is wonderful.
My Favourite Season
Spring is my favourite season. It's sunny and there's not a cloud in the sky. It is warm and the leaves turn green. People often see bees and butterflies flying among the flowers.
Spring is the best time to go on a picnic. We can enjoy the natural world. We can fly kites on windy days. Flying kites is interesting and it can help us exercise to keep healthy.
I like Tree Planting Day every year. People go to plant trees and clean up the park on that day.
Spring is the beginning of the year. Spring is wonderful.
解析
【分析】首先审题,明确题目要求为以“My Favourite Season”为题写短文,指定最喜欢的季节是春天,需涵盖天气特征、适合的活动、植树节相关内容,还需自拟感受。接着采用“总-分-总”结构构思:开头直接点题,说明春天是自己最爱的季节;中间分述天气(晴朗无云、温暖、树叶变绿、蜂蝶飞舞)、活动(野炊、放风筝)、植树节的内容;结尾补充自拟的感受(春天是一年的开始,很美好)。最后将中文要点转化为符合英语表达习惯的语句,确保逻辑连贯、用词准确。
【解析】按照构思的结构,依次组织语言:开头点题后,描述春天的天气与景物;接着介绍适合的活动;再提及植树节的相关内容;最后补充自拟的感受,形成完整的短文,具体内容如下。
【答案】My Favourite Season
Spring is my favourite season. It's sunny and there's not a cloud in the sky. It is warm and the leaves turn green. People often see bees and butterflies flying among the flowers.
Spring is the best time to go on a picnic. We can enjoy the natural world. We can fly kites on windy days. Flying kites is interesting and it can help us exercise to keep healthy.
I like Tree Planting Day every year. People go to plant trees and clean up the park on that day.
Spring is the beginning of the year. Spring is wonderful.
【知识点】英语书面表达、季节话题写作、节日词汇运用
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求,全面覆盖了所有给定要点,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语句通顺自然,用词准确恰当,自拟的感受合理贴合主题,符合初中英语书面表达的标准要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照构思的结构,依次组织语言:开头点题后,描述春天的天气与景物;接着介绍适合的活动;再提及植树节的相关内容;最后补充自拟的感受,形成完整的短文,具体内容如下。
【答案】My Favourite Season
Spring is my favourite season. It's sunny and there's not a cloud in the sky. It is warm and the leaves turn green. People often see bees and butterflies flying among the flowers.
Spring is the best time to go on a picnic. We can enjoy the natural world. We can fly kites on windy days. Flying kites is interesting and it can help us exercise to keep healthy.
I like Tree Planting Day every year. People go to plant trees and clean up the park on that day.
Spring is the beginning of the year. Spring is wonderful.
【知识点】英语书面表达、季节话题写作、节日词汇运用
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求,全面覆盖了所有给定要点,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语句通顺自然,用词准确恰当,自拟的感受合理贴合主题,符合初中英语书面表达的标准要求。
【难度系数】0.5
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