登录
六、[2025浙江期中模拟]书面表达。（共15分）
学校举办了一期以“介绍我的家庭”为主题的国际生交流活动。请你根据表格内容，写一篇英语文章，描述你的家庭和家庭生活，在交流活动中作介绍。
Useful expressions:
• There are four people ...
• We like to ... We often ...
• This photo shows ... You can see ... I feel ...
要求:1. 文章内容需要包括表格左栏中的至少两个要点,表格右栏的内容仅供参考,表格下方的Useful expressions供选择使用。
2. 可适当发挥,词数70左右(已给出的部分不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Hello, everyone. I'm very happy to introduce my family to you.
学校举办了一期以“介绍我的家庭”为主题的国际生交流活动。请你根据表格内容，写一篇英语文章，描述你的家庭和家庭生活，在交流活动中作介绍。
Useful expressions:
• There are four people ...
• We like to ... We often ...
• This photo shows ... You can see ... I feel ...
要求:1. 文章内容需要包括表格左栏中的至少两个要点,表格右栏的内容仅供参考,表格下方的Useful expressions供选择使用。
2. 可适当发挥,词数70左右(已给出的部分不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Hello, everyone. I'm very happy to introduce my family to you.
There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my sister and I.
My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. They are very busy. But they try their best to spend time staying with my sister and me.
On weekends, they often take us out. We like to play games in the park. And we often watch movies together. There is so much fun.
Look at this photo. My parents are getting ready for a big dinner. We children are learning to cook. We are so happy.
I love my family!
Thank you!
答案
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm very happy to introduce my family to you. There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my sister and I.
My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. They are very busy. But they try their best to spend time staying with my sister and me. On weekends, they often take us out. We like to play games in the park. And we often watch movies together. There is so much fun. Look at this photo. My parents are getting ready for a big dinner. We children are learning to cook. We are so happy. I love my family!
Thank you!
Hello, everyone. I'm very happy to introduce my family to you. There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my sister and I.
My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. They are very busy. But they try their best to spend time staying with my sister and me. On weekends, they often take us out. We like to play games in the park. And we often watch movies together. There is so much fun. Look at this photo. My parents are getting ready for a big dinner. We children are learning to cook. We are so happy. I love my family!
Thank you!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇介绍家庭的英语书面表达，解题思路如下：首先明确需涵盖表格中至少两个写作要点（如家庭成员、家庭活动），可补充家庭时刻使内容更丰富；其次运用题目给出的有用表达（如There are four people...、We like to...等）；接着避免使用真实的地名、校名和人名，控制词数在70左右；最后构建清晰结构：开头引入，介绍家庭成员及职业，描述家庭共同活动，选取一个具体的家庭时刻，结尾表达对家庭的热爱。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接给定的开头句，用“There are four people in my family...”介绍家庭成员；2. 说明父母的职业，体现父母对家庭的付出；3. 用“We like to...”“We often...”等表达家庭共同的活动；4. 用“This photo shows...”引出具体的家庭时刻，描述场景和自身感受；5. 结尾表达对家庭的爱，确保内容完整、符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm very happy to introduce my family to you. There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my sister and I.
My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. They are very busy. But they try their best to spend time staying with my sister and me. On weekends, they often take us out. We like to play games in the park. And we often watch movies together. There is so much fun. Look at this photo. My parents are getting ready for a big dinner. We children are learning to cook. We are so happy. I love my family!
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、介绍类英语写作、英语常用表达
【点评】
范文紧扣“介绍我的家庭”主题，涵盖了家庭成员、家庭活动、家庭时刻三个要点，运用了题目提供的有用表达，语言通顺自然，情感真挚，符合词数要求，是符合题目要求的优秀范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇介绍家庭的英语书面表达，解题思路如下：首先明确需涵盖表格中至少两个写作要点（如家庭成员、家庭活动），可补充家庭时刻使内容更丰富；其次运用题目给出的有用表达（如There are four people...、We like to...等）；接着避免使用真实的地名、校名和人名，控制词数在70左右；最后构建清晰结构：开头引入，介绍家庭成员及职业，描述家庭共同活动，选取一个具体的家庭时刻，结尾表达对家庭的热爱。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接给定的开头句，用“There are four people in my family...”介绍家庭成员；2. 说明父母的职业，体现父母对家庭的付出；3. 用“We like to...”“We often...”等表达家庭共同的活动；4. 用“This photo shows...”引出具体的家庭时刻，描述场景和自身感受；5. 结尾表达对家庭的爱，确保内容完整、符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm very happy to introduce my family to you. There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my sister and I.
My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. They are very busy. But they try their best to spend time staying with my sister and me. On weekends, they often take us out. We like to play games in the park. And we often watch movies together. There is so much fun. Look at this photo. My parents are getting ready for a big dinner. We children are learning to cook. We are so happy. I love my family!
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、介绍类英语写作、英语常用表达
【点评】
范文紧扣“介绍我的家庭”主题，涵盖了家庭成员、家庭活动、家庭时刻三个要点，运用了题目提供的有用表达，语言通顺自然，情感真挚，符合词数要求，是符合题目要求的优秀范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
