Ⅲ. Read and write.
学校举办主题为“灾难中的英雄”英文演讲比赛,请结合提示问题,写一篇英语短文介绍你心中的英雄。

My hero
学校举办主题为“灾难中的英雄”英文演讲比赛,请结合提示问题,写一篇英语短文介绍你心中的英雄。
My hero
答案
参考范文:
My hero
The hero in my heart is a common firefighter.
Last year, a big forest fire broke out near our city. Lots of people were in great danger. This firefighter rushed into the fire again and again. He saved three little kids and more than 20 old people out of the fire, and he even got his legs hurt during the rescue.
He becomes my hero because he is so brave when facing the disaster. He tries his best to protect other people's lives. I want to be a person as great as him when I grow up.
My hero
The hero in my heart is a common firefighter.
Last year, a big forest fire broke out near our city. Lots of people were in great danger. This firefighter rushed into the fire again and again. He saved three little kids and more than 20 old people out of the fire, and he even got his legs hurt during the rescue.
He becomes my hero because he is so brave when facing the disaster. He tries his best to protect other people's lives. I want to be a person as great as him when I grow up.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语写作题,要求围绕“灾难中的英雄”主题,结合提示的三个问题展开写作。解题思路为:第一步确定英雄的具体身份;第二步描述英雄在灾难中的具体事迹;第三步阐述该英雄成为自己心中英雄的原因,写作时需注意语句通顺、逻辑清晰,符合英语表达规范。
【解析】
按照提示问题的顺序组织内容:首先点明英雄身份,接着叙述其在灾难中的救援事迹,最后说明成为英雄的原因,同时可适当表达自身感悟。
【答案】
My hero
The hero in my heart is a common firefighter.
Last year, a big forest fire broke out near our city. Lots of people were in great danger. This firefighter rushed into the fire again and again. He saved three little kids and more than 20 old people out of the fire, and he even got his legs hurt during the rescue.
He becomes my hero because he is so brave when facing the disaster. He tries his best to protect other people's lives. I want to be a person as great as him when I grow up.
【知识点】
英语写作、记叙文写作
【点评】
本题结合实际主题考察学生的英语书面表达能力,要求学生围绕指定主题组织内容,清晰叙述事件并表达观点,贴近生活实际,便于学生结合自身经历发挥。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语写作题,要求围绕“灾难中的英雄”主题,结合提示的三个问题展开写作。解题思路为:第一步确定英雄的具体身份;第二步描述英雄在灾难中的具体事迹;第三步阐述该英雄成为自己心中英雄的原因,写作时需注意语句通顺、逻辑清晰,符合英语表达规范。
【解析】
按照提示问题的顺序组织内容:首先点明英雄身份,接着叙述其在灾难中的救援事迹,最后说明成为英雄的原因,同时可适当表达自身感悟。
【答案】
My hero
The hero in my heart is a common firefighter.
Last year, a big forest fire broke out near our city. Lots of people were in great danger. This firefighter rushed into the fire again and again. He saved three little kids and more than 20 old people out of the fire, and he even got his legs hurt during the rescue.
He becomes my hero because he is so brave when facing the disaster. He tries his best to protect other people's lives. I want to be a person as great as him when I grow up.
【知识点】
英语写作、记叙文写作
【点评】
本题结合实际主题考察学生的英语书面表达能力,要求学生围绕指定主题组织内容,清晰叙述事件并表达观点,贴近生活实际,便于学生结合自身经历发挥。
【难度系数】
0.6
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