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[2025 江苏苏州期中]下周的英语课上，老师要求每位同学做一个主题为“Saving Our Planet”的演讲，请根据以下表格内容，写一篇演讲稿，词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
注意：(1)内容必须包含提示的所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2)表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
(3)请勿在文本中出现真实的校名、人名等。
Dear classmates,
It's my honour to give a speech about saving our planet.
That's all. Thank you for listening.
注意：(1)内容必须包含提示的所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2)表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
(3)请勿在文本中出现真实的校名、人名等。
Dear classmates,
It's my honour to give a speech about saving our planet.
Our planet is sick because of us. People cut down too many trees, waste water, and pollute the air and rivers. This harms animals and our environment.
We must act now! First, reduce waste. Turn off lights when they're unnecessary and save water. Second, reuse things like shopping bags and water bottles. Third, recycle paper, plastic, and glass. Planting trees also helps a lot.
That's all. Thank you for listening.
答案
【参考范文】
Dear classmates,
It's my honour to give a speech about saving our planet. Our planet is sick because of us. People cut down too many trees, waste water, and pollute the air and rivers. This harms animals and our environment.
We must act now! First, reduce waste. Turn off lights when they're unnecessary and save water. Second, reuse things like shopping bags and water bottles. Third, recycle paper, plastic, and glass. Planting trees also helps a lot.
By doing these small things, we can make a big difference. Let's work together to protect our beautiful home!
That's all. Thank you for listening.
Dear classmates,
It's my honour to give a speech about saving our planet. Our planet is sick because of us. People cut down too many trees, waste water, and pollute the air and rivers. This harms animals and our environment.
We must act now! First, reduce waste. Turn off lights when they're unnecessary and save water. Second, reuse things like shopping bags and water bottles. Third, recycle paper, plastic, and glass. Planting trees also helps a lot.
By doing these small things, we can make a big difference. Let's work together to protect our beautiful home!
That's all. Thank you for listening.
解析
【分析】本题要求以“Saving Our Planet”为主题写英语演讲稿，需覆盖表格中“地球生病的原因”和“我们能做的措施”两大要点，结合已给开头结尾，补充内容时要语句通顺、意思连贯，适当发挥，符合词数要求。写作时先明确结构：先说明地球生病的原因，再列举具体保护措施，最后呼吁行动，确保要点不遗漏。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，阐述地球生病的原因：人们过度砍树、浪费水资源、污染空气和河流，危害环境与动物；2. 分点说明具体措施：减少浪费（随手关灯、节约用水）、重复利用（购物袋、水瓶等）、回收利用（纸、塑料、玻璃等），可补充种树的细节；3. 结尾发出呼吁，强调小行动能带来大改变，呼应主题。注意用词准确，符合演讲稿的口语化语气，控制词数在要求范围内。
【答案】Dear classmates,
It's my honour to give a speech about saving our planet. Our planet is sick because of us. People cut down too many trees, waste water, and pollute the air and rivers. This harms animals and our environment.
We must act now! First, reduce waste. Turn off lights when they're unnecessary and save water. Second, reuse things like shopping bags and water bottles. Third, recycle paper, plastic, and glass. Planting trees also helps a lot.
By doing these small things, we can make a big difference. Let's work together to protect our beautiful home!
That's all. Thank you for listening.
【知识点】英语演讲稿写作、环保话题英语表达
【点评】范文完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰（原因-措施-呼吁），语言简洁通顺，符合初中英语写作要求，是一篇符合题目标准的优秀演讲稿。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，阐述地球生病的原因：人们过度砍树、浪费水资源、污染空气和河流，危害环境与动物；2. 分点说明具体措施：减少浪费（随手关灯、节约用水）、重复利用（购物袋、水瓶等）、回收利用（纸、塑料、玻璃等），可补充种树的细节；3. 结尾发出呼吁，强调小行动能带来大改变，呼应主题。注意用词准确，符合演讲稿的口语化语气，控制词数在要求范围内。
【答案】Dear classmates,
It's my honour to give a speech about saving our planet. Our planet is sick because of us. People cut down too many trees, waste water, and pollute the air and rivers. This harms animals and our environment.
We must act now! First, reduce waste. Turn off lights when they're unnecessary and save water. Second, reuse things like shopping bags and water bottles. Third, recycle paper, plastic, and glass. Planting trees also helps a lot.
By doing these small things, we can make a big difference. Let's work together to protect our beautiful home!
That's all. Thank you for listening.
【知识点】英语演讲稿写作、环保话题英语表达
【点评】范文完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰（原因-措施-呼吁），语言简洁通顺，符合初中英语写作要求，是一篇符合题目标准的优秀演讲稿。
【难度系数】0.6
