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三、书面表达。
假设你是刘林，你和你的父母上周去了黄山旅游。请你根据表格中的内容写一篇短文，介绍你们的旅游经历。
要求:1. 文章必须包括表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥;2.词数不少于70。
参考词汇:黄山 Mount Huangshan 高铁 high-speed train
迎客松 the Guest-Greeting Pine
假设你是刘林，你和你的父母上周去了黄山旅游。请你根据表格中的内容写一篇短文，介绍你们的旅游经历。
要求:1. 文章必须包括表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥;2.词数不少于70。
参考词汇:黄山 Mount Huangshan 高铁 high-speed train
迎客松 the Guest-Greeting Pine
My name is Liu Lin. Last week I went to Mount Huangshan with my parents. We got up at 6:00 a. m. It was far, so we went there by high-speed train, and it took us two hours to get there. It was sunny and very hot. We found a hotel to live in. After that, we climbed the mountain. Luckily, we saw the Guest-Greeting Pine. We were very excited. And we took some photos. Then we went back to the hotel. We ate some delicious food. I also bought many gifts for my friends. We stayed there for two days. Then we came back. We had a great time.
答案
One possible version:
My name is Liu Lin. Last week I went to Mount Huangshan with my parents. We got up at 6:00 a. m. It was far, so we went there by high-speed train, and it took us two hours to get there. It was sunny and very hot. We found a hotel to live in. After that, we climbed the mountain. Luckily, we saw the Guest-Greeting Pine. We were very excited. And we took some photos. Then we went back to the hotel. We ate some delicious food. I also bought many gifts for my friends. We stayed there for two days. Then we came back. We had a great time.
My name is Liu Lin. Last week I went to Mount Huangshan with my parents. We got up at 6:00 a. m. It was far, so we went there by high-speed train, and it took us two hours to get there. It was sunny and very hot. We found a hotel to live in. After that, we climbed the mountain. Luckily, we saw the Guest-Greeting Pine. We were very excited. And we took some photos. Then we went back to the hotel. We ate some delicious food. I also bought many gifts for my friends. We stayed there for two days. Then we came back. We had a great time.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以刘林的身份介绍上周和父母去黄山的旅游经历。解题思路：1. 确定文章时态为一般过去时，对应描述过去发生的旅游事件；2. 梳理表格所有要点：时间（上周）、地点（黄山）、起床时间（早上6点）、交通（高铁，耗时2小时）、天气（晴朗炎热）、活动（爬山、吃美食、买礼物等），同时可适当补充细节让内容更丰富；3. 按“开头介绍出行→行程安排→活动内容→结尾表达感受”的逻辑组织语言，确保涵盖所有要点且词数达标。
【解析】
1. 开头点明身份和出行背景：My name is Liu Lin. Last week I went to Mount Huangshan with my parents.
2. 依次描述时间、交通、天气：We got up at 6:00 a.m. It was far, so we went there by high-speed train, and it took us two hours to get there. It was sunny and very hot.
3. 补充活动细节（涵盖爬山、美食、买礼物，适当拓展）：We found a hotel to live in. After that, we climbed the mountain. Luckily, we saw the Guest-Greeting Pine. We were very excited. And we took some photos. Then we went back to the hotel. We ate some delicious food. I also bought many gifts for my friends.
4. 结尾补充停留时间和感受：We stayed there for two days. Then we came back. We had a great time.
【答案】
One possible version:
My name is Liu Lin. Last week I went to Mount Huangshan with my parents. We got up at 6:00 a. m. It was far, so we went there by high-speed train, and it took us two hours to get there. It was sunny and very hot. We found a hotel to live in. After that, we climbed the mountain. Luckily, we saw the Guest-Greeting Pine. We were very excited. And we took some photos. Then we went back to the hotel. We ate some delicious food. I also bought many gifts for my friends. We stayed there for two days. Then we came back. We had a great time.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；一般过去时；旅游话题写作
【点评】
本题围绕旅游话题考查英语书面表达，要求学生准确运用一般过去时态，完整覆盖表格要点并适当拓展细节，能有效考查学生的语言组织和运用能力，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以刘林的身份介绍上周和父母去黄山的旅游经历。解题思路：1. 确定文章时态为一般过去时，对应描述过去发生的旅游事件；2. 梳理表格所有要点：时间（上周）、地点（黄山）、起床时间（早上6点）、交通（高铁，耗时2小时）、天气（晴朗炎热）、活动（爬山、吃美食、买礼物等），同时可适当补充细节让内容更丰富；3. 按“开头介绍出行→行程安排→活动内容→结尾表达感受”的逻辑组织语言，确保涵盖所有要点且词数达标。
【解析】
1. 开头点明身份和出行背景：My name is Liu Lin. Last week I went to Mount Huangshan with my parents.
2. 依次描述时间、交通、天气：We got up at 6:00 a.m. It was far, so we went there by high-speed train, and it took us two hours to get there. It was sunny and very hot.
3. 补充活动细节（涵盖爬山、美食、买礼物，适当拓展）：We found a hotel to live in. After that, we climbed the mountain. Luckily, we saw the Guest-Greeting Pine. We were very excited. And we took some photos. Then we went back to the hotel. We ate some delicious food. I also bought many gifts for my friends.
4. 结尾补充停留时间和感受：We stayed there for two days. Then we came back. We had a great time.
【答案】
One possible version:
My name is Liu Lin. Last week I went to Mount Huangshan with my parents. We got up at 6:00 a. m. It was far, so we went there by high-speed train, and it took us two hours to get there. It was sunny and very hot. We found a hotel to live in. After that, we climbed the mountain. Luckily, we saw the Guest-Greeting Pine. We were very excited. And we took some photos. Then we went back to the hotel. We ate some delicious food. I also bought many gifts for my friends. We stayed there for two days. Then we came back. We had a great time.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；一般过去时；旅游话题写作
【点评】
本题围绕旅游话题考查英语书面表达，要求学生准确运用一般过去时态，完整覆盖表格要点并适当拓展细节，能有效考查学生的语言组织和运用能力，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
