七、书面表达。(10分)
根据图片提示,写一篇小故事。

要求:1. 语句通顺、连贯,书写规范;2. 不少于 5
句话。
参考词汇:near the river, pick the mushrooms(蘑菇)
根据图片提示,写一篇小故事。
要求:1. 语句通顺、连贯,书写规范;2. 不少于 5
句话。
参考词汇:near the river, pick the mushrooms(蘑菇)
There are many mushrooms near the
river. Rabbit wants to pick some, but she
can't, because she can't swim. Rabbit is
sad. Elephant sees Rabbit and asks, "Why
are you sad?" Rabbit answers, "I want to
pick some mushrooms, but I can't swim."
Elephant says, "I can help you. You can sit
on my back." Rabbit is very happy. Now
they can pick the mushrooms.
river. Rabbit wants to pick some, but she
can't, because she can't swim. Rabbit is
sad. Elephant sees Rabbit and asks, "Why
are you sad?" Rabbit answers, "I want to
pick some mushrooms, but I can't swim."
Elephant says, "I can help you. You can sit
on my back." Rabbit is very happy. Now
they can pick the mushrooms.
答案
示例:
There are many mushrooms near the
river. Rabbit wants to pick some, but she
can't, because she can't swim. Rabbit is
sad. Elephant sees Rabbit and asks, "Why
are you sad?" Rabbit answers, "I want to
pick some mushrooms, but I can't swim."
Elephant says, "I can help you. You can sit
on my back." Rabbit is very happy. Now
they can pick the mushrooms.
There are many mushrooms near the
river. Rabbit wants to pick some, but she
can't, because she can't swim. Rabbit is
sad. Elephant sees Rabbit and asks, "Why
are you sad?" Rabbit answers, "I want to
pick some mushrooms, but I can't swim."
Elephant says, "I can help you. You can sit
on my back." Rabbit is very happy. Now
they can pick the mushrooms.
解析
【分析】
首先先观察图片内容,提取核心元素:小兔子、大象、河流、河岸边的蘑菇,结合给出的参考词汇near the river、pick the mushrooms梳理故事逻辑:第一步先交代故事发生的背景,点明河岸边长了很多蘑菇;第二步设置冲突,小兔子想要采蘑菇却不会游泳,没法渡过小河,十分难过;第三步引入大象角色,大象发现情绪低落的小兔子,主动询问缘由;第四步给出解决办法,大象提出可以驮着小兔子过河;第五步交代故事结局,小兔子十分开心,二者顺利过河采到蘑菇。按照起因-经过-结果的顺序组织语言,保证语句通顺,句数不少于5句,自然融入提示词汇即可完成写作。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 开篇铺垫场景:用There be句型介绍河边生长着很多蘑菇,引出小兔子想要采蘑菇的想法。
2. 交代困境:说明小兔子不会游泳,无法过河采蘑菇,情绪低落。
3. 推进情节:大象路过发现难过的小兔子,主动询问它不开心的原因。
4. 解决矛盾:得知小兔子的难处后,大象主动提出让小兔子坐在自己背上,驮它过河。
5. 收尾结局:小兔子十分开心,最后二者顺利过河,成功采到蘑菇。
完整参考范文如下:
There are many mushrooms near the river. Rabbit wants to pick some, but she can't, because she can't swim. Rabbit is sad. Elephant sees Rabbit and asks, "Why are you sad?" Rabbit answers, "I want to pick some mushrooms, but I can't swim." Elephant says, "I can help you. You can sit on my back." Rabbit is very happy. Now they can pick the mushrooms.
【答案】
示例:
There are many mushrooms near the
river. Rabbit wants to pick some, but she
can't, because she can't swim. Rabbit is
sad. Elephant sees Rabbit and asks, "Why
are you sad?" Rabbit answers, "I want to
pick some mushrooms, but I can't swim."
Elephant says, "I can help you. You can sit
on my back." Rabbit is very happy. Now
they can pick the mushrooms.
【知识点】
看图叙事写作
常用短语运用
情景作文
【点评】
本题属于小学阶段的基础看图写作题,情节简单易懂,还给出了核心参考词汇降低写作门槛,学生只需要理清故事的起因经过结果,用学过的基础句型串联情节,保证语句通顺、达到要求的句数即可完成作答,同时也能锻炼学生的叙事逻辑和英语表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先先观察图片内容,提取核心元素:小兔子、大象、河流、河岸边的蘑菇,结合给出的参考词汇near the river、pick the mushrooms梳理故事逻辑:第一步先交代故事发生的背景,点明河岸边长了很多蘑菇;第二步设置冲突,小兔子想要采蘑菇却不会游泳,没法渡过小河,十分难过;第三步引入大象角色,大象发现情绪低落的小兔子,主动询问缘由;第四步给出解决办法,大象提出可以驮着小兔子过河;第五步交代故事结局,小兔子十分开心,二者顺利过河采到蘑菇。按照起因-经过-结果的顺序组织语言,保证语句通顺,句数不少于5句,自然融入提示词汇即可完成写作。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 开篇铺垫场景:用There be句型介绍河边生长着很多蘑菇,引出小兔子想要采蘑菇的想法。
2. 交代困境:说明小兔子不会游泳,无法过河采蘑菇,情绪低落。
3. 推进情节:大象路过发现难过的小兔子,主动询问它不开心的原因。
4. 解决矛盾:得知小兔子的难处后,大象主动提出让小兔子坐在自己背上,驮它过河。
5. 收尾结局:小兔子十分开心,最后二者顺利过河,成功采到蘑菇。
完整参考范文如下:
There are many mushrooms near the river. Rabbit wants to pick some, but she can't, because she can't swim. Rabbit is sad. Elephant sees Rabbit and asks, "Why are you sad?" Rabbit answers, "I want to pick some mushrooms, but I can't swim." Elephant says, "I can help you. You can sit on my back." Rabbit is very happy. Now they can pick the mushrooms.
【答案】
示例:
There are many mushrooms near the
river. Rabbit wants to pick some, but she
can't, because she can't swim. Rabbit is
sad. Elephant sees Rabbit and asks, "Why
are you sad?" Rabbit answers, "I want to
pick some mushrooms, but I can't swim."
Elephant says, "I can help you. You can sit
on my back." Rabbit is very happy. Now
they can pick the mushrooms.
【知识点】
看图叙事写作
常用短语运用
情景作文
【点评】
本题属于小学阶段的基础看图写作题,情节简单易懂,还给出了核心参考词汇降低写作门槛,学生只需要理清故事的起因经过结果,用学过的基础句型串联情节,保证语句通顺、达到要求的句数即可完成作答,同时也能锻炼学生的叙事逻辑和英语表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
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