② 典例赏析
一年四季,每一季都有独特的韵味。你校将开展以“My Favourite Season at School”为题的英语演讲比赛,假如你是Peter,请你根据以下问题提示和要求,写一篇英语演讲稿。
提示:1. What is your school like during that season?
2. What do you often do at your school during that season?
3. Why do you like this season most at your school?

要求:1. 文章须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
2. 词数:80—100(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Favourite Season at School
Good morning, everyone! My name is Peter. I'm glad to introduce my favourite season at my school here.
My favourite season at school is
审题指导:
1.体裁:应用文 2.时态:一般现在时 3.人称:以第一人称为主
写作框架:

优秀范文:
My Favourite Season at School
Good morning, everyone! My name is Peter. I'm glad to introduce my favourite season at my school here.
My favourite season at school is spring. In spring, our school comes alive①. Trees grow new leaves, and flowers bloom everywhere. The air smells fresh, and the weather is perfectly warm.
We often have outdoor lessons under the blue sky, read books on the grass, or play football with friends②. I also love watching birds build their nests in the old tree near our classroom.
I love spring most because it feels like③ a new beginning. ⑤It brings energy, colours and smiles to our school. Everyone seems happier and more active. Spring turns our school into a cheerful and beautiful place④ to learn and grow.
That's all. Thank you for listening.

亮点词块
①come alive 生动起来
②play football with friends 和朋友一起踢足球
③feel like 感觉就像
④turn...into...把……变成……
高分句子
⑤I love spring most because it feels like a new beginning. 我最爱春天,因为它感觉就像一个新的开始。(because引导原因状语从句)

My favourite season at school is spring. In spring, our school comes alive. Trees grow new leaves, and flowers bloom everywhere. The air smells fresh, and the weather is perfectly warm.
We often have outdoor lessons under the blue sky, read books on the grass, or play football with friends. I also love watching birds build their nests in the old tree near our classroom.
I love spring most because it feels like a new beginning. It brings energy, colours and smiles to our school. Everyone seems happier and more active. Spring turns our school into a cheerful and beautiful place to learn and grow.
That's all. Thank you for listening.

【分析】本题为英语应用文写作（演讲稿），要求以Peter的身份完成“My Favourite Season at School”的演讲。需遵循三个核心提示：1. 描述学校在所选季节的样貌；2. 列举在学校该季节的活动；3. 说明喜欢该季节的原因。需使用一般现在时，以第一人称为主，开头已给出，要衔接自然，控制词数在80-100之间，同时运用亮点词块和高分句式提升文章质量。
【解析】首先确定最喜欢的季节为春天，对应提示1：描写学校春天的景象——树长新叶、花开遍地、空气清新、天气温暖；对应提示2：列举学校里的活动——上户外课、在草地上读书、和朋友踢足球、看鸟在教室旁的树上筑巢；对应提示3：说明喜欢的原因——春天是新的开始，给学校带来活力、色彩与笑容，大家更开心活跃，学校成为学习成长的美好地方；最后按演讲稿格式收尾致谢，完成写作。
【答案】My favourite season at school is spring. In spring, our school comes alive. Trees grow new leaves, and flowers bloom everywhere. The air smells fresh, and the weather is perfectly warm.
We often have outdoor lessons under the blue sky, read books on the grass, or play football with friends. I also love watching birds build their nests in the old tree near our classroom.
I love spring most because it feels like a new beginning. It brings energy, colours and smiles to our school. Everyone seems happier and more active. Spring turns our school into a cheerful and beautiful place to learn and grow.
That's all. Thank you for listening.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、季节话题英语表达
【点评】范文紧扣题目所有要求，覆盖全部提示信息，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，运用了come alive、turn...into...等亮点短语，以及because引导的原因状语从句等高分句式，语言流畅自然，符合初中英语写作的评分标准。
【难度系数】0.7