十二、书面表达。(5分)
Mary and her classmates changed a lot in six years. What about you?
请运用学过的知识,以“My Changes”为题,从外貌、性格、爱好、能力等方面,写一段话,描述你自己的变化。不少于5句话。

Word Bank
short tall thin heavy strong shy quiet active
hard-working ride a bike speak English dance singing
going hiking playing football doing kung fu...
My Changes
Hello, my dear friends. I'm in Grade Six now. Before, I
Mary and her classmates changed a lot in six years. What about you?
请运用学过的知识,以“My Changes”为题,从外貌、性格、爱好、能力等方面,写一段话,描述你自己的变化。不少于5句话。
Word Bank
short tall thin heavy strong shy quiet active
hard-working ride a bike speak English dance singing
going hiking playing football doing kung fu...
My Changes
Hello, my dear friends. I'm in Grade Six now. Before, I
答案
One possible version:
My Changes
Hello, my dear friends. I’m in Grade Six now. Before, I was short. I was quiet. I couldn’t read or write. I liked playing football. I didn’t like winter because I thought it was too cold. Now, I’m different. I am tall. I’m active. I can read and write very well. I like swimming. I usually go swimming in summer.
My Changes
Hello, my dear friends. I’m in Grade Six now. Before, I was short. I was quiet. I couldn’t read or write. I liked playing football. I didn’t like winter because I thought it was too cold. Now, I’m different. I am tall. I’m active. I can read and write very well. I like swimming. I usually go swimming in summer.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书面表达题,要求以“My Changes”为题描述自身变化。解题思路:1. 明确时态:描述过去的情况用一般过去时,描述现在的情况用一般现在时;2. 结合题目给出的Word Bank(外貌、性格、能力、爱好类词汇),从外貌、性格、能力、爱好等方面体现变化;3. 确保句子不少于5句,语句通顺、逻辑清晰,符合六年级英语写作要求。
【解析】
先写过去(Before)的情况,用一般过去时,结合外貌、性格、能力、爱好类词汇,如“was short”“was quiet”“couldn’t read or write”“liked playing football”等;再写现在(Now)的情况,用一般现在时,对应描述变化,如“am tall”“am active”“can read and write very well”“like swimming”等,组织成连贯的语句,保证时态正确、内容完整。
【答案】
My Changes
Hello, my dear friends. I’m in Grade Six now. Before, I was short. I was quiet. I couldn’t read or write. I liked playing football. I didn’t like winter because I thought it was too cold. Now, I’m different. I am tall. I’m active. I can read and write very well. I like swimming. I usually go swimming in summer.
【知识点】
一般过去时、一般现在时、英语书面表达
【点评】
本题考查学生运用两种时态描述自身变化的能力,需结合给定词汇,从多维度体现变化,重点考查时态的正确使用和语句的连贯性,符合六年级英语的写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题是英语书面表达题,要求以“My Changes”为题描述自身变化。解题思路:1. 明确时态:描述过去的情况用一般过去时,描述现在的情况用一般现在时;2. 结合题目给出的Word Bank(外貌、性格、能力、爱好类词汇),从外貌、性格、能力、爱好等方面体现变化;3. 确保句子不少于5句,语句通顺、逻辑清晰,符合六年级英语写作要求。
【解析】
先写过去(Before)的情况,用一般过去时,结合外貌、性格、能力、爱好类词汇,如“was short”“was quiet”“couldn’t read or write”“liked playing football”等;再写现在(Now)的情况,用一般现在时,对应描述变化,如“am tall”“am active”“can read and write very well”“like swimming”等,组织成连贯的语句,保证时态正确、内容完整。
【答案】
My Changes
Hello, my dear friends. I’m in Grade Six now. Before, I was short. I was quiet. I couldn’t read or write. I liked playing football. I didn’t like winter because I thought it was too cold. Now, I’m different. I am tall. I’m active. I can read and write very well. I like swimming. I usually go swimming in summer.
【知识点】
一般过去时、一般现在时、英语书面表达
【点评】
本题考查学生运用两种时态描述自身变化的能力,需结合给定词汇,从多维度体现变化,重点考查时态的正确使用和语句的连贯性,符合六年级英语的写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
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