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主题词网
优选词汇
邀请 · invite...to... · would like to · be welcome to... · invitation to... · why not · how about
活动 · speech · meeting · training · social · event · take place
安排 · show sb. around · find out · pay attention to · offer · sign · keep (...)away from...
期待 · look forward to · one’s reply · hope to... · an honour to do... · can’t wait to · be excited to...
写作实例
「2026 重庆南岸期末」
→审人称：以第一人称为主
寒假即将来临,请以 Teng Fei 的名义,参考表格里①②③点信息,写一封邀请函,邀请 Peter 来重庆和你一起度假。
→审主题
| ①Introduction | one month, weather, food... |
| ②Event details | plans, an opportunity to..., b
are to... |
| ③Ending | a great honour to have you... |
要求:80 词左右。
→审时态: 以一般现在时为主
审要点
Dear Peter,
I would like to invite you to my city to have the winter vacation.
Yours sincerely,
Teng Fei
写作支架
开头 — 第一段: 表达邀请意图并说明时间 → I would like... Our winter vacation lasts about , which will be a perfect time to .
中间 — 第二段: 简单介绍当地的天气情况,说明具体的活动安排 → The weather is quite . We can not only , but also . What’s more, if you would like, we could also and .（高分句式1）
结尾 — 第三段: 点明此行的意义,提醒对方准备物品,表达诚挚期待 → This trip will be a good opportunity for you to . Be sure to pack and bring . It would be a great honour to have you here.（高分句式2）I really look forward to !
优秀范文
Dear Peter,
I would like to invite you to my city to have the winter vacation.
Our winter vacation lasts about one month, which① will be a perfect time to enjoy Chongqing together.
The weather is quite mild. We can not only taste delicious local food like hot pot but also② visit interesting places. What’s more, if you would like③, we could also take a mountain light rail ride and explore museums.
This trip will be a good opportunity④ for you to experience Chinese culture④ and practice language skills④. Be sure to pack some warm clothes and bring a camera. It would be a great honour to have you here.⑤ I really look forward to④ spending the holiday with you!
Yours sincerely,
Teng Fei
亮点评析
①用 which 引导定语从句对寒假进行补充说明,自然地引出“这是共游重庆的好时机”;
②用 not only...but also...点明此次旅游的活动安排;
③用 if 条件句既给出了额外活动选项,又充分尊重对方的意愿,体现了邀请的诚意;
④ 用 opportunity、experience Chinese culture、practice language skills、look forward to 体现了作者较为扎实的词汇储备;
⑤用 It would be a great honour to...句式表达荣幸之情。
主题词网
优选词汇
邀请 · invite...to... · would like to · be welcome to... · invitation to... · why not · how about
活动 · speech · meeting · training · social · event · take place
安排 · show sb. around · find out · pay attention to · offer · sign · keep (...)away from...
期待 · look forward to · one’s reply · hope to... · an honour to do... · can’t wait to · be excited to...
写作实例
「2026 重庆南岸期末」
→审人称：以第一人称为主
寒假即将来临,请以 Teng Fei 的名义,参考表格里①②③点信息,写一封邀请函,邀请 Peter 来重庆和你一起度假。
→审主题
| ①Introduction | one month, weather, food... |
| ②Event details | plans, an opportunity to..., b
are to... || ③Ending | a great honour to have you... |
要求:80 词左右。
→审时态: 以一般现在时为主
审要点
Dear Peter,
I would like to invite you to my city to have the winter vacation.
Yours sincerely,
Teng Fei
写作支架
开头 — 第一段: 表达邀请意图并说明时间 → I would like... Our winter vacation lasts about , which will be a perfect time to .
中间 — 第二段: 简单介绍当地的天气情况,说明具体的活动安排 → The weather is quite . We can not only , but also . What’s more, if you would like, we could also and .（高分句式1）
结尾 — 第三段: 点明此行的意义,提醒对方准备物品,表达诚挚期待 → This trip will be a good opportunity for you to . Be sure to pack and bring . It would be a great honour to have you here.（高分句式2）I really look forward to !
优秀范文
Dear Peter,
I would like to invite you to my city to have the winter vacation.
Our winter vacation lasts about one month, which① will be a perfect time to enjoy Chongqing together.
The weather is quite mild. We can not only taste delicious local food like hot pot but also② visit interesting places. What’s more, if you would like③, we could also take a mountain light rail ride and explore museums.
This trip will be a good opportunity④ for you to experience Chinese culture④ and practice language skills④. Be sure to pack some warm clothes and bring a camera. It would be a great honour to have you here.⑤ I really look forward to④ spending the holiday with you!
Yours sincerely,
Teng Fei
亮点评析
①用 which 引导定语从句对寒假进行补充说明,自然地引出“这是共游重庆的好时机”;
②用 not only...but also...点明此次旅游的活动安排;
③用 if 条件句既给出了额外活动选项,又充分尊重对方的意愿,体现了邀请的诚意;
④ 用 opportunity、experience Chinese culture、practice language skills、look forward to 体现了作者较为扎实的词汇储备;
⑤用 It would be a great honour to...句式表达荣幸之情。
答案
【解析】：本题是人教版八年级上册沟通交流主题的应用文写作题，要求以Teng Fei的名义给Peter写一封邀请他寒假来重庆同游的邀请函，需满足以下要求：1. 以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主，词数80左右；2. 覆盖全部指定要点：介绍寒假时长、重庆天气与美食相关信息，说明度假活动安排，使用`an opportunity to...`、`be sure to...`、`a great honour to have you`等指定表达；3. 语气礼貌真诚，符合邀请信的文体要求。写作时可按照给出的写作支架分层完成：开篇点明寒假时长，自然引出邀约；中间介绍当地情况与活动安排，多用本单元学过的优选词汇；结尾点明旅行意义，提醒对方准备物品，表达诚挚期待。
【答案】：
写作支架对应填空答案：
1. one month
2. enjoy Chongqing together
3. mild
4. taste delicious local food like hot pot
5. visit interesting places
6. take a mountain light rail ride
7. explore museums
8. experience Chinese culture and practice language skills
9. some warm clothes
10. a camera
11. spending the holiday with you
完整邀请函范文：
Dear Peter,
I would like to invite you to my city to have the winter vacation.
Our winter vacation lasts about one month, which will be a perfect time to enjoy Chongqing together.
The weather is quite mild. We can not only taste delicious local food like hot pot but also visit interesting places. What's more, if you would like, we could also take a mountain light rail ride and explore museums.
This trip will be a good opportunity for you to experience Chinese culture and practice language skills. Be sure to pack some warm clothes and bring a camera. It would be a great honour to have you here. I really look forward to spending the holiday with you!
Yours sincerely,
Teng Fei
【答案】：
写作支架对应填空答案：
1. one month
2. enjoy Chongqing together
3. mild
4. taste delicious local food like hot pot
5. visit interesting places
6. take a mountain light rail ride
7. explore museums
8. experience Chinese culture and practice language skills
9. some warm clothes
10. a camera
11. spending the holiday with you
完整邀请函范文：
Dear Peter,
I would like to invite you to my city to have the winter vacation.
Our winter vacation lasts about one month, which will be a perfect time to enjoy Chongqing together.
The weather is quite mild. We can not only taste delicious local food like hot pot but also visit interesting places. What's more, if you would like, we could also take a mountain light rail ride and explore museums.
This trip will be a good opportunity for you to experience Chinese culture and practice language skills. Be sure to pack some warm clothes and bring a camera. It would be a great honour to have you here. I really look forward to spending the holiday with you!
Yours sincerely,
Teng Fei
