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了作者对环境保护的深刻思考和强烈的社会责任感，具有很好的示范意义。
① 使用 from fresh water to rich land 具体化地球资源，比抽象描述更具说服力；
② 该句使用了“地球在哭泣”的拟人化修辞，更能激发共鸣；
③ 使用 As middle school students 进行身份定位，强调主体责任，突破常规环保文章的泛泛而谈；
④ by 后面使用三个动宾结构，形成韵律感。
“环保”话题的投稿。假设你是李华，请以“Protecting the forests”为题，从森林的重要性、人类活动对它的影响、它面临的问题等方面撰写一篇文章，呼吁人们保护森林，词数80左右。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第三人称为主;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先介绍森林的重要性,再说它现在面临的严峻问题,并给出解决方案,最后呼吁人们行动起来,保护森林。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
① 使用 from fresh water to rich land 具体化地球资源，比抽象描述更具说服力；
② 该句使用了“地球在哭泣”的拟人化修辞，更能激发共鸣；
③ 使用 As middle school students 进行身份定位，强调主体责任，突破常规环保文章的泛泛而谈；
④ by 后面使用三个动宾结构，形成韵律感。
“环保”话题的投稿。假设你是李华，请以“Protecting the forests”为题，从森林的重要性、人类活动对它的影响、它面临的问题等方面撰写一篇文章，呼吁人们保护森林，词数80左右。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第三人称为主;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先介绍森林的重要性,再说它现在面临的严峻问题,并给出解决方案,最后呼吁人们行动起来,保护森林。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance.
They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air.
Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems.
People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die.
To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案
One possible version:
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
解析
【分析】本题要求以“Protecting the forests”为题撰写一篇80词左右的英语短文，需遵循给定的要点结构：第一段说明森林的重要性，第二段阐述森林面临的问题及解决措施，第三段发出保护森林的呼吁。写作时需使用一般现在时，以第三人称为主，紧扣要点，语言通顺简洁，符合初中英语写作的基本要求。
【解析】写作分三步：1. 第一段围绕森林的重要性展开，可写森林是动植物的家园，为人类提供新鲜空气，还能调节气候、防止水土流失；2. 第二段先点明森林面临的问题（如人类砍树开荒），再给出具体解决办法（多植树、减少用纸、呼吁他人参与）；3. 第三段发出行动呼吁，号召大家参与森林保护活动。按照该思路组织语言，确保词数达标，语句连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
【知识点】英语应用文写作；森林保护话题
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，分段明确对应要点，语言简洁规范，有效传达了保护森林的主题，符合初中英语写作的示范要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作分三步：1. 第一段围绕森林的重要性展开，可写森林是动植物的家园，为人类提供新鲜空气，还能调节气候、防止水土流失；2. 第二段先点明森林面临的问题（如人类砍树开荒），再给出具体解决办法（多植树、减少用纸、呼吁他人参与）；3. 第三段发出行动呼吁，号召大家参与森林保护活动。按照该思路组织语言，确保词数达标，语句连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming. This destroys the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Calling on more people to protect forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
【知识点】英语应用文写作；森林保护话题
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，分段明确对应要点，语言简洁规范，有效传达了保护森林的主题，符合初中英语写作的示范要求。
【难度系数】0.5
