(湖北恩施州期末)假如你是阳光中学七年级的学生李华,你看到英语校刊Sunshine Weekly发布的一则俱乐部招新启事,请根据启事的内容与要求,用英语写一封电子邮件申请加入其中一个俱乐部。
JOIN A CLUB! Do you want to make friends, learn something new or have fun? Here are three clubs for you—the music club, the English club and the sports club. Which one do you want to join? Write an email to tell us:
—Your name, age, looks, after-school activities
—The club you want to join
—Why you want to join it
Please send your email to sunshineweekly@ 163. com by next Friday. We hope you enjoy yourself in our clubs.
要求:1.必须包含所有要点信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名;
3.词数不少于60,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School.
Yours,
Li Hua
第一步 学审题
学审题,明晰写作思路
1. 审主题:题干要求以李华的名义写一封申请加入俱乐部的申请信。
2. 审文体:题干要求以李华的名义写一封申请加入俱乐部的申请信,文体为应用文。
3. 审人称:题干要求以李华的名义写一封申请加入俱乐部的申请信,人称为第一人称。
4. 审时态:介绍个人信息以及申请原因,应以一般现在时为主。
5. 审要点:①介绍个人信息、申请加入的俱乐部及申请加入的原因;②表达期待与感谢。
第二步 搭框架
搭框架,掌握写作技巧

第三步 背范文
背范文,品析高分佳作
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. I am 13 years old, and I have a strong interest in English. In my free time, I enjoy reading English books and watching English movies.
I would like to join the English club because I want to improve my English speaking and writing skills. ① I believe that by joining the club, I will have more opportunities to practise my English with my classmates and learn from experienced teachers. ② Also, I hope to make new friends who share the same interest in English.
I am looking forward to your reply. ③ Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
音频朗读
亮点赏析
①句中使用"would like to do sth."句型,丰富了句型结构;使用because引导原因状语从句,表达想加入英语俱乐部的原因,丰富了文章细节;
②句中使用亮点词汇opportunity、learn from、experienced,使表达更高级;
③句中使用亮点词汇look forward to,表达对加入俱乐部的期待。

I am 13 years old, and I have a strong interest in English. In my free time, I enjoy reading English books and watching English movies.
I would like to join the English club because I want to improve my English speaking and writing skills. I believe that by joining the club, I will have more opportunities to practise my English with my classmates and learn from experienced teachers. Also, I hope to make new friends who share the same interest in English.
I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you for your time and consideration.

本题要求写一篇英语俱乐部申请信，属于应用文写作。需以第一人称、一般现在时完成创作，写作时要涵盖所有要点：先介绍个人基本信息与兴趣爱好，接着说明想要加入的俱乐部，再阐述加入原因，包括提升英语技能、获得练习机会、向老师学习、结交同好，最后表达期待与感谢，合理运用所学句型和词汇，如would like to, improve...skills等，保证词数达标。