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13. What can we put in △?（不超过10个词）
》创新表达—写作能力提升练
》创新表达—写作能力提升练
答案
A proper natural transition sentence.
解析
本题为开放性写作创新表达题，答案不唯一，作答词数不超过10个，内容符合英语写作的合理逻辑即可。
写作例析
上周五,全校师生观看了"中国核潜艇之父(Father of China's Nuclear Submarines)"黄旭华院士的视频,他的事迹令人感动。请你根据提示内容,写一篇80~100词的英文短文,介绍黄旭华院士。要点如下:
1.基本信息:中国科学家,1926年生于广东汕尾,2025年逝世。2.成长和事迹:早年对科学和工程学极感兴趣。不畏困难,终生致力于中国核潜艇研究。在核潜艇方面发挥重要作用,使中国国防(national defense)得到有力的加强。3.影响:2019年获得"共和国勋章"(the Medal of the Republic)。
参考词汇: devote 致力于 contribution 贡献
[审题指导]1.体裁:说明文
2.时态:一般过去时 3.人称:第三人称
[思路构建]
[精彩范文]
Huang Xuhua, a well-known Chinese scientist, was born in 1926 in Guangdong Province. From an early age, he showed a great interest in science and engineering, and he was good at solving difficult problems.
He devoted his life to developing China's first nuclear submarine. Building submarines was really challenging work, and he faced many problems. However, he never gave up. He played an important role in the success of China's nuclear submarine project. Thanks to his work, China now has powerful submarines and they can protect the country well. His work has made a great contribution to China's national defense.
Huang won many awards for his great achievements. In 2019, he received the Medal of the Republic, one of China's highest honours. People call him the Father of China's Nuclear Submarines. His spirit is a great inspiration to many people. We should learn from him.
高分点评:1.采用"总-分-总"结构,层次清楚,结构完整。 2.大量运用短语使文章丰富精彩,如: from an early age, show a great interest in, be good at, give up, play an important role in。 3. However, thanks to 等词汇使文章衔接流畅。
上周五,全校师生观看了"中国核潜艇之父(Father of China's Nuclear Submarines)"黄旭华院士的视频,他的事迹令人感动。请你根据提示内容,写一篇80~100词的英文短文,介绍黄旭华院士。要点如下:
1.基本信息:中国科学家,1926年生于广东汕尾,2025年逝世。2.成长和事迹:早年对科学和工程学极感兴趣。不畏困难,终生致力于中国核潜艇研究。在核潜艇方面发挥重要作用,使中国国防(national defense)得到有力的加强。3.影响:2019年获得"共和国勋章"(the Medal of the Republic)。
参考词汇: devote 致力于 contribution 贡献
[审题指导]1.体裁:说明文
2.时态:一般过去时 3.人称:第三人称
[思路构建]
[精彩范文]
Huang Xuhua, a well-known Chinese scientist, was born in 1926 in Guangdong Province. From an early age, he showed a great interest in science and engineering, and he was good at solving difficult problems.
He devoted his life to developing China's first nuclear submarine. Building submarines was really challenging work, and he faced many problems. However, he never gave up. He played an important role in the success of China's nuclear submarine project. Thanks to his work, China now has powerful submarines and they can protect the country well. His work has made a great contribution to China's national defense.
Huang won many awards for his great achievements. In 2019, he received the Medal of the Republic, one of China's highest honours. People call him the Father of China's Nuclear Submarines. His spirit is a great inspiration to many people. We should learn from him.
高分点评:1.采用"总-分-总"结构,层次清楚,结构完整。 2.大量运用短语使文章丰富精彩,如: from an early age, show a great interest in, be good at, give up, play an important role in。 3. However, thanks to 等词汇使文章衔接流畅。
答案
Huang Xuhua is a respected Chinese scientist. He was born in Shanwei, Guangdong in 1926 and passed away in 2025.
He showed great interest in science and engineering from an early age. Not fearing difficulties, he devoted all his life to China's nuclear submarine research. He played an important role in this field, greatly strengthening China's national defense.
He received the Medal of the Republic in 2019. His spirit is always a great inspiration to all of us.
He showed great interest in science and engineering from an early age. Not fearing difficulties, he devoted all his life to China's nuclear submarine research. He played an important role in this field, greatly strengthening China's national defense.
He received the Medal of the Republic in 2019. His spirit is always a great inspiration to all of us.
解析
本题要求写一篇80~100词的英文人物介绍短文，1. 体裁为说明文，以第三人称书写，核心时态为一般过去时；2. 写作可分为三部分：第一部分介绍黄旭华的基本身份、生卒籍贯信息，覆盖对应要点；第二部分介绍他早年的兴趣、攻坚克难终生研究核潜艇的事迹，点明他对我国国防的重大贡献，覆盖对应要点；第三部分介绍他2019年获得共和国勋章的相关荣誉，点明其精神的激励意义，覆盖所有给定要点；3. 写作时可灵活使用提示的参考词汇devote、contribution，借助衔接词让语句流畅，避免语法错误，控制词数在要求范围内。
实战演练
榜样的激励作用是无穷的。杂交水稻之父袁隆平、中国航天奠基人钱学森、机器人之父王兴兴、遨游太空的女工程师王浩泽等都是青少年的榜样。哪位榜样激励了你？学校英文报正在开展以“An Inspiring Person”为题的征文活动。请根据下列提示谈谈你的想法并分享你的体会。
提示：1. Who do you think is inspiring?
2. Why is he/she inspiring?
3. What can you learn from him/her?
要求：80 ~ 100 词。
An Inspiring Person
榜样的激励作用是无穷的。杂交水稻之父袁隆平、中国航天奠基人钱学森、机器人之父王兴兴、遨游太空的女工程师王浩泽等都是青少年的榜样。哪位榜样激励了你？学校英文报正在开展以“An Inspiring Person”为题的征文活动。请根据下列提示谈谈你的想法并分享你的体会。
提示：1. Who do you think is inspiring?
2. Why is he/she inspiring?
3. What can you learn from him/her?
要求：80 ~ 100 词。
An Inspiring Person
Everyone must know the scientist Yuan Longping. According to me, he is a very inspiring person.
Yuan Longping was born in 1930. When he was young, he was sad to know many people in China suffered from hunger.
So after leaving college, he began the research of the hybrid rice. He spent most of his time doing research in the field.
Though it was difficult to work outside, he never gave up. Finally, he successfully developed the hybrid rice.
His research benefited the people all over the world. For his achievement, he was called "the Father of Hybrid Rice".
In my opinion, Yuan Longping is a great and kind scientist.
From him, I learn that we should keep trying when facing challenges and care more about others.
Though he has been dead, he will live in our hearts forever.
答案
创新表达—写作能力提升练
实战演练
An Inspiring Person
Everyone must know the scientist Yuan Longping. According to me, he is a very inspiring person.
Yuan Longping was born in 1930. When he was young, he was sad to know many people in China suffered from hunger. So after leaving college, he began the research of the hybrid rice. He spent most of his time doing research in the field. Though it was difficult to work outside, he never gave up. Finally, he successfully developed the hybrid rice. His research benefited the people all over the world. For his achievement, he was called "the Father of Hybrid Rice".
In my opinion, Yuan Longping is a great and kind scientist. From him, I learn that we should keep trying when facing challenges and care more about others. Though he has been dead, he will live in our hearts forever.
【思路分析】第一段直接引入话题，点明激励自己的人物；第二段介绍榜样人物的事迹及成就；最后一段总结人物特点，阐述要向榜样人物学习的精神并升华主题。
实战演练
An Inspiring Person
Everyone must know the scientist Yuan Longping. According to me, he is a very inspiring person.
Yuan Longping was born in 1930. When he was young, he was sad to know many people in China suffered from hunger. So after leaving college, he began the research of the hybrid rice. He spent most of his time doing research in the field. Though it was difficult to work outside, he never gave up. Finally, he successfully developed the hybrid rice. His research benefited the people all over the world. For his achievement, he was called "the Father of Hybrid Rice".
In my opinion, Yuan Longping is a great and kind scientist. From him, I learn that we should keep trying when facing challenges and care more about others. Though he has been dead, he will live in our hearts forever.
【思路分析】第一段直接引入话题，点明激励自己的人物；第二段介绍榜样人物的事迹及成就；最后一段总结人物特点，阐述要向榜样人物学习的精神并升华主题。
