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假设你是张燕，根据下列提示，给你的外国笔友 Jack 写一封电子邮件，描述一下中国中秋节的情况。内容包含：
1. 中秋节的日期；
2. 中国人在中秋节的习俗(如吃团圆饭、赏月、讲嫦娥的故事等)；
3. 你对中秋节的感受。
注意:1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 内容必须包含所给要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
3. 文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:the fifteenth day of lunar August(农历八月十五);get together(团聚)
Dear Jack,
Let me tell you something about the Mid-Autumn Festival in China.
Yours,
Zhang Yan
假设你是张燕，根据下列提示，给你的外国笔友 Jack 写一封电子邮件，描述一下中国中秋节的情况。内容包含：
1. 中秋节的日期；
2. 中国人在中秋节的习俗(如吃团圆饭、赏月、讲嫦娥的故事等)；
3. 你对中秋节的感受。
注意:1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 内容必须包含所给要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
3. 文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:the fifteenth day of lunar August(农历八月十五);get together(团聚)
Dear Jack,
Let me tell you something about the Mid-Autumn Festival in China.
Yours,
Zhang Yan
答案
One possible version：
Dear Jack,
Let me tell you something about the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It usually falls on the fifteenth day of lunar August.
People believe that the full moon is a symbol of reunion. They often give best wishes to each other at this special time. On this day people usually go back home to get together, enjoying a large meal with their family. At night, they admire the full moon, share delicious moon cakes with their family and tell stories about Chang'e.
Spending traditional Chinese festivals with our family can make us feel the love and warmth of our family.
Yours,
Zhang Yan
Dear Jack,
Let me tell you something about the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It usually falls on the fifteenth day of lunar August.
People believe that the full moon is a symbol of reunion. They often give best wishes to each other at this special time. On this day people usually go back home to get together, enjoying a large meal with their family. At night, they admire the full moon, share delicious moon cakes with their family and tell stories about Chang'e.
Spending traditional Chinese festivals with our family can make us feel the love and warmth of our family.
Yours,
Zhang Yan
解析
【分析】本题为英语书信写作题，要求以张燕的身份给外国笔友Jack写邮件介绍中国中秋节，需覆盖三个核心要点：①中秋节的日期；②中秋节的习俗（吃团圆饭、赏月、讲嫦娥故事等）；③个人对中秋节的感受。解题思路为：先承接给定开头，依次介绍节日基本信息（日期）、具体习俗，最后表达个人感受，注意用词准确、语句连贯，符合邮件亲切的语气，控制词数要求。
【解析】写作时，首先承接开头点明中秋节是中国重要传统节日，日期为农历八月十五；接着介绍习俗：人们会回家团聚吃团圆饭，夜晚赏月、分享月饼、讲述嫦娥的故事；最后表达感受：和家人共度传统节日能感受到亲情的温暖，确保覆盖所有要点，语句连贯自然。
【答案】One possible version：
Dear Jack,
Let me tell you something about the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It usually falls on the fifteenth day of lunar August.
People believe that the full moon is a symbol of reunion. They often give best wishes to each other at this special time. On this day people usually go back home to get together, enjoying a large meal with their family. At night, they admire the full moon, share delicious moon cakes with their family and tell stories about Chang'e.
Spending traditional Chinese festivals with our family can make us feel the love and warmth of our family.
Yours,
Zhang Yan
【知识点】英语书信写作、中国传统节日英语表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，聚焦中国传统文化的英语介绍，要求学生掌握书信格式、节日相关词汇，能清晰传递文化信息并融入个人情感，是初中英语常见的写作题型，兼顾语言运用与文化传播。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时，首先承接开头点明中秋节是中国重要传统节日，日期为农历八月十五；接着介绍习俗：人们会回家团聚吃团圆饭，夜晚赏月、分享月饼、讲述嫦娥的故事；最后表达感受：和家人共度传统节日能感受到亲情的温暖，确保覆盖所有要点，语句连贯自然。
【答案】One possible version：
Dear Jack,
Let me tell you something about the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It usually falls on the fifteenth day of lunar August.
People believe that the full moon is a symbol of reunion. They often give best wishes to each other at this special time. On this day people usually go back home to get together, enjoying a large meal with their family. At night, they admire the full moon, share delicious moon cakes with their family and tell stories about Chang'e.
Spending traditional Chinese festivals with our family can make us feel the love and warmth of our family.
Yours,
Zhang Yan
【知识点】英语书信写作、中国传统节日英语表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，聚焦中国传统文化的英语介绍，要求学生掌握书信格式、节日相关词汇，能清晰传递文化信息并融入个人情感，是初中英语常见的写作题型，兼顾语言运用与文化传播。
【难度系数】0.5
