三、教材佳句仿写·核心句式训练
1. 教材原句:A life without health is like a river without water.
仿写:人生没有朋友,犹如日子没有阳光。
2. 教材原句:I get nine hours of sleep every night, so I am always full of energy.
仿写:这个商店里充满了各种各样美味的食物。
3. 教材原句:It is hard for me to say no to cakes.
仿写:按时吃饭对我们来说很重要。
1. 教材原句:A life without health is like a river without water.
仿写:人生没有朋友,犹如日子没有阳光。
A life without friends is like a day without sunshine.
2. 教材原句:I get nine hours of sleep every night, so I am always full of energy.
仿写:这个商店里充满了各种各样美味的食物。
The shop is full of all kinds of delicious food.
3. 教材原句:It is hard for me to say no to cakes.
仿写:按时吃饭对我们来说很重要。
It is important for us to have meals on time.
答案
1. A life without friends is like a day without sunshine.
2. The shop is full of all kinds of delicious food.
3. It is important for us to have meals on time.
2. The shop is full of all kinds of delicious food.
3. It is important for us to have meals on time.
四、典例剖析·主题写作行文指导
假如你是阳光中学的初一学生John,请根据下列提示写一篇英语短文,介绍自己的日常生活和饮食习惯。
人称:第一人称 时态:一般现在时
早饭(面包、牛奶等),步行去上学
午饭(米饭、蔬菜等),一
朋友们却喜欢吃快餐食品
晚饭(鱼、面条等),饭后散步
要求:
1. 词数80左右,不要逐词逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I am John. I am from Sunshine Middle School.
假如你是阳光中学的初一学生John,请根据下列提示写一篇英语短文,介绍自己的日常生活和饮食习惯。
人称:第一人称 时态:一般现在时
早饭(面包、牛奶等),步行去上学
午饭(米饭、蔬菜等),一
晚饭(鱼、面条等),饭后散步
要求:
1. 词数80左右,不要逐词逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I am John. I am from Sunshine Middle School.
答案
I am John. I am from Sunshine Middle School.
I have bread and milk for breakfast every day, and I always walk to school, because it is a nice way to take exercise. For lunch, I usually eat rice and fresh vegetables. They are good for my body. But some of my friends love eating fast food a lot. I think too much fast food is not healthy. I have fish and noodles for dinner. After dinner, I often take a walk. I have a healthy lifestyle and I feel energetic every day.
I have bread and milk for breakfast every day, and I always walk to school, because it is a nice way to take exercise. For lunch, I usually eat rice and fresh vegetables. They are good for my body. But some of my friends love eating fast food a lot. I think too much fast food is not healthy. I have fish and noodles for dinner. After dinner, I often take a walk. I have a healthy lifestyle and I feel energetic every day.
解析
本次写作要求使用第一人称、一般现在时介绍自身的日常作息与健康饮食习惯,可按照早中晚的时间顺序行文:1. 先介绍早餐的饮食搭配,说明自己步行上学的习惯,点明这类小习惯对健康有益;2. 接着介绍午餐的饮食安排,对比说明部分朋友喜爱快餐的情况,可简单点明过量食用快餐并不健康;3. 最后介绍晚餐的饮食和饭后散步的习惯,收尾点出自己的生活方式很健康。写作时使用七年级已学的基础词汇即可,无需逐字翻译提示内容,适当添加简单衔接词,控制总词数在80左右。
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