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现如今,世界上有很多珍稀动物处于濒危或易危状态,比如蓝鲸、熊猫等。我们应该拯救这些野生动物,创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。请以“The Animal We Should Protect”为题,写一篇80—100词的英语短文。
提示:
1.介绍你最喜欢的濒危或易危动物； 2.濒危或易危的原因； 3.保护它们的建议。
The Animal We Should Protect
现如今,世界上有很多珍稀动物处于濒危或易危状态,比如蓝鲸、熊猫等。我们应该拯救这些野生动物,创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。请以“The Animal We Should Protect”为题,写一篇80—100词的英语短文。
提示:
1.介绍你最喜欢的濒危或易危动物； 2.濒危或易危的原因； 3.保护它们的建议。
The Animal We Should Protect
The panda is my favourite animal. They are white and black. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feed on bamboo. They are very cute and lovely.
But they are in danger. First, pandas don't have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up nature parks with lots of bamboo so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is also a good idea to raise money for them. I hope there will be more pandas in the world.
But they are in danger. First, pandas don't have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up nature parks with lots of bamboo so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is also a good idea to raise money for them. I hope there will be more pandas in the world.
答案
The Animal We Should Protect
The panda is my favourite animal. They are white and black. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feed on bamboo. They are very cute and lovely.
But they are in danger. First, pandas don't have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up nature parks with lots of bamboo so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is also a good idea to raise money for them. I hope there will be more pandas in the world.
The panda is my favourite animal. They are white and black. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feed on bamboo. They are very cute and lovely.
But they are in danger. First, pandas don't have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up nature parks with lots of bamboo so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is also a good idea to raise money for them. I hope there will be more pandas in the world.
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以“The Animal We Should Protect”为题写80—100词的短文，需涵盖三个核心要点：1.介绍最喜欢的濒危或易危动物；2.说明该动物濒危的原因；3.提出保护建议。解题思路：先选定易表述的常见濒危动物（如熊猫），再依次围绕三个要点组织内容，确保语言简洁、逻辑清晰，词数符合要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1.开篇介绍选定的濒危动物（熊猫）的基本特征、习性与食性；2.说明其濒危的两点原因：繁殖率低、竹林面积缩小；3.提出具体保护建议：建立自然公园、筹集资金；4.收尾表达对动物未来的期望，确保内容紧扣要点，语言准确，词数达标。
【答案】The Animal We Should Protect
The panda is my favourite animal. They are white and black. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feed on bamboo. They are very cute and lovely.
But they are in danger. First, pandas don't have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up nature parks with lots of bamboo so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is also a good idea to raise money for them. I hope there will be more pandas in the world.
【知识点】英语短文写作、濒危动物话题表达、建议类句式
【点评】该短文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的英语写作范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：1.开篇介绍选定的濒危动物（熊猫）的基本特征、习性与食性；2.说明其濒危的两点原因：繁殖率低、竹林面积缩小；3.提出具体保护建议：建立自然公园、筹集资金；4.收尾表达对动物未来的期望，确保内容紧扣要点，语言准确，词数达标。
【答案】The Animal We Should Protect
The panda is my favourite animal. They are white and black. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feed on bamboo. They are very cute and lovely.
But they are in danger. First, pandas don't have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up nature parks with lots of bamboo so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is also a good idea to raise money for them. I hope there will be more pandas in the world.
【知识点】英语短文写作、濒危动物话题表达、建议类句式
【点评】该短文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的英语写作范文。
【难度系数】0.5
