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（二）书面表达。（共1小题，计15分）
76. 你校英语社团正在举行以“My Beautiful Hometown”为题的征文活动，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容提示：
(1)介绍家乡自然美景；
(2)表达对家乡的情感。
注意事项：
(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
(2)文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
(3)70词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Beautiful Hometown
My hometown is
76. 你校英语社团正在举行以“My Beautiful Hometown”为题的征文活动，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容提示：
(1)介绍家乡自然美景；
(2)表达对家乡的情感。
注意事项：
(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
(2)文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
(3)70词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Beautiful Hometown
My hometown is
a beautiful place with many enjoyable views. There is a long river through the city. In spring, both sides of the river are full of green trees and colourful flowers. There's also a beautiful forest in my hometown. It wears different colours in different seasons. The landscapes are wonderful, so you can see lots of lovely animals here. In my heart, my hometown is the best place in the world.
答案
76.【范文】
My Beautiful Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful place with many enjoyable views. There is a long river through the city. In spring, both sides of the river are full of green trees and colourful flowers. There's also a beautiful forest in my hometown. It wears different colours in different seasons. The landscapes are wonderful, so you can see lots of lovely animals here.
In my heart, my hometown is the best place in the world.
My Beautiful Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful place with many enjoyable views. There is a long river through the city. In spring, both sides of the river are full of green trees and colourful flowers. There's also a beautiful forest in my hometown. It wears different colours in different seasons. The landscapes are wonderful, so you can see lots of lovely animals here.
In my heart, my hometown is the best place in the world.
解析
【分析】
本次写作要求以“My Beautiful Hometown”为题投稿，需包含“介绍家乡自然美景”“表达对家乡的情感”两个核心要点，开头已给出，字数要求70词左右，且不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。解题思路：1. 承接开头总述家乡是拥有宜人景色的地方；2. 具体描绘自然美景：可选取河流、两岸的花草树木、森林及季节变化、可爱动物等元素；3. 最后抒发对家乡的喜爱之情，确保内容连贯通顺，符合字数要求，规避真实信息。
【解析】
先总述家乡的整体特点，再具体描述自然景观，最后表达对家乡的真挚情感，组织成符合要求的短文。
【答案】
My Beautiful Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful place with many enjoyable views. There is a long river through the city. In spring, both sides of the river are full of green trees and colourful flowers. There's also a beautiful forest in my hometown. It wears different colours in different seasons. The landscapes are wonderful, so you can see lots of lovely animals here.
In my heart, my hometown is the best place in the world.
【知识点】
英语短文写作；自然主题表达；情感抒发
【点评】
范文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有要求要点，自然美景的描述具体生动，情感真挚自然，语言简洁流畅，符合字数要求，未出现真实信息，是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本次写作要求以“My Beautiful Hometown”为题投稿，需包含“介绍家乡自然美景”“表达对家乡的情感”两个核心要点，开头已给出，字数要求70词左右，且不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。解题思路：1. 承接开头总述家乡是拥有宜人景色的地方；2. 具体描绘自然美景：可选取河流、两岸的花草树木、森林及季节变化、可爱动物等元素；3. 最后抒发对家乡的喜爱之情，确保内容连贯通顺，符合字数要求，规避真实信息。
【解析】
先总述家乡的整体特点，再具体描述自然景观，最后表达对家乡的真挚情感，组织成符合要求的短文。
【答案】
My Beautiful Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful place with many enjoyable views. There is a long river through the city. In spring, both sides of the river are full of green trees and colourful flowers. There's also a beautiful forest in my hometown. It wears different colours in different seasons. The landscapes are wonderful, so you can see lots of lovely animals here.
In my heart, my hometown is the best place in the world.
【知识点】
英语短文写作；自然主题表达；情感抒发
【点评】
范文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有要求要点，自然美景的描述具体生动，情感真挚自然，语言简洁流畅，符合字数要求，未出现真实信息，是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.5
