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九、实验班原创书面表达18分
假如你是李华,你的朋友Peter来信想了解你最喜爱的动物的基本情况。请你写一封信回复他,内容包括:
1.你最喜爱的动物的名称;2.它的长相;3.它爱吃的食物;4.它的习性;5.你对它的看法。
注意:1.词数70左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;4.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:playful爱玩的;clever聪明的
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your last letter. Now I'd like to tell you something about my favourite animal.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你的朋友Peter来信想了解你最喜爱的动物的基本情况。请你写一封信回复他,内容包括:
1.你最喜爱的动物的名称;2.它的长相;3.它爱吃的食物;4.它的习性;5.你对它的看法。
注意:1.词数70左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;4.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:playful爱玩的;clever聪明的
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your last letter. Now I'd like to tell you something about my favourite animal.
My favourite animal is the panda. It is black and white, with a round face and a fat body. It looks very cute. Pandas love eating bamboo leaves and shoots. They are playful and like climbing trees or rolling on the grass. They are usually gentle and quiet, spending most of their time eating and sleeping. I think pandas are not only lovely but also a symbol of peace. We should protect them because they are endangered.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
九、One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your last letter. Now I'd like to tell you
something about my favourite animal. My favourite animal is
the panda. It is black and white, with a round face and a fat
body. It looks very cute. Pandas love eating bamboo leaves
and shoots. They are playful and like climbing trees or rolling
on the grass. They are usually gentle and quiet, spending
most of their time eating and sleeping. I think pandas are not
only lovely but also a symbol of peace. We should protect them
because they are endangered.
现在分词作伴随状语
because引导原因状语从句
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your last letter. Now I'd like to tell you
something about my favourite animal. My favourite animal is
the panda. It is black and white, with a round face and a fat
body. It looks very cute. Pandas love eating bamboo leaves
and shoots. They are playful and like climbing trees or rolling
on the grass. They are usually gentle and quiet, spending
most of their time eating and sleeping. I think pandas are not
only lovely but also a symbol of peace. We should protect them
because they are endangered.
现在分词作伴随状语
because引导原因状语从句
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语书信类书面表达题，解题思路如下：1. 明确写作任务：给朋友Peter回信，介绍自己最喜爱的动物，需涵盖名称、长相、食物、习性、看法五个核心要点；2. 选择合适的写作对象：熊猫是学生熟悉且易展开描述的动物，符合大众认知，便于组织内容；3. 紧扣要点组织内容：对应每个要求的要点逐一展开，运用参考词汇（playful）丰富表达，同时注意语法结构的正确使用；4. 确保符合题目要求：控制词数70左右，保持书信格式，不出现真实信息，保证语句连贯。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 确定核心内容：以熊猫为写作对象，依次介绍：①名称（My favourite animal is the panda）；②长相（It is black and white, with a round face and a fat body. It looks very cute）；③食物（Pandas love eating bamboo leaves and shoots）；④习性（They are playful and like climbing trees or rolling on the grass. They are usually gentle and quiet, spending most of their time eating and sleeping，此处用现在分词spending作伴随状语）；⑤看法（I think pandas are not only lovely but also a symbol of peace. We should protect them because they are endangered，此处用because引导原因状语从句）；2. 衔接语句，使内容连贯自然；3. 检查是否符合所有要求：词数、格式、无真实信息等。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your last letter. Now I'd like to tell you something about my favourite animal. My favourite animal is the panda. It is black and white, with a round face and a fat body. It looks very cute. Pandas love eating bamboo leaves and shoots. They are playful and like climbing trees or rolling on the grass. They are usually gentle and quiet, spending most of their time eating and sleeping. I think pandas are not only lovely but also a symbol of peace. We should protect them because they are endangered.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
现在分词作伴随状语、原因状语从句、英语书信写作
【点评】
本题为英语书信类书面表达，要求清晰，涵盖动物介绍的核心要点，参考词汇降低了写作难度，既考查学生对动物相关词汇的运用能力，又巩固了基础语法，是一道贴合学生水平的写作练习题。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一道英语书信类书面表达题，解题思路如下：1. 明确写作任务：给朋友Peter回信，介绍自己最喜爱的动物，需涵盖名称、长相、食物、习性、看法五个核心要点；2. 选择合适的写作对象：熊猫是学生熟悉且易展开描述的动物，符合大众认知，便于组织内容；3. 紧扣要点组织内容：对应每个要求的要点逐一展开，运用参考词汇（playful）丰富表达，同时注意语法结构的正确使用；4. 确保符合题目要求：控制词数70左右，保持书信格式，不出现真实信息，保证语句连贯。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 确定核心内容：以熊猫为写作对象，依次介绍：①名称（My favourite animal is the panda）；②长相（It is black and white, with a round face and a fat body. It looks very cute）；③食物（Pandas love eating bamboo leaves and shoots）；④习性（They are playful and like climbing trees or rolling on the grass. They are usually gentle and quiet, spending most of their time eating and sleeping，此处用现在分词spending作伴随状语）；⑤看法（I think pandas are not only lovely but also a symbol of peace. We should protect them because they are endangered，此处用because引导原因状语从句）；2. 衔接语句，使内容连贯自然；3. 检查是否符合所有要求：词数、格式、无真实信息等。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your last letter. Now I'd like to tell you something about my favourite animal. My favourite animal is the panda. It is black and white, with a round face and a fat body. It looks very cute. Pandas love eating bamboo leaves and shoots. They are playful and like climbing trees or rolling on the grass. They are usually gentle and quiet, spending most of their time eating and sleeping. I think pandas are not only lovely but also a symbol of peace. We should protect them because they are endangered.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
现在分词作伴随状语、原因状语从句、英语书信写作
【点评】
本题为英语书信类书面表达，要求清晰，涵盖动物介绍的核心要点，参考词汇降低了写作难度，既考查学生对动物相关词汇的运用能力，又巩固了基础语法，是一道贴合学生水平的写作练习题。
【难度系数】
0.5
