十一、Writing. Nana打算暑假去北京旅行,下面是她的计划。假设你是Nana,请你根据思维导图内容,写一篇短文介绍一下自己的计划吧!(10分)
要求:1. 语句通顺,句意正确,格式正确;2. 不少于50个单词;3. 书写工整。

My travel plan
要求:1. 语句通顺,句意正确,格式正确;2. 不少于50个单词;3. 书写工整。
My travel plan
答案
【参考范文】 My travel plan
The summer holiday is coming. Next week I will go to Beijing. I will go there with my parents. We are going there by plane. On the first day, we are going to visit the Palace Museum. Then we will eat Beijing roast duck. On the second day, we are going to visit the Great Wall. We will have a good time in Beijing!
The summer holiday is coming. Next week I will go to Beijing. I will go there with my parents. We are going there by plane. On the first day, we are going to visit the Palace Museum. Then we will eat Beijing roast duck. On the second day, we are going to visit the Great Wall. We will have a good time in Beijing!
解析
【分析】
要完成这篇旅行计划短文,首先需明确题目要求:以Nana的身份,结合思维导图的所有信息(地点北京、时间下周、同行父母、交通飞机、活动故宫和长城),用英语写作,语句通顺、不少于50词。思考时,先梳理思维导图的核心要素,再用一般将来时(will/be going to)串联这些信息,适当补充合理细节(如吃北京烤鸭)丰富内容,最后收尾表达愉快心情,确保符合写作要求。
【解析】
1. 开头点明背景:The summer holiday is coming.(引出旅行计划的时间背景)
2. 说明核心要素:依次介绍旅行时间(next week)、地点(Beijing)、同行人(parents)、交通方式(by plane),用一般将来时表达:Next week I will go to Beijing. I will go there with my parents. We are going there by plane.
3. 具体活动:结合思维导图的活动,补充合理细节,分述两天的安排:On the first day, we are going to visit the Palace Museum. Then we will eat Beijing roast duck. On the second day, we are going to visit the Great Wall.
4. 结尾表达感受:We will have a good time in Beijing!
整体确保语句通顺,时态正确,字数达标。
【答案】
My travel plan
The summer holiday is coming. Next week I will go to Beijing. I will go there with my parents. We are going there by plane. On the first day, we are going to visit the Palace Museum. Then we will eat Beijing roast duck. On the second day, we are going to visit the Great Wall. We will have a good time in Beijing!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般将来时、英语句子组织
【点评】
范文紧扣思维导图所有要点,补充了符合北京特色的细节(吃北京烤鸭),时态运用正确,语句通顺连贯,结构清晰,符合题目对字数和格式的要求,是一篇优秀的旅行计划短文。
【难度系数】
0.3
要完成这篇旅行计划短文,首先需明确题目要求:以Nana的身份,结合思维导图的所有信息(地点北京、时间下周、同行父母、交通飞机、活动故宫和长城),用英语写作,语句通顺、不少于50词。思考时,先梳理思维导图的核心要素,再用一般将来时(will/be going to)串联这些信息,适当补充合理细节(如吃北京烤鸭)丰富内容,最后收尾表达愉快心情,确保符合写作要求。
【解析】
1. 开头点明背景:The summer holiday is coming.(引出旅行计划的时间背景)
2. 说明核心要素:依次介绍旅行时间(next week)、地点(Beijing)、同行人(parents)、交通方式(by plane),用一般将来时表达:Next week I will go to Beijing. I will go there with my parents. We are going there by plane.
3. 具体活动:结合思维导图的活动,补充合理细节,分述两天的安排:On the first day, we are going to visit the Palace Museum. Then we will eat Beijing roast duck. On the second day, we are going to visit the Great Wall.
4. 结尾表达感受:We will have a good time in Beijing!
整体确保语句通顺,时态正确,字数达标。
【答案】
My travel plan
The summer holiday is coming. Next week I will go to Beijing. I will go there with my parents. We are going there by plane. On the first day, we are going to visit the Palace Museum. Then we will eat Beijing roast duck. On the second day, we are going to visit the Great Wall. We will have a good time in Beijing!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般将来时、英语句子组织
【点评】
范文紧扣思维导图所有要点,补充了符合北京特色的细节(吃北京烤鸭),时态运用正确,语句通顺连贯,结构清晰,符合题目对字数和格式的要求,是一篇优秀的旅行计划短文。
【难度系数】
0.3
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