十二、书面表达。(10 分)
2025年6月6日,在太原卫星发射中心,中国成功发射卫星互联网低轨04组卫星。中国航天事业蓬勃发展,是我们的骄傲。假如你是某某小学五年级学生王平,打算加入航天航空社团,请根据表格信息自我介绍吧!

要求:1.语句通顺、语意连贯,可适当发挥;
2.书写规范,正确使用大小写及标点;
3.不少于5句话。
2025年6月6日,在太原卫星发射中心,中国成功发射卫星互联网低轨04组卫星。中国航天事业蓬勃发展,是我们的骄傲。假如你是某某小学五年级学生王平,打算加入航天航空社团,请根据表格信息自我介绍吧!
要求:1.语句通顺、语意连贯,可适当发挥;
2.书写规范,正确使用大小写及标点;
3.不少于5句话。
答案
参考范文:
Hello, my name is Wang Ping. I'm 11 years old. I'm a clever and hard-working boy. My birthday is on March 20th. My mother usually cooks noodles for me on my birthday. I often read books about science and space on Saturdays. On Sundays, I often play sports with my father. And I will study hard and do more exercise.
Hello, my name is Wang Ping. I'm 11 years old. I'm a clever and hard-working boy. My birthday is on March 20th. My mother usually cooks noodles for me on my birthday. I often read books about science and space on Saturdays. On Sundays, I often play sports with my father. And I will study hard and do more exercise.
解析
【分析】这是一道英语书面表达题,要求以王平的身份,结合给定的个人信息表格写自我介绍,用于加入航天航空社团。解题思路:1. 确定写作人称(第一人称I)和时态(一般现在时);2. 提取表格关键信息:姓名、年龄、个性、生日、周末活动,结合航天社团主题适当补充内容(如读太空相关书籍、表达加入意愿);3. 组织语句,确保通顺连贯,满足不少于5句、书写规范的要求。
【解析】写作时,先用“Hello, my name is Wang Ping.”开头介绍姓名,接着说明年龄“I'm 11 years old.”,再描述个性“I'm a clever and hard-working boy.”;然后介绍生日“My birthday is on March 20th.”,可补充生日相关小事(如妈妈做面条);之后结合周末活动,联系航天主题写周末常读太空相关书籍、做运动;最后表达想加入航天社团的愿望,使内容完整连贯,符合要求。
【答案】Hello, my name is Wang Ping. I'm 11 years old. I'm a clever and hard-working boy. My birthday is on March 20th. My mother usually cooks noodles for me on my birthday. I often read books about science and space on Saturdays. On Sundays, I often play sports with my father. And I will study hard and do more exercise.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般现在时、信息提取写作
【点评】本题结合航天主题设计自我介绍写作,既考查学生提取表格信息的能力,又要求结合主题适当拓展,符合小学五年级英语的学习要求,能有效锻炼学生的语言运用和逻辑组织能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时,先用“Hello, my name is Wang Ping.”开头介绍姓名,接着说明年龄“I'm 11 years old.”,再描述个性“I'm a clever and hard-working boy.”;然后介绍生日“My birthday is on March 20th.”,可补充生日相关小事(如妈妈做面条);之后结合周末活动,联系航天主题写周末常读太空相关书籍、做运动;最后表达想加入航天社团的愿望,使内容完整连贯,符合要求。
【答案】Hello, my name is Wang Ping. I'm 11 years old. I'm a clever and hard-working boy. My birthday is on March 20th. My mother usually cooks noodles for me on my birthday. I often read books about science and space on Saturdays. On Sundays, I often play sports with my father. And I will study hard and do more exercise.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般现在时、信息提取写作
【点评】本题结合航天主题设计自我介绍写作,既考查学生提取表格信息的能力,又要求结合主题适当拓展,符合小学五年级英语的学习要求,能有效锻炼学生的语言运用和逻辑组织能力。
【难度系数】0.6
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