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本单元的写作主题为“旅行”，要求学生根据所学的词汇和句型写一篇和旅行有关的书面表达。通常涉及的细分话题有：①介绍自己或他人的旅行经历（此时体裁是记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主）；②讲述自己或他人的旅行计划（此时是记叙文，时态以一般将来时为主）；③介绍某个城市或旅游景点（此时是说明文，时态以一般现在时为主）；④写一封电子邮件或信件，介绍和旅行有关的注意事项（此时体裁是应用文，时态以一般现在时为主）。
写作实例
中国有许多值得游览的地方，比如北京、上海、广州或者你的家乡。请你根据以下要点提示，为你的外国朋友推荐一个值得游览的地方。
要点提示：(1)推荐一个适合旅游的地点；(2)给出一些建议或者注意事项；
(3)邀请外国朋友来游览此地。
写作要求：(1)词数不少于 80；(2)必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
(3)意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
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审题指导
1. 体裁：说明文 2. 时态：以一般现在时为主 3. 人称：以第二、三人称为主
4. 必备词汇：①popular places 受欢迎的地方 ②suggest doing sth. 建议做某事 ③with a long history 拥有悠久历史 ④the Summer Palace 颐和园 ⑤the Great Wall 长城 ⑥the Forbidden City 故宫 ⑦learn about 了解；得知 ⑧Chinese culture 中国文化 ⑨had better do sth. 最好做某事 ⑩by subway 乘坐地铁 ⑪traffic jam 交通阻塞 ⑫one day 有一天 ⑬fall in love with... 爱上……
谋篇布局
mermaid
graph TD
A[推荐旅游地点] --＞ B[第一段：点明主题]
A --＞ C[第二段：详细介绍所推荐的地点]
A --＞ D[第三段：表达你的期望]
B --＞ E[There are many popular places in China and I suggest _______.]
C --＞ F[It's a beautiful place _______. ]
C --＞ G[If you come here, you can _______. You can also _______. ]
C --＞ H[You'd better travel _______ because _______. ]
D --＞ I[Maybe one day you can come here and _______. ]
D --＞ J[I think that _______. ]
佳作剖析
教材原文
P91 It's a beautiful place with a long history.
P85 I wanted to stay in the museum for a week!
P87 Maybe one day you can come here and enjoy the beauty yourself.
优秀范文
There are many popular places in China and I suggest visiting Beijing①.
It's a beautiful place with a long history. If you come here②, you can visit the Summer Palace and the Great Wall③. You can also go to the Forbidden City③ to learn about Chinese culture. It's so amazing that you'll want to stay there for a week! You'd better travel by subway because there is always traffic jam in Beijing②.
Maybe one day you can come here and enjoy the beauty yourself. I think that you'll fall in love with it②.
亮点评析
①点明要推荐的地方是北京。
②多种主从复合句（含条件状语从句、原因状语从句和宾语从句的句子）的使用，让文章更加流畅，结构更加丰富。
③列举了一些具体的景点，增加了文章的说服力。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①cover an area of... 占……的面积 ②around the world 全世界 ③above sea level 海平面以上 ④a symbol of... 一个……的象征 ⑤take photos 拍照 ⑥in the south of... 在……的南部 ⑦a group of 一群 ⑧far from 远离 ⑨go hiking 去远足 ⑩a natural wonder 自然奇观 ⑪When they arrived, they found the village was very peaceful. 当他们到达的时候，他们发现那个村庄很安静。 ⑫It was a meaningful and challenging experience for them. 它对于他们来说是一次有意义又充满挑战的经历。
本单元的写作主题为“旅行”，要求学生根据所学的词汇和句型写一篇和旅行有关的书面表达。通常涉及的细分话题有：①介绍自己或他人的旅行经历（此时体裁是记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主）；②讲述自己或他人的旅行计划（此时是记叙文，时态以一般将来时为主）；③介绍某个城市或旅游景点（此时是说明文，时态以一般现在时为主）；④写一封电子邮件或信件，介绍和旅行有关的注意事项（此时体裁是应用文，时态以一般现在时为主）。
写作实例
中国有许多值得游览的地方，比如北京、上海、广州或者你的家乡。请你根据以下要点提示，为你的外国朋友推荐一个值得游览的地方。
要点提示：(1)推荐一个适合旅游的地点；(2)给出一些建议或者注意事项；
(3)邀请外国朋友来游览此地。
写作要求：(1)词数不少于 80；(2)必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
(3)意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
_______
_______
_______
_______
_______
审题指导
1. 体裁：说明文 2. 时态：以一般现在时为主 3. 人称：以第二、三人称为主
4. 必备词汇：①popular places 受欢迎的地方 ②suggest doing sth. 建议做某事 ③with a long history 拥有悠久历史 ④the Summer Palace 颐和园 ⑤the Great Wall 长城 ⑥the Forbidden City 故宫 ⑦learn about 了解；得知 ⑧Chinese culture 中国文化 ⑨had better do sth. 最好做某事 ⑩by subway 乘坐地铁 ⑪traffic jam 交通阻塞 ⑫one day 有一天 ⑬fall in love with... 爱上……
谋篇布局
mermaid
graph TD
A[推荐旅游地点] --＞ B[第一段：点明主题]
A --＞ C[第二段：详细介绍所推荐的地点]
A --＞ D[第三段：表达你的期望]
B --＞ E[There are many popular places in China and I suggest _______.]
C --＞ F[It's a beautiful place _______. ]
C --＞ G[If you come here, you can _______. You can also _______. ]
C --＞ H[You'd better travel _______ because _______. ]
D --＞ I[Maybe one day you can come here and _______. ]
D --＞ J[I think that _______. ]
佳作剖析
教材原文
P91 It's a beautiful place with a long history.
P85 I wanted to stay in the museum for a week!
P87 Maybe one day you can come here and enjoy the beauty yourself.
优秀范文
There are many popular places in China and I suggest visiting Beijing①.
It's a beautiful place with a long history. If you come here②, you can visit the Summer Palace and the Great Wall③. You can also go to the Forbidden City③ to learn about Chinese culture. It's so amazing that you'll want to stay there for a week! You'd better travel by subway because there is always traffic jam in Beijing②.
Maybe one day you can come here and enjoy the beauty yourself. I think that you'll fall in love with it②.
亮点评析
①点明要推荐的地方是北京。
②多种主从复合句（含条件状语从句、原因状语从句和宾语从句的句子）的使用，让文章更加流畅，结构更加丰富。
③列举了一些具体的景点，增加了文章的说服力。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①cover an area of... 占……的面积 ②around the world 全世界 ③above sea level 海平面以上 ④a symbol of... 一个……的象征 ⑤take photos 拍照 ⑥in the south of... 在……的南部 ⑦a group of 一群 ⑧far from 远离 ⑨go hiking 去远足 ⑩a natural wonder 自然奇观 ⑪When they arrived, they found the village was very peaceful. 当他们到达的时候，他们发现那个村庄很安静。 ⑫It was a meaningful and challenging experience for them. 它对于他们来说是一次有意义又充满挑战的经历。
答案
There are many popular places in China and I suggest visiting Beijing①.
It's a beautiful place with a long history. If you come here②, you can visit the Summer Palace and the Great Wall③. You can also go to the Forbidden City③ to learn about Chinese culture. It's so amazing that you'll want to stay there for a week! You'd better travel by subway because there is always traffic jam in Beijing②.
Maybe one day you can come here and enjoy the beauty yourself. I think that you'll fall in love with it②.
It's a beautiful place with a long history. If you come here②, you can visit the Summer Palace and the Great Wall③. You can also go to the Forbidden City③ to learn about Chinese culture. It's so amazing that you'll want to stay there for a week! You'd better travel by subway because there is always traffic jam in Beijing②.
Maybe one day you can come here and enjoy the beauty yourself. I think that you'll fall in love with it②.
解析
【分析】
本题要求为外国朋友推荐中国的旅游地点，需采用三段式结构完成写作：第一段点明主题并推荐具体地点，第二段详细介绍该地点的特点、可参与的活动及旅行建议，第三段表达对朋友的期望。写作时要紧扣要点，结合给定词汇和句型，确保语言通顺、行文连贯，时态以一般现在时为主。
【解析】
按照三段式结构，结合要点提示与给定词汇完成写作：
1. 第一段：点明主题，用“suggest visiting Beijing”符合“suggest doing sth.”的搭配，明确推荐北京；
2. 第二段：介绍北京“with a long history”，列举颐和园、长城、故宫等景点，说明可了解中国文化，给出“travel by subway”的交通建议，原因是北京常有交通拥堵；
3. 第三段：表达期望，邀请朋友来欣赏美景，最后表达朋友会爱上北京的期待。
【答案】
There are many popular places in China and I suggest visiting Beijing.
It's a beautiful place with a long history. If you come here, you can visit the Summer Palace and the Great Wall. You can also go to the Forbidden City to learn about Chinese culture. It's so amazing that you'll want to stay there for a week! You'd better travel by subway because there is always traffic jam in Beijing.
Maybe one day you can come here and enjoy the beauty yourself. I think that you'll fall in love with it.
【知识点】
英语写作（说明文）；短语搭配；句型运用
【点评】
本文结构清晰，严格遵循三段式写作要求，涵盖所有要点：推荐地点、介绍景点、给出交通建议、表达期望。文中运用了“suggest doing sth.”“with a long history”“had better do sth.”等短语，以及条件状语从句、原因状语从句，语言流畅自然，符合英语写作规范，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求为外国朋友推荐中国的旅游地点，需采用三段式结构完成写作：第一段点明主题并推荐具体地点，第二段详细介绍该地点的特点、可参与的活动及旅行建议，第三段表达对朋友的期望。写作时要紧扣要点，结合给定词汇和句型，确保语言通顺、行文连贯，时态以一般现在时为主。
【解析】
按照三段式结构，结合要点提示与给定词汇完成写作：
1. 第一段：点明主题，用“suggest visiting Beijing”符合“suggest doing sth.”的搭配，明确推荐北京；
2. 第二段：介绍北京“with a long history”，列举颐和园、长城、故宫等景点，说明可了解中国文化，给出“travel by subway”的交通建议，原因是北京常有交通拥堵；
3. 第三段：表达期望，邀请朋友来欣赏美景，最后表达朋友会爱上北京的期待。
【答案】
There are many popular places in China and I suggest visiting Beijing.
It's a beautiful place with a long history. If you come here, you can visit the Summer Palace and the Great Wall. You can also go to the Forbidden City to learn about Chinese culture. It's so amazing that you'll want to stay there for a week! You'd better travel by subway because there is always traffic jam in Beijing.
Maybe one day you can come here and enjoy the beauty yourself. I think that you'll fall in love with it.
【知识点】
英语写作（说明文）；短语搭配；句型运用
【点评】
本文结构清晰，严格遵循三段式写作要求，涵盖所有要点：推荐地点、介绍景点、给出交通建议、表达期望。文中运用了“suggest doing sth.”“with a long history”“had better do sth.”等短语，以及条件状语从句、原因状语从句，语言流畅自然，符合英语写作规范，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
