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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D12
随着科技的发展,网络在我们的生活中越来越重要。假如你是李辉,你的朋友 Eric 询问你对网络的看法,请你以“Internet in our daily life”为话题,写一封回信。
内容包括:1.人们对网络的使用情况；
2.网络的好处；
3.希望人们合理使用网络。
注意:1.词数 80 以上,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数；
2.不出现真实校名和姓名；
3.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
The Internet is very important in our daily life.
Yours,
Li Hui
随着科技的发展,网络在我们的生活中越来越重要。假如你是李辉,你的朋友 Eric 询问你对网络的看法,请你以“Internet in our daily life”为话题,写一封回信。
内容包括:1.人们对网络的使用情况；
2.网络的好处；
3.希望人们合理使用网络。
注意:1.词数 80 以上,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数；
2.不出现真实校名和姓名；
3.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
The Internet is very important in our daily life.
Nowadays, people use it widely for work, study and entertainment. For example, we can search for information quickly and communicate with friends easily through the Internet. Also, we can learn many latest news at home and abroad by surfing the Internet.
The Internet has many advantages. It not only helps us learn new knowledge but also makes our life more convenient. We can watch online classes and buy things without going out. Some household appliances can work by themselves after being connected to the Internet. It's very convenient for us!
However, we should use the Internet properly. It is important to control our time online and avoid receiving bad information. I hope everyone can make good use of the Internet.
Yours,
Li Hui
答案
主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Eric,
The Internet is very important in our daily life. Nowadays, people use it widely for work, study and entertainment. For example, we can search for information quickly and communicate with friends easily through the Internet. Also, we can learn many latest news at home and abroad by surfing the Internet.
The Internet has many advantages. It not only helps us learn new knowledge but also makes our life more convenient. We can watch online classes and buy things without going out. Some household appliances can work by themselves after being connected to the Internet. It's very convenient for us!
However, we should use the Internet properly. It is important to control our time online and avoid receiving bad information. I hope everyone can make good use of the Internet.
Yours,
Li Hui
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Eric,
The Internet is very important in our daily life. Nowadays, the Internet has been widely used in people's work, study and daily entertainment. For instance, it enables us to search for information at lightning speed and stay in touch with friends easily. What's more, we can keep ourselves updated on the latest domestic and international news simply by surfing online.
The Internet has many advantages. Not only does it provide us with new knowledge, but it also makes our daily lives convenient. We can attend online courses and shop without stepping out of our homes. Even some household appliances can be operated automatically once connected to the Internet, bringing great convenience to our lives.
However, we should use the Internet properly. It is important to control our time online and avoid receiving bad information. I hope everyone can make good use of the Internet.
Yours,
Li Hui
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Eric,
The Internet is very important in our daily life. Nowadays, people use it widely for work, study and entertainment. For example, we can search for information quickly and communicate with friends easily through the Internet. Also, we can learn many latest news at home and abroad by surfing the Internet.
The Internet has many advantages. It not only helps us learn new knowledge but also makes our life more convenient. We can watch online classes and buy things without going out. Some household appliances can work by themselves after being connected to the Internet. It's very convenient for us!
However, we should use the Internet properly. It is important to control our time online and avoid receiving bad information. I hope everyone can make good use of the Internet.
Yours,
Li Hui
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Eric,
The Internet is very important in our daily life. Nowadays, the Internet has been widely used in people's work, study and daily entertainment. For instance, it enables us to search for information at lightning speed and stay in touch with friends easily. What's more, we can keep ourselves updated on the latest domestic and international news simply by surfing online.
The Internet has many advantages. Not only does it provide us with new knowledge, but it also makes our daily lives convenient. We can attend online courses and shop without stepping out of our homes. Even some household appliances can be operated automatically once connected to the Internet, bringing great convenience to our lives.
However, we should use the Internet properly. It is important to control our time online and avoid receiving bad information. I hope everyone can make good use of the Internet.
Yours,
Li Hui
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李辉的身份给Eric写一封回信，话题为“Internet in our daily life”，需完成三个核心写作任务：一是说明人们对网络的使用情况，二是阐述网络的好处，三是呼吁人们合理使用网络。写作时需结合已给的开头和结尾，补充细节使行文连贯，注意书信格式，词数需达80以上，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 第一段（对应开头后内容）：围绕“人们对网络的使用情况”展开，可举例说明网络在工作、学习、娱乐等场景的应用，如快速查信息、和朋友联系、获取国内外新闻等；
2. 第二段：阐述网络的好处，从学习（在线课程）、生活便利（网购、智能家电）等角度说明，体现网络带来的便捷；
3. 第三段：提出合理使用网络的建议，如控制上网时间、远离不良信息，最后表达对大家合理使用网络的期望。
写作时注意句式多样，用词准确，保持书信的正式得体，符合要求。
【答案】
基础版范文：
Dear Eric,
The Internet is very important in our daily life. Nowadays, people use it widely for work, study and entertainment. For example, we can search for information quickly and communicate with friends easily through the Internet. Also, we can learn many latest news at home and abroad by surfing the Internet.
The Internet has many advantages. It not only helps us learn new knowledge but also makes our life more convenient. We can watch online classes and buy things without going out. Some household appliances can work by themselves after being connected to the Internet. It's very convenient for us!
However, we should use the Internet properly. It is important to control our time online and avoid receiving bad information. I hope everyone can make good use of the Internet.
Yours,
Li Hui
进阶版范文：
Dear Eric,
The Internet is very important in our daily life. Nowadays, the Internet has been widely used in people's work, study and daily entertainment. For instance, it enables us to search for information at lightning speed and stay in touch with friends easily. What's more, we can keep ourselves updated on the latest domestic and international news simply by surfing online.
The Internet has many advantages. Not only does it provide us with new knowledge, but it also makes our daily lives convenient. We can attend online courses and shop without stepping out of our homes. Even some household appliances can be operated automatically once connected to the Internet, bringing great convenience to our lives.
However, we should use the Internet properly. It is important to control our time online and avoid receiving bad information. I hope everyone can make good use of the Internet.
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题作文（网络主题）
【点评】
本题为英语话题书信写作题，要求明确覆盖三个核心要点，注重语言的连贯性与得体性，考查学生的英语综合运用能力，是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以李辉的身份给Eric写一封回信，话题为“Internet in our daily life”，需完成三个核心写作任务：一是说明人们对网络的使用情况，二是阐述网络的好处，三是呼吁人们合理使用网络。写作时需结合已给的开头和结尾，补充细节使行文连贯，注意书信格式，词数需达80以上，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 第一段（对应开头后内容）：围绕“人们对网络的使用情况”展开，可举例说明网络在工作、学习、娱乐等场景的应用，如快速查信息、和朋友联系、获取国内外新闻等；
2. 第二段：阐述网络的好处，从学习（在线课程）、生活便利（网购、智能家电）等角度说明，体现网络带来的便捷；
3. 第三段：提出合理使用网络的建议，如控制上网时间、远离不良信息，最后表达对大家合理使用网络的期望。
写作时注意句式多样，用词准确，保持书信的正式得体，符合要求。
【答案】
基础版范文：
Dear Eric,
The Internet is very important in our daily life. Nowadays, people use it widely for work, study and entertainment. For example, we can search for information quickly and communicate with friends easily through the Internet. Also, we can learn many latest news at home and abroad by surfing the Internet.
The Internet has many advantages. It not only helps us learn new knowledge but also makes our life more convenient. We can watch online classes and buy things without going out. Some household appliances can work by themselves after being connected to the Internet. It's very convenient for us!
However, we should use the Internet properly. It is important to control our time online and avoid receiving bad information. I hope everyone can make good use of the Internet.
Yours,
Li Hui
进阶版范文：
Dear Eric,
The Internet is very important in our daily life. Nowadays, the Internet has been widely used in people's work, study and daily entertainment. For instance, it enables us to search for information at lightning speed and stay in touch with friends easily. What's more, we can keep ourselves updated on the latest domestic and international news simply by surfing online.
The Internet has many advantages. Not only does it provide us with new knowledge, but it also makes our daily lives convenient. We can attend online courses and shop without stepping out of our homes. Even some household appliances can be operated automatically once connected to the Internet, bringing great convenience to our lives.
However, we should use the Internet properly. It is important to control our time online and avoid receiving bad information. I hope everyone can make good use of the Internet.
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题作文（网络主题）
【点评】
本题为英语话题书信写作题，要求明确覆盖三个核心要点，注重语言的连贯性与得体性，考查学生的英语综合运用能力，是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
