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六 书面表达。（10分）
“英雄儿女各千秋。”在你心中，也一定有一位英雄。他（她）也许是奥运赛场上的运动健儿，也许是攻克难题的科学家，也许是感动大家的普通人，又或是你身边的平凡守护者。
某英文网站正在开展以“我心中的英雄”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你心中的英雄，讲述他/她的故事，并谈谈他/她对你的影响。
提示：1. Who is the hero in your heart? 2. What did he/she do? 3. What is his/her influence(影响) on you?
A hero in my heart
“英雄儿女各千秋。”在你心中，也一定有一位英雄。他（她）也许是奥运赛场上的运动健儿，也许是攻克难题的科学家，也许是感动大家的普通人，又或是你身边的平凡守护者。
某英文网站正在开展以“我心中的英雄”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你心中的英雄，讲述他/她的故事，并谈谈他/她对你的影响。
提示：1. Who is the hero in your heart? 2. What did he/she do? 3. What is his/her influence(影响) on you?
A hero in my heart
Everybody has a hero in his or her heart. My hero is my father, because he is always willing to help others. On a cold and snowy winter evening, my father came to pick me up. When we were walking across the road, an old lady fell down on the icy ground. There were many people passing by, but no one stopped to help her. However, my father ran to her and helped her to stand up without thinking. Unluckily, the old lady hurt her leg. My father sent her to the hospital at once. The old lady thanked him again and again.
What my father did makes me believe in love and trust. He sets a good example to me. I realize I should help people in need as much as possible.
答案
示例：
A hero in my heart
Everybody has a hero in his or her heart. My hero is my father, because he is always willing to help others. On a cold and snowy winter evening, my father came to pick me up. When we were walking across the road, an old lady fell down on the icy ground. There were many people passing by, but no one stopped to help her. However, my father ran to her and helped her to stand up without thinking. Unluckily, the old lady hurt her leg. My father sent her to the hospital at once. The old lady thanked him again and again.
What my father did makes me believe in love and trust. He sets a good example to me. I realize I should help people in need as much as possible.
A hero in my heart
Everybody has a hero in his or her heart. My hero is my father, because he is always willing to help others. On a cold and snowy winter evening, my father came to pick me up. When we were walking across the road, an old lady fell down on the icy ground. There were many people passing by, but no one stopped to help her. However, my father ran to her and helped her to stand up without thinking. Unluckily, the old lady hurt her leg. My father sent her to the hospital at once. The old lady thanked him again and again.
What my father did makes me believe in love and trust. He sets a good example to me. I realize I should help people in need as much as possible.
解析
【分析】本题要求以“我心中的英雄”为主题写英语短文，需涵盖三个核心要点：明确英雄身份、讲述英雄的具体事迹、阐述英雄对自己的影响。解题思路为：1. 选择贴近自身生活的英雄人物，便于构思具体事例；2. 围绕人物选取典型事件，清晰交代事件的时间、经过等细节，使叙事具体；3. 结合事件提炼感悟，说明英雄对自己的启发，确保内容紧扣主题。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 开篇点题，引出自己心中的英雄，说明选择的原因；2. 中间部分叙述具体事迹，需包含时间、场景、事件发展，突出英雄的品质；3. 结尾部分阐述英雄对自己的影响，结合事例表达感悟，确保语句通顺，要点齐全，符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】A hero in my heart
Everybody has a hero in his or her heart. My hero is my father, because he is always willing to help others. On a cold and snowy winter evening, my father came to pick me up. When we were walking across the road, an old lady fell down on the icy ground. There were many people passing by, but no one stopped to help her. However, my father ran to her and helped her to stand up without thinking. Unluckily, the old lady hurt her leg. My father sent her to the hospital at once. The old lady thanked him again and again.
What my father did makes me believe in love and trust. He sets a good example to me. I realize I should help people in need as much as possible.
【知识点】英语话题作文、叙事性英文写作
【点评】本题为英语话题写作题，主题贴近学生生活，既考查英语语言运用能力，又引导学生树立正确价值观，要求学生围绕要点清晰叙事、表达真情实感，难度适中，适合学生发挥。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 开篇点题，引出自己心中的英雄，说明选择的原因；2. 中间部分叙述具体事迹，需包含时间、场景、事件发展，突出英雄的品质；3. 结尾部分阐述英雄对自己的影响，结合事例表达感悟，确保语句通顺，要点齐全，符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】A hero in my heart
Everybody has a hero in his or her heart. My hero is my father, because he is always willing to help others. On a cold and snowy winter evening, my father came to pick me up. When we were walking across the road, an old lady fell down on the icy ground. There were many people passing by, but no one stopped to help her. However, my father ran to her and helped her to stand up without thinking. Unluckily, the old lady hurt her leg. My father sent her to the hospital at once. The old lady thanked him again and again.
What my father did makes me believe in love and trust. He sets a good example to me. I realize I should help people in need as much as possible.
【知识点】英语话题作文、叙事性英文写作
【点评】本题为英语话题写作题，主题贴近学生生活，既考查英语语言运用能力，又引导学生树立正确价值观，要求学生围绕要点清晰叙事、表达真情实感，难度适中，适合学生发挥。
【难度系数】0.6
