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十一、短文写作。
学校正在开展“寻找身边好少年”的活动，赵悦想要推荐好朋友张鹏。根据所提供的信息，帮助赵悦给班主任李老师写一封推荐信，介绍张鹏的兴趣爱好和良好习惯，并说说他在校园安全方面的优秀表现。可适当发挥，不少于8句。
Dear Mr Li,
I am Zhao Yue from Class 1, Grade 5. I would like to recommend (推荐) Zhang Peng for the Model Student Award.
Zhang Peng is a role model (榜样) for everyone. I think he should get the award.
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yue
学校正在开展“寻找身边好少年”的活动，赵悦想要推荐好朋友张鹏。根据所提供的信息，帮助赵悦给班主任李老师写一封推荐信，介绍张鹏的兴趣爱好和良好习惯，并说说他在校园安全方面的优秀表现。可适当发挥，不少于8句。
Dear Mr Li,
I am Zhao Yue from Class 1, Grade 5. I would like to recommend (推荐) Zhang Peng for the Model Student Award.
Zhang Peng is a role model (榜样) for everyone. I think he should get the award.
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yue
答案
示例: Dear Mr Li,
I am Zhao Yue from Class 1, Grade 5. I would like to recommend Zhang Peng for the Model Student Award. He has many hobbies. He loves reading books. He also loves playing football. He can paint very well. He has many good habits too. He does chores at home every day. He puts his school things in order every evening. In class, he listens to the teachers carefully and takes notes. He also follows safety rules and tells other students to keep safe at school.
Zhang Peng is a role model for everyone. I think he should get the award.
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yue
I am Zhao Yue from Class 1, Grade 5. I would like to recommend Zhang Peng for the Model Student Award. He has many hobbies. He loves reading books. He also loves playing football. He can paint very well. He has many good habits too. He does chores at home every day. He puts his school things in order every evening. In class, he listens to the teachers carefully and takes notes. He also follows safety rules and tells other students to keep safe at school.
Zhang Peng is a role model for everyone. I think he should get the award.
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yue
解析
【分析】本题要求写一封推荐信，需结合插图信息介绍张鹏的兴趣爱好、良好习惯，还要提及校园安全表现，不少于8句。解题思路：先承接书信开头，依次介绍张鹏的三项爱好（读书、踢足球、画画），再说明他的良好习惯（做家务、整理学习用品、认真听课记笔记），最后补充校园安全方面的表现，确保内容完整、句子数量达标，符合小学英语写作的要求。
【解析】按照书信格式，先承接开头，依次组织内容：He has many hobbies. He loves reading books. He also loves playing football. He can paint very well. He has many good habits too. He does chores at home every day. He puts his school things in order every evening. In class, he listens to the teachers carefully and takes notes. He also follows safety rules and tells other students to keep safe at school. 这样既结合了插图信息，又满足了题目要求的所有要点，句子数量足够，语言通顺。
【答案】Dear Mr Li,
I am Zhao Yue from Class 1, Grade 5. I would like to recommend Zhang Peng for the Model Student Award. He has many hobbies. He loves reading books. He also loves playing football. He can paint very well. He has many good habits too. He does chores at home every day. He puts his school things in order every evening. In class, he listens to the teachers carefully and takes notes. He also follows safety rules and tells other students to keep safe at school.
Zhang Peng is a role model for everyone. I think he should get the award.
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yue
【知识点】英语书信写作、兴趣爱好表达、好习惯描述
【点评】本题结合给定插图信息，紧扣推荐信写作要求，内容完整覆盖题目要点，语言符合小学阶段英语表达水平，是一道贴合实际应用的写作练习题。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照书信格式，先承接开头，依次组织内容：He has many hobbies. He loves reading books. He also loves playing football. He can paint very well. He has many good habits too. He does chores at home every day. He puts his school things in order every evening. In class, he listens to the teachers carefully and takes notes. He also follows safety rules and tells other students to keep safe at school. 这样既结合了插图信息，又满足了题目要求的所有要点，句子数量足够，语言通顺。
【答案】Dear Mr Li,
I am Zhao Yue from Class 1, Grade 5. I would like to recommend Zhang Peng for the Model Student Award. He has many hobbies. He loves reading books. He also loves playing football. He can paint very well. He has many good habits too. He does chores at home every day. He puts his school things in order every evening. In class, he listens to the teachers carefully and takes notes. He also follows safety rules and tells other students to keep safe at school.
Zhang Peng is a role model for everyone. I think he should get the award.
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yue
【知识点】英语书信写作、兴趣爱好表达、好习惯描述
【点评】本题结合给定插图信息，紧扣推荐信写作要求，内容完整覆盖题目要点，语言符合小学阶段英语表达水平，是一道贴合实际应用的写作练习题。
【难度系数】0.6
