写作专项提升
本单元我们学习了关于设定目标的单词和常用表达。通过本单元的学习,我们知道了设定目标的重要性,能用be going to来谈论未来的事情和计划,并能谈论如何针对自己设定的目标来提升自己。
写作思路

高分范文
Everyone wants to be better. I want to do better in school. To make it, I make some plans. I am go- ing to eat healthily. I’m going to exercise more. A good body makes me study well. I am going to listen carefully in class and finish my homework on time. I believe I can make it!
实战演练
“九层之台,起于累土”,大目标的实现都是从最基本的小事开始。假设你是李华,你打算向学校英文网站投稿,分享你的目标,描述你为实现自己的目标所做的努力。请你完成思维导图,并用英语写一篇短文。
要求:1.语法正确,语句通顺,单词拼写正确,书写规范;2.不少于5句话。

Everyone has his/her goal, big or small. As for me,
本单元我们学习了关于设定目标的单词和常用表达。通过本单元的学习,我们知道了设定目标的重要性,能用be going to来谈论未来的事情和计划,并能谈论如何针对自己设定的目标来提升自己。
写作思路
高分范文
Everyone wants to be better. I want to do better in school. To make it, I make some plans. I am go- ing to eat healthily. I’m going to exercise more. A good body makes me study well. I am going to listen carefully in class and finish my homework on time. I believe I can make it!
实战演练
“九层之台,起于累土”,大目标的实现都是从最基本的小事开始。假设你是李华,你打算向学校英文网站投稿,分享你的目标,描述你为实现自己的目标所做的努力。请你完成思维导图,并用英语写一篇短文。
要求:1.语法正确,语句通顺,单词拼写正确,书写规范;2.不少于5句话。
Everyone has his/her goal, big or small. As for me,
I want to get better at English.
To make it, I make some plans. I'm going to listen carefully in English class.
I'm going to read English books for 30 minutes every day.
I'm going to talk with my classmates in English.
I believe I can make it!
答案
写作专项提升
【参考答案】
get better at English
①listen carefully in English class
②read English books
③talk with my classmates in English
Everyone has his / her goal, big or small. As for me, I want to get better at English. To make it, I make some plans. I'm going to listen carefully in English class. I'm going to read English books for 30 minutes every day. I'm going to talk with my classmates in English. I believe I can make it!
【参考答案】
get better at English
①listen carefully in English class
②read English books
③talk with my classmates in English
Everyone has his / her goal, big or small. As for me, I want to get better at English. To make it, I make some plans. I'm going to listen carefully in English class. I'm going to read English books for 30 minutes every day. I'm going to talk with my classmates in English. I believe I can make it!
解析
【分析】
本题是英语写作题,要求以李华身份向学校英文网站投稿,分享自己的目标及实现计划。解题思路:1. 结合单元主题(设定目标)确定具体目标(如提升英语);2. 围绕目标,用be going to结构撰写3个以上具体可行的实现计划;3. 组织语句,确保语法正确、语句通顺,不少于5句,结尾表达实现目标的信心。
【解析】
写作需遵循要求:①开篇点明个人目标;②用be going to结构分述实现目标的具体计划;③结尾表达信心。具体内容参考:先说明目标是提升英语,再列举课堂认真听英语、每天读30分钟英语书、和同学用英语交流三个计划,最后表达信心,确保符合语法和字数要求。
【答案】
Everyone has his / her goal, big or small. As for me, I want to get better at English. To make it, I make some plans. I'm going to listen carefully in English class. I'm going to read English books for 30 minutes every day. I'm going to talk with my classmates in English. I believe I can make it!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、be going to的用法、目标类话题表达
【点评】
本题紧扣单元学习内容,考查学生运用be going to结构表达未来计划的能力,要求学生结合具体目标制定可行的行动方案,注重语言的实际运用,符合初中英语写作的训练要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语写作题,要求以李华身份向学校英文网站投稿,分享自己的目标及实现计划。解题思路:1. 结合单元主题(设定目标)确定具体目标(如提升英语);2. 围绕目标,用be going to结构撰写3个以上具体可行的实现计划;3. 组织语句,确保语法正确、语句通顺,不少于5句,结尾表达实现目标的信心。
【解析】
写作需遵循要求:①开篇点明个人目标;②用be going to结构分述实现目标的具体计划;③结尾表达信心。具体内容参考:先说明目标是提升英语,再列举课堂认真听英语、每天读30分钟英语书、和同学用英语交流三个计划,最后表达信心,确保符合语法和字数要求。
【答案】
Everyone has his / her goal, big or small. As for me, I want to get better at English. To make it, I make some plans. I'm going to listen carefully in English class. I'm going to read English books for 30 minutes every day. I'm going to talk with my classmates in English. I believe I can make it!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、be going to的用法、目标类话题表达
【点评】
本题紧扣单元学习内容,考查学生运用be going to结构表达未来计划的能力,要求学生结合具体目标制定可行的行动方案,注重语言的实际运用,符合初中英语写作的训练要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
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