第三部分 书面表达
题目:A Small Moment in My Summer Vacation
要求:
1.写一篇关于你暑假里的一个小片段。
2.内容可以是一件小确幸(开心、温暖、惊喜的小事),也可以是一次小意外(难过、失误、遇到麻烦的小事)。
3.写清楚事情的经过,以及你当时的感受。
4.语句通顺,意思连贯,不少于60词。
A Small Moment in My Summer Vacation
题目:A Small Moment in My Summer Vacation
要求:
1.写一篇关于你暑假里的一个小片段。
2.内容可以是一件小确幸(开心、温暖、惊喜的小事),也可以是一次小意外(难过、失误、遇到麻烦的小事)。
3.写清楚事情的经过,以及你当时的感受。
4.语句通顺,意思连贯,不少于60词。
A Small Moment in My Summer Vacation
答案
This summer vacation, I have a warm little moment that I still remember clearly now.
One very hot afternoon, my mother and I made a pot of iced sweet soup at home. We saw the old cleaner Grandpa Wang working under the sun in our community. I took a full cup of cold sweet soup to him. He smiled and thanked me happily, his tanned face looked bright at once. I felt so sweet and proud at that moment. I find that bringing warmth to others can make myself get even more happiness.
One very hot afternoon, my mother and I made a pot of iced sweet soup at home. We saw the old cleaner Grandpa Wang working under the sun in our community. I took a full cup of cold sweet soup to him. He smiled and thanked me happily, his tanned face looked bright at once. I felt so sweet and proud at that moment. I find that bringing warmth to others can make myself get even more happiness.
解析
这是一篇叙事类英语小作文,符合六年级写作要求的写作思路如下:
1. 开篇点题:直接引出要记录的暑假小事,交代事件的时间背景。
2. 主体叙事:用学过的简单词汇清晰写出事件的完整经过,选择贴近小学生生活的温暖小事,把事情的前因后果写清楚。
3. 收尾谈感受:写出自己当时的真实心情,点明这件小事给自己的启发,保证语句通顺连贯,字数满足不少于60词的要求。
1. 开篇点题:直接引出要记录的暑假小事,交代事件的时间背景。
2. 主体叙事:用学过的简单词汇清晰写出事件的完整经过,选择贴近小学生生活的温暖小事,把事情的前因后果写清楚。
3. 收尾谈感受:写出自己当时的真实心情,点明这件小事给自己的启发,保证语句通顺连贯,字数满足不少于60词的要求。
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