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2. 假设你是李华,你计划今年暑假参与台州轻轨交通(Taizhou Rail Transit)志愿者的公益活动给前来乘坐轻轨的外国人提供帮助。请你根据提示信息写一封自荐信,要介绍自己的志愿者经历及感受,以及接下来你的暑期公益行动计划。
要求:(1)短文必须包含表格中所有要点,可适当发挥;(2)80—100词;(3)短文开头和结尾部分已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua, and I am always willing to help others!
I hope I can be accepted into this meaningful activity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
要求:(1)短文必须包含表格中所有要点,可适当发挥;(2)80—100词;(3)短文开头和结尾部分已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua, and I am always willing to help others!
I hope I can be accepted into this meaningful activity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案
2. One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua, and I am always willing to help others!
I'm 13 years old. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. I often visit the old people and help clean up city parks on weekends. I am glad to learn how to take good care of the old people. I am very tired but happy. At the same time, helping others is also helping myself. My English is very good. I can help foreigners better understand the light rail and our Taizhou culture.
I hope I can be accepted into this meaningful activity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(86 words)
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua, and I am always willing to help others!
I'm 13 years old. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. I often visit the old people and help clean up city parks on weekends. I am glad to learn how to take good care of the old people. I am very tired but happy. At the same time, helping others is also helping myself. My English is very good. I can help foreigners better understand the light rail and our Taizhou culture.
I hope I can be accepted into this meaningful activity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(86 words)
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份写一封自荐信申请台州轻轨志愿者，需涵盖表格所有要点（个人信息：年龄、爱好；经历：周末看望老人、打扫城市公园；感受：学会照顾老人很开心），还要结合暑期轻轨志愿者计划，字数控制在80-100词，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：先补充个人基本信息对应表格第一部分；再叙述志愿者经历对应表格第二部分；接着表达参与志愿活动的感受对应表格第三部分；最后联系本次申请的轻轨志愿者活动说明自身优势，确保所有要点都包含，语言通顺符合要求。
【解析】
1. 先补充个人信息：介绍年龄（如13岁）和爱好（如喜欢打篮球），对应表格“Personal information”部分；
2. 叙述志愿者经历：说明周末会看望老人、帮助打扫城市公园，对应表格“Experience”部分；
3. 表达感受：写出参与志愿活动的感受，对应表格“Feelings”部分；
4. 结合申请主题：说明自己英语好，能帮助外国人了解轻轨和台州文化，贴合暑期公益计划；
5. 调整语句，确保总词数在80-100之间，符合书信格式。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua, and I am always willing to help others!
I'm 13 years old. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. I often visit the old people and help clean up city parks on weekends. I am glad to learn how to take good care of the old people. I am very tired but happy. At the same time, helping others is also helping myself. My English is very good. I can help foreigners better understand the light rail and our Taizhou culture.
I hope I can be accepted into this meaningful activity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作；提示性作文写作；要点整合表达
【点评】
本题为提示性书信写作题，要求学生整合给定表格要点并结合申请轻轨志愿者的主题完成写作，既考查学生对提示信息的提取运用能力，又考查语言组织表达能力，是初中英语常见写作题型，需学生准确涵盖所有要点并适当发挥贴合主题。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以李华的身份写一封自荐信申请台州轻轨志愿者，需涵盖表格所有要点（个人信息：年龄、爱好；经历：周末看望老人、打扫城市公园；感受：学会照顾老人很开心），还要结合暑期轻轨志愿者计划，字数控制在80-100词，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：先补充个人基本信息对应表格第一部分；再叙述志愿者经历对应表格第二部分；接着表达参与志愿活动的感受对应表格第三部分；最后联系本次申请的轻轨志愿者活动说明自身优势，确保所有要点都包含，语言通顺符合要求。
【解析】
1. 先补充个人信息：介绍年龄（如13岁）和爱好（如喜欢打篮球），对应表格“Personal information”部分；
2. 叙述志愿者经历：说明周末会看望老人、帮助打扫城市公园，对应表格“Experience”部分；
3. 表达感受：写出参与志愿活动的感受，对应表格“Feelings”部分；
4. 结合申请主题：说明自己英语好，能帮助外国人了解轻轨和台州文化，贴合暑期公益计划；
5. 调整语句，确保总词数在80-100之间，符合书信格式。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua, and I am always willing to help others!
I'm 13 years old. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. I often visit the old people and help clean up city parks on weekends. I am glad to learn how to take good care of the old people. I am very tired but happy. At the same time, helping others is also helping myself. My English is very good. I can help foreigners better understand the light rail and our Taizhou culture.
I hope I can be accepted into this meaningful activity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作；提示性作文写作；要点整合表达
【点评】
本题为提示性书信写作题，要求学生整合给定表格要点并结合申请轻轨志愿者的主题完成写作，既考查学生对提示信息的提取运用能力，又考查语言组织表达能力，是初中英语常见写作题型，需学生准确涵盖所有要点并适当发挥贴合主题。
【难度系数】
0.5
