十五、每个学校都有相应的规章制度,请根据提示,以“My school rules”为题,写一写你们学校的规
章制度。(5 分)
提示:1.按时到校,不迟到,不早退;2.见到老师主动问好;
3.校园里不得追逐打闹;4.不乱丢果皮纸屑;
5.上课认真听讲;6.课后按时完成作业。
要求:语句通顺,语法正确,不少于50个单词。
My school rules
章制度。(5 分)
提示:1.按时到校,不迟到,不早退;2.见到老师主动问好;
3.校园里不得追逐打闹;4.不乱丢果皮纸屑;
5.上课认真听讲;6.课后按时完成作业。
要求:语句通顺,语法正确,不少于50个单词。
My school rules
答案
My school rules
There are some rules in our school. We
must go to school on time. We shouldn't
arrive late or leave early. We must say hello to
the teachers when we meet them. We
shouldn't chase each other at school. We
shouldn't litter everywhere either. We should
listen to the teachers carefully in class and
finish our homework on time.
There are some rules in our school. We
must go to school on time. We shouldn't
arrive late or leave early. We must say hello to
the teachers when we meet them. We
shouldn't chase each other at school. We
shouldn't litter everywhere either. We should
listen to the teachers carefully in class and
finish our homework on time.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先先明确核心要求:需要完整覆盖题干给出的6条校规提示,语句通顺语法正确,字数不少于50词。首先我们可以采用最稳妥的总-分结构:第一步先写总起句,引出“我们学校有很多规章制度”的主题;第二步用情态动词must(表必须遵守的要求)、shouldn't(表禁止的行为)来逐一对应表述6条提示内容,把关联度高的上课听讲、完成作业两个学习类规则合并成一句话让行文更流畅;最后通读全文检查有没有遗漏要点、语法错误,确认字数达标即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇总起点题:用"There are some rules in our school."开门见山引出校规主题,符合写作逻辑。
2. 逐条对应提示内容表述规则:
① 对应“按时到校,不迟到,不早退”:写出We must go to school on time. We shouldn't arrive late or leave early.
② 对应“见到老师主动问好”:写出We must say hello to the teachers when we meet them.
③ 对应“校园里不得追逐打闹”:写出We shouldn't chase each other at school.
④ 对应“不乱丢果皮纸屑”:写出We shouldn't litter everywhere either.
⑤ 对应“上课认真听讲”和“课后按时完成作业”,将两个关联的学习要求合并,写出We should listen to the teachers carefully in class and finish our homework on time.
3. 最终串联后的全文所有提示要点全部覆盖,语法正确,语句连贯,总词数远超50,完全符合题目要求。
【答案】
My school rules
There are some rules in our school. We
must go to school on time. We shouldn't
arrive late or leave early. We must say hello to
the teachers when we meet them. We
shouldn't chase each other at school. We
shouldn't litter everywhere either. We should
listen to the teachers carefully in class and
finish our homework on time.
【知识点】
命题英语写作;情态动词用法;校园场景表达
【点评】
这篇是完全符合得分要求的满分范文,所有题干给出的提示要点没有遗漏,用情态动词准确区分了校规里的强制要求和禁止行为,行文流畅自然,没有语法错误,字数达标。同学们写这类提示类作文时,采用总-分结构逐一对应提示点,就能轻松避免漏点丢分的问题。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题首先先明确核心要求:需要完整覆盖题干给出的6条校规提示,语句通顺语法正确,字数不少于50词。首先我们可以采用最稳妥的总-分结构:第一步先写总起句,引出“我们学校有很多规章制度”的主题;第二步用情态动词must(表必须遵守的要求)、shouldn't(表禁止的行为)来逐一对应表述6条提示内容,把关联度高的上课听讲、完成作业两个学习类规则合并成一句话让行文更流畅;最后通读全文检查有没有遗漏要点、语法错误,确认字数达标即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇总起点题:用"There are some rules in our school."开门见山引出校规主题,符合写作逻辑。
2. 逐条对应提示内容表述规则:
① 对应“按时到校,不迟到,不早退”:写出We must go to school on time. We shouldn't arrive late or leave early.
② 对应“见到老师主动问好”:写出We must say hello to the teachers when we meet them.
③ 对应“校园里不得追逐打闹”:写出We shouldn't chase each other at school.
④ 对应“不乱丢果皮纸屑”:写出We shouldn't litter everywhere either.
⑤ 对应“上课认真听讲”和“课后按时完成作业”,将两个关联的学习要求合并,写出We should listen to the teachers carefully in class and finish our homework on time.
3. 最终串联后的全文所有提示要点全部覆盖,语法正确,语句连贯,总词数远超50,完全符合题目要求。
【答案】
My school rules
There are some rules in our school. We
must go to school on time. We shouldn't
arrive late or leave early. We must say hello to
the teachers when we meet them. We
shouldn't chase each other at school. We
shouldn't litter everywhere either. We should
listen to the teachers carefully in class and
finish our homework on time.
【知识点】
命题英语写作;情态动词用法;校园场景表达
【点评】
这篇是完全符合得分要求的满分范文,所有题干给出的提示要点没有遗漏,用情态动词准确区分了校规里的强制要求和禁止行为,行文流畅自然,没有语法错误,字数达标。同学们写这类提示类作文时,采用总-分结构逐一对应提示点,就能轻松避免漏点丢分的问题。
【难度系数】
0.7
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