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(2025·吉林二模)成长离不开改变。在过去的三年里，你一定发生了许多变化，这些变化使你成为一个更好的人。请以“Changes Make Me a Better Person”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在性格、学习和爱好方面的变化。写作要求：
1. 根据题目并结合自己的真实生活体验写作，可适当发挥；
2. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数90—100。
1. 根据题目并结合自己的真实生活体验写作，可适当发挥；
2. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数90—100。
Changes Make Me a Better Person
I've changed a lot in the past three years. Changes make me happy and confident.
I've changed a lot in the past three years. Changes make me happy and confident.
First of all, I'm more outgoing than before. I used to be shy and feel lonely, but now I'm active in all kinds of after-school activities and I have many good friends. Besides, I didn't use to be interested in my studies, so I often failed the exams. However, I take my schoolwork seriously and make great progress now. More importantly, I used to hate sports and housework, but now I'm good at running and swimming. And I love cooking, too. As a result, I get on well with my parents.
Progress is impossible without changes. It is changes that make me a better person. So it's never too late to make a change.
答案
One possible version:
Changes Make Me a Better Person
I've changed a lot in the past three years. Changes make me happy and confident.
First of all, I'm more outgoing than before. I used to be shy and feel lonely, but now I'm active in all kinds of after-school activities and I have many good friends. Besides, I didn't use to be interested in my studies, so I often failed the exams. However, I take my schoolwork seriously and make great progress now. More importantly, I used to hate sports and housework, but now I'm good at running and swimming. And I love cooking, too. As a result, I get on well with my parents. Progress is impossible without changes. It is changes that make me a better person. So it's never too late to make a change.
思路梳理【总体分析】
①体裁:记叙文;②时态:一般过去时和一般现在时;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,介绍变化带来的积极影响;第二步,描述性格、学习、爱好的具体变化;第三步,升华主题。
Changes Make Me a Better Person
I've changed a lot in the past three years. Changes make me happy and confident.
First of all, I'm more outgoing than before. I used to be shy and feel lonely, but now I'm active in all kinds of after-school activities and I have many good friends. Besides, I didn't use to be interested in my studies, so I often failed the exams. However, I take my schoolwork seriously and make great progress now. More importantly, I used to hate sports and housework, but now I'm good at running and swimming. And I love cooking, too. As a result, I get on well with my parents. Progress is impossible without changes. It is changes that make me a better person. So it's never too late to make a change.
思路梳理【总体分析】
①体裁:记叙文;②时态:一般过去时和一般现在时;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,介绍变化带来的积极影响;第二步,描述性格、学习、爱好的具体变化;第三步,升华主题。
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题写作题，体裁为记叙文，要求以“Changes Make Me a Better Person”为题，结合自身真实生活体验，从性格、学习、爱好三方面阐述成长变化，词数控制在90-100，需运用一般过去时（描述过去状态）与一般现在时（描述现在变化）的对比，写作时需先总述变化的积极影响，再分点具体说明三个维度的变化，最后升华主题，确保不遗漏要点，语言流畅规范。
【解析】
写作遵循以下步骤：1. 开篇总起：点明过去三年自身发生诸多变化，变化让自己成为更好的人；2. 分述具体变化：①性格：从害羞内向变得外向，积极参与课外活动，结交好友；②学习：从对学习不感兴趣、考试失利，转变为认真对待学业，取得进步；③爱好：从讨厌运动和家务，变为擅长跑步、游泳，热爱做饭，与父母相处融洽；3. 结尾升华：强调变化的重要性，点明成长离不开改变，鼓励勇于做出改变。需注意控制词数，运用used to与now的对比句式，保证语言通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
Changes Make Me a Better Person
I've changed a lot in the past three years. Changes make me happy and confident.
First of all, I'm more outgoing than before. I used to be shy and feel lonely, but now I'm active in all kinds of after-school activities and I have many good friends. Besides, I didn't use to be interested in my studies, so I often failed the exams. However, I take my schoolwork seriously and make great progress now. More importantly, I used to hate sports and housework, but now I'm good at running and swimming. And I love cooking, too. As a result, I get on well with my parents. Progress is impossible without changes. It is changes that make me a better person. So it's never too late to make a change.
【知识点】
英语话题作文（成长变化类），英语记叙文写作，英语时态运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，围绕性格、学习、爱好三个维度展开，运用对比手法清晰呈现自身变化，结构完整，语言流畅，符合词数要求，准确表达了成长离不开改变的主题，是一篇优秀的英语写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语话题写作题，体裁为记叙文，要求以“Changes Make Me a Better Person”为题，结合自身真实生活体验，从性格、学习、爱好三方面阐述成长变化，词数控制在90-100，需运用一般过去时（描述过去状态）与一般现在时（描述现在变化）的对比，写作时需先总述变化的积极影响，再分点具体说明三个维度的变化，最后升华主题，确保不遗漏要点，语言流畅规范。
【解析】
写作遵循以下步骤：1. 开篇总起：点明过去三年自身发生诸多变化，变化让自己成为更好的人；2. 分述具体变化：①性格：从害羞内向变得外向，积极参与课外活动，结交好友；②学习：从对学习不感兴趣、考试失利，转变为认真对待学业，取得进步；③爱好：从讨厌运动和家务，变为擅长跑步、游泳，热爱做饭，与父母相处融洽；3. 结尾升华：强调变化的重要性，点明成长离不开改变，鼓励勇于做出改变。需注意控制词数，运用used to与now的对比句式，保证语言通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
Changes Make Me a Better Person
I've changed a lot in the past three years. Changes make me happy and confident.
First of all, I'm more outgoing than before. I used to be shy and feel lonely, but now I'm active in all kinds of after-school activities and I have many good friends. Besides, I didn't use to be interested in my studies, so I often failed the exams. However, I take my schoolwork seriously and make great progress now. More importantly, I used to hate sports and housework, but now I'm good at running and swimming. And I love cooking, too. As a result, I get on well with my parents. Progress is impossible without changes. It is changes that make me a better person. So it's never too late to make a change.
【知识点】
英语话题作文（成长变化类），英语记叙文写作，英语时态运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，围绕性格、学习、爱好三个维度展开，运用对比手法清晰呈现自身变化，结构完整，语言流畅，符合词数要求，准确表达了成长离不开改变的主题，是一篇优秀的英语写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
